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    A crush, a meeting then love?? – Chapter 53

    Story written on August 29, 2005 by Lauren25.
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    Bette meet Dana… and …Alice… Bette give Tina her present.

    Chapter 53

     

    Later that night:

    Bette and Tina just got inside their apartment. It was nine o’clock. Still early, so they decided to go and rent a movie and order some take out. It was rental store right around the corner from their apartment.

    “Why don’t you take a shower? I’ll go and rent a movie and buy the food.

    “Are you sure?” Tina asks.

    “Positive, you take a hot shower, I’ll take care of the rest.” Bette replies.

    Tina leans in for a kiss. Bette does too.

    Bette leaves. She takes the car down to the video store. She searches the shelves for a movie. While she searched, she called the Planet to order food.

    Suddenly she feel a hand on her shoulder.

    “Bette, hi.” The person says.

    “Dana, hi.” Bette says and give Dana a hug.

    “I haven’t seen you in ages, how have you been?” Dana asks.

    “I’ve been okay, just got home from Raleigh.” Bette says.

    “Raleigh? Didn’t you have a tournament in Hartford?” Dana asks.

    “Yeah I did Tina’s mother died, so we’ve been there this last week.” Bette replies.

    “Oh no, how is she?” Dana asks.

    “She’s fine. I’m just glad she got to talk to her mother before she died.” Bette says.

    “I’ve missed you at the club lately. When are you coming back?” Dana asks.

    “I’ll be there tomorrow. I have to train for the next tournament, which is in two weeks.” Bette replies.

    “Ok, great, let’s have lunch tomorrow.” Dana suggests.

    “Yes, I would love that.” Bette replies just as Alice comes out from one of the shelves in the back.

    “Hey, Dane, I found it.” Alice lets out, but stops dead in her tracks. She looks at Dana and then at Bette nervously.

    “Bette Hi, how are you?” She asks.

    “Hi, Alice, I’m fine, how are you?” Bette asks.

    “Great.” Alice replies. “So how is Tina?” Alice asks, not knowing what had happened.

    “She called you five days ago, but she only got your voice mail. Have you checked it?” Bette asks looking seriously at Alice.

    “Yeah, I checked it, yesterday. I’ve been really busy, with the magazine.” Alice says. “What did she want?” Alice asks curiously.

    “She needed a friend. Her mother died.” Bette lets out. Alice‘s face suddenly turns pale. Her eyes saddens.

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    1. ok i love Bette but drama section???? all the drama is not enough?..lol..why not a comedy movie?..lol..kidding..i hope that album will be a lot of B&Ts photo family soon they deserve and they deserve some tranquillity and happy moments i cant take Tina crying anymore..amazing chapter Lauren as always i cant get enough of your story iam an addicted..post soon thanks :o)

    7. Ah, Lauren, reading your two last chapters, something appears to me : do you realize how much you really created all a world of characters around our favorite lovebirds ? But yes : Sarah, Lauren, Chris, Jack, Jessie, Bette’s mother… And then you wonderfully placed some of our dear good old characters like Lara, Dana, Alice…
      All this work with a very mastered balance, for our daily pleasure. Thank you SO much, Lauren, you’re great !!

      I loved the way you show Tina’s father’s reaction : it was truly realistic. Just the right middle between a sincere wish to understand and accept her daughter’s life and, of course, the weight of all these old prejudices that put a brake on Jack’s momentum.
      Nevertheless, he makes a big work here and no doubt he will do his best to welcome Bette the next time.
      Above all after having been obviously touched by the “fairytale” – as he called it – of Tina and Bette’s meeting story. How could be see a “sin” behind this ?

      In this chapter, once more you excelled depicting life’s simple details, surrounded by true love and tenderness… That’s something for which I always have a special weakness – even being a drama passionate too ! I feel this touch of quiet happiness really beautiful…

      And finally : what a marvellous gift’s idea from our sensitive Bette ! A family album : simply a gift to remember for a lifetime… What a symbol for Tina, right after having found her family again – and right before to begin her own family with her soon-to-be-wife…
      That was a brilliant and beautiful idea, Lauren, really. I loved it !!

    13. Finally got caught up with the story. Its too bad about Tina’s mom, but seems her dad may be coming around. I almost thought you forgot about Jessie, I know she’ll somehow get worked into there life just have a feeling. The loss and sadness is all a part of life, but could we a little bit of lovin from these two, pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.

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