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    Coming Back – Chapter 11


    Previously



     

    Shane : I’m in love with you.


    (a second of silence)


    Marina : (surprised and upset) WHAT DID YOU JUST SAY ?

     

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    JENNY’S ROOM HOSPITAL – EVENING


     

    Shane stay stunned, she never thought that someone, especially Marina, would hear her.


    *****!! Congratulations Shane you’re in real ***** now!


    Marina : (upset) I repeat WHAT the ***** did you just say ?


    Shane closes her eyes, she knows that she’ll be good for a ride with that. She turns and looks at Marina with a challenge look.


    Shane : It’s not of your business.

    Marina : Actually yes.. I think it is.

    Shane : No it’s not.

    Marina : No, no, no, no.. you don’t understand I think. I heard what you just said and I have to tell you that whatever you think you feel for Jenny is a pure lie.

    Shane : NO it’s..

    Marina : Let me finish! It’s a pure lie because you’re a ***** liar, a god dawm liar because you always play the emotionless person, now that you have someone, you lie to this person pretending you’re in love with her, but you’re not. Now that Jenny’s back with me, you pretend to be happy for her and I, but you’re not. You lie about you’re own life.. You tell people you’re happy for them but at the first occasion you have, you try to ruin their lives. Bring lives down like yours is. Your life is a freakin’ whole mess and you want people to live the same things because you’re ***** jealous of their dawm christ lives. You better go back to you’re old life, that way we’ll never see you again, that way you’ll get what you deserve.. a ***** crappy life. And you want to know what you’re a ***** moron if you think one day Jenny will be yours she’ll never be.


    On these words, Shane the eyes full of tears runs out of Jenny’s room.


    Shane : You don’t understand


    Shane runs out the hospital and goes in her truck. She’s crying so much that she can barely breathe. She starts her truck, but she’s still unable to drive because her eyes are still full of tears. After a while, she finally leave the hospital parking. She’s driving to her home.

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    Comments

    1. NOoooooo, NOoooooooo!Jenny Please Come Back to me.. This just can’t be the end. Jenny loves Marina so much, she has gone through too much to just up and leave Marina like this.CC, dear I’m running out of “PUFFS”. Can you help a sista out here? Marvelous chapter but how could it be anything else when you’re writing it. See you soon,I hope…..

    2. Sorry about having to place two comments but I accidently hit the wrong button. I absolutely loved Marina’s reaction to Shane’s confession of love to Jenny. Thank You so much for this wonderful story.

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