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The Roommates – 2nd Dimension: Chapter 41
The Roommates – 2nd Dimension: Chapter 41
Previously~~~~~~~~~~~~
“It is. I love my, T. Always have, always will. You’ll find it Dana.”
Dana eyed Bette questioningly. “Will I?”
“I know you will. When you least expect it.”
Dana kicked at the grass underneath her feet and replied, “I hope you’re right.”
“I know I am. And in the meantime, let’s go out to this club you were talking about.”
“What? The Underground?”, asked Dana.
“Yeah, it should be fun. Tina and I can go with you and Alice. I’ll even help start the discussion with Al if you want me to.”
“I just might need that.”, said Dana.
“True. If nothing else, we’ll all get to have a good time. It’s 18 and over, right?”
“Yup. 18 and over.”, Dana repeated.
“So, when do you want to go?”, asked Bette.
“Hmmmm. Tomorrow night? I think Friday is Hip Hop night.”
“Well, Hip Hop night it is.”
Dana smiled. “Hey, you want to grab some dinner before we head to the club? We could all head to Tengu or something in the evening.”
“I don’t know. Tina has that volunteer tutoring program on Friday afternoon. By the time she gets in it’s kind of late. I’ll check with her though. Maybe we can work something out. I’ll let you know.”
“Great. Sounds good. I can’t believe I’m going to my first ***** club.”, said Dana.
“Me either. It should be a night to remember.”
Dana smiled and both women felt the impending excitement of a new experience nipping at their heels; promises of fresh memories and “Remember when?” tales looming on the horizon.
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While Bette and Dana were discussing Friday night plans for their ***** club de-virginization, Tina Kennard sat in a sunny classroom chatting with Kara about the effectiveness of shaving versus the Veet hair removal system. They were waiting on their professor to show up for “History of Film”, their last class of the day, when David sauntered into the room. His signature Tommy jeans were torn at the knees and his naturally dark-brown eyes glowed an electric blue under the tint of his colored contacts as he sat down behind Tina and gave her a knowing look.
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(59 votes, average: 3.63 out of 5)
OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!! Well I will forgive you for disappearing if you promise a chapter like this on your return. So Hot and so beautiful….thanks
Phew that was so HOT. Man Tina is a freak. Every time I read a story where either Bette or Tina tell each other to sit on their face I think of TP2.com. When R.Kelly says now quick before we get to 13 set it on my Face. Brings back wonderful memories. Going to go put that cd on right now. Keep it going.
You never fail to amaze me with each new update. I am glad that Tina and Bette can mix pleasure and what is happening in their daily life.My one question is if the more people know at school will it be okay for them still to be roomates.Yes I know its fiction but I am curious.I wish I could read this story everyday.
Oh my that was certainly something wasn’t it? Woo. Got to have more, and soon.
holy god. that was tongue tying girl. and now i have to go to church with that in my head. what is the point of going, right? your gone forever and then bring us that. k i can handle that. but having you post more often would be good also.;) thanks, well always be here for you.
After my heart being devastated by the new sides, this story and your writing have brought back the hope of a happy TiBette. Thanks MTS. If anything, keep on writing…that’s all I ask. I’ll take your version instead of IC’s. :-)
Excellent chapter! I think it has to be one of your best. I wonder how Tina’ parents would react? And the obvious focus of this chapter ;) – excellent – yet again! I’ve missed this fic. It’s good to have you back. Keep it up :D
Damn so fucking hot and sexy. They are so amazing to each other, love it. Please post soon, thanks!
“I kind of got a little distracted.” That’s the understatement of the year!! LOL Great chapter, MTS! I’m glad that Tina was able to tell David and Kara. She needs all of the support she can get. Thanks for the beautiful expression of Bette and Tina’s love. :)
Damn! that was HOT and wet hehe really great chapter! now i wonder when will Tina parents find out ?? is that the bad thing that Bette’s grandfather came to warn her ?? Post soon !.
You sure know how to make a girl’s toe’s curl ;) the passion in your story is really special, thank you for posting – you are missed when you are not here :)
PHEW! 11 pages but oh sooo worth it… love this story dont always comment but its one of my favorites and that chapter was worth waiting for ..lol ok in need of air now must go!
WOOHOO! That was so very HOT OMG! Hey MTS we Missed your Wonderful Story it’s bee awhile Thank Gosh your Back we still here reading I Love it Please continue we been missed your Story Thanks.
o.k, I’ve always been kinda afraid to use word “HOT” in my comment but can’t cope this time.. that was HOT! also your writing is much more than that and that’s why I love this story *2nd word I never use*
David doesn’t seem the type to keep his mouth shut, ‘girlfriend’, and Homey don’t play that!
I give this chapter “Three snaps in Z formation, the Zorro snap!”
LOL Tech….I feel u!!! I dont see him keeping this to himself.
Hot is not the word for this chapter….what used to be my monitor is a sizzled mess…oh wait….thats me sizzling!! -_-
Tina is a FREAK-A-LEEK!! I love when she tells Bette to sit on her face!!
Oy, so fucking hot!
She’s a very kinky girl
The kind you don’t take home to mother…
She’s a super freak, super freak
She’s super-freaky, yow
“I’m Tina Kennard, b****!”
Ha ha ha ha ha…I’m gonna go lay down now…
great post, it was worth the wait. can’t wait for the next one. honestly you and chicki are my fave authors.
so that was totally hot–nice job. so what’s going to happen now that people on campus are finding out about bette and tina. i gotta think that there si someone from one of their homes who is going find out and then watch out b/c Melvin and the kennards will be in the know. post soon…..
OMFG MTS that was soooo HOT. love this chapter. your story rocks. how will tina react to all the attention.
This one was well worth the wait!!! I agree with Seahurst and TB Saver in saying that the disappearance is okay as long as you give chapters like this one. Very hot.
MoreThanSatisfied………
Oh my GAWWWWWWWD! The love making in this chapter is oh so intense I just had to come out from “lurking” to leave my 2 cents! Personally for me after reading a fic and find them to border on the too graphic in the you know what department *smile *I usually end up stop reading the story all together simply because in my humblest opinion many a time the ooh…ahhhhhhh.. stuff becomes tiring in that it all becomes less engaging from the reading experience standpoint it’s like you cannot find the difference from one story to the other and this takes away the fun and robs me of an enjoyable read and then again that’s just me. But goodness me the way you pen down how these two love each other is just simply beautiful in that a reader can feel the deep connection these two characters share with one another as they pleasure each other. As I read on I find myself truly sinking in deeper and deeper into their world…. into this story…. into your writing style…. and mostly the respect you give to the characters in your story! Up till this point I have totally enjoyed the ride it has been one continuous delightful read!
Whoa…. This chapter is one incredible read and the fact that I read it in the office LOL does not the least bit help the… ahem! ahem! … effect reading the story have on me *sly smile * Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with the rest of us!
K
That was so perfect and SO hot. Glad T’s friends were ok with things. Love this so much.
After a month long without your fan-fics (I was on holiday!!) and I get stumped with this brilliant piece…damn girl…any hotter and I’d be goo-ey all IN the pavement cracks!!! lol
A little distracted? I think we all got very distracted and sucked into your world of amazing hotness!! God that was so good. And to think I’m starting college now.. first day of classes tomorrow- I know where my mind is guna be. Thanks :) Can’t wait for more
OMG…. yes they need to keep trying… getting closer and closer…. great chapter MTS… love this… please continue
Just what I needed!!
That was fucking HOTT!!!! I love it…… “A trickle of sweat slid down between her breasts and these caramel mounds bounced with each movement” what a nice mental image….i think i’ll take it to bed with me…lol
11 wonderful pages of sexual goodness. YAY! I can safely say I’m going to need a cold shower. Good job, as always!
great post!!!!!!!!! don’t stay gone that long agian!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
excellent chapter.