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I’ve Got You Under My Skin – Chapter 6
Previously . . .
Tina hands the piece of paper to Bette.
Tina: “Can you read it okay? I can’t even see what I am writing.”
Bette: “No, it’s fine. So it’s TeeKay71@csj.org?”
Tina: “Yeah, it’s my initials. T for Tina and K for Kennard. My family and friends use to call me ‘TK’ or ‘Tee’ for short.”
Bette: “Great, I will send you the link to the web site and I will give you a call tomorrow with more information.”
Tina: “Thanks for having us all over tonight. I had a really good time.”
Bette: “Well, it’s nice to finally meet you face to face.”
Tina: “Yeah, I am looking forward to actually getting to see you the next time we meet.
Thanks again for asking me to the show on Wednesday. It sounds really nice.”
Bette: “Well . . . goodnight.”
Tina: “Goodnight.”
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I’ve Got You Under My Skin – Chapter 6
At Tina’s Condo
Radio: “The time now is 6:41 and it’s time for another traffic watch with Commander Dan up in the sky . . .”
Tina stirs as the radio summons her from a deep sleep. She can’t believe it is morning already. It feels as if she just went to sleep. As she lays in her bed, she is slowly waking up reflecting back on the events of yesterday. She can’t believe that in a matter of 24 hours she has made some friends, went from having a horrible morning to having a fun filled evening, and to top it all off, she has a date on Wednesday with Bette. As she lays in her bed a smile forms on her face as she begins to think about Bette.
Tina: (to herself) “Bette . . . (smiling) . . . God Tina, maybe she is just being nice and this really isn’t a date. . . Don’t go there, just enjoy it for whatever it is.”
At Bette’s House
Alarm: Beep-beep-beep-beep
Bette: “***** . . .”
As the alarm sounds Bette is forcefully awaken from one of the most peaceful slumbers she has had in quite some time. She slowly starts to drift back to sleep, feeling relaxed and at peace with the world . . .
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(40 votes, average: 3.95 out of 5)
cool story portard, I just read all of your post, nice story. I got to say that this tina on this last post was mad as H***, i don’t know if i’m happy because she is fired up, but at the same time i feel sorry for bette, anyway thanks for the longer post, and you got your self a new reader and fan
Wow, Fabulous chapter..Hopefully Kit can fix everything.I will so miss this story come back to us sooooooon…THANKS
Most people would have been more gentle,Knowing both were at fault. Not our Bette, she just will say what she is thinking. The cow part was the crowning touch or was it the pig thing. She will learn at some point in her life that being nice is better than saying nasty things to people Pay back is a Bitch… thanks
Wow I could see that coming. Bette needs to worke on Tina a little bit and eventualy she will come around,I hope. Don’t keep us waiting to long I realy like this story.
Yup, I was kind of waiting for that to happen. I’m hoping that Tina can calm down and take the time to realize that Bette was truly sorry. She didn’t try to make excuses she totally admitted her less than ladylike behavior. I’m hoping they can work thru this and get to know each other. Post soon, please!
Oh fuck this is sad and hope they will find way back to each other. This is awesome and love it. Please post soon, thanks!
OUCH! That hadda hurt. Great chapter. Like your author’s name to.
come on now..tina’s bein kinda dramatic bout sum words!! granted she is kinda vunerable…come portard…lets fix em!!
payback is sure a bitch – erm guess bette deserves that and tina shud realise that ppl are not perfect – and bette is being sincere when apologising for the whole thing. however, i can understand why tina was on the warpath being worried for her friends etc but i am sure they find their way to each other again ;) – love ur story and u take care :D hve a nice weekend cant wait for the next post. erm, bette shuld learnt to eat humble pie !
I just caught up with your story. You have an excellent beginning with these two. I can’t believe this is your first time at writing, because it sounds like you have been doing this for a long time. Great job! I will definitely keep reading this one. Kiitos (that’s thank you in Finnish).
please post again! I didn’t think tina had it in her nature to be that mean!
Oh, come on, Tina get back out of the car, and go back and talk to Bette. She was having a bad day when you bumped into her, and you well you just have a lot of shit going on, but Bette will make you feel better. Great story, love how Kit keeps threatening Bette, and Bette ever the romantic, getting dogwood that a hard flower to come by in California.
jesus. i mean bette had a fit but dayum tina is right there with her. you say you didnt want us hanging welll you are girl. this is worse than not knowing who it would be when they met. tina needs to take a chill pill and go and apologize. maybe bette needs to talk to kit and have her talk to tina cuz whoa lots of screaming going on. better post soon. this is not the place to leave it. ;)
K, so Bette has some work to do. this was a great chapter. Tina will need to realize the real Bette has slowly emerged when in Tina’s company and that raving Bitch that day was not the real Bette Porter. i love your story. can’t wait to see how B convinces T to give her a chance.
Whoa, knew that was coming, but I thought they’d laugh about it….guess I was wrong!!!! Now T is gonna be off to be there 4 her friends, and miss her date with Bette. And Bette has sometime to think of the many ways she can make it up to Tina…..POST SOON!!!!!!!
Hey I agree with kg LOL! Now it’s the time that Tina see real Bette OMG! payback is a bitch Bette your really deceived that LOL! go Tina Thanks Please continue post soon.
wow the sh*t has certainly hit the fan. love this story. bette is sincerly sorry but sometimes being sorry is not enough. she needs to show tina
Uhoh. . you’re not posting for a couple days? NOOOOOO!!! Please post again soon, I love this story! They can get over this, Tina just has a shit-load going through her head right now.
OOh, that was sooooo good! I loved it!!! Thanks! I know Tina will eventually come around…but, I think it was great the way that she let Bette know what it’s like to be on the receiving end of a real biotch! LOL! CAn’t wait ’til your next post!!!!
nice post
Can Tina get any more dramatic than this? Yes, Porter was an ass that day; but her actions since then has shown Tina just how soft and caring Bette can really be.
Also, Tina wants to be mad that Bette didnt recognize her as the person that spilled the smoothie on her; yet its ok for her to use her eyesight as an excuse. Just because she couldnt see Bette clearly doesnt mean Bette’s voice had changed.
wow..completely caught me off guard. hopefully they will work it out..Bette need to work on that..!
K
Well shit. Great chapter. I hope Tina calms down and talks to Bette. She needs to learn how to forgive and forget. Love it.
What Bette did was cruel and inappropriate however, we all do and say things sometimes that do not reflect who we really are. Tina was a bit overboard. But then again….her stress level is elevated after hearing about Vanessa, much like Bette’s stress level was at the time of the accident. Maybe Tina should take that into consideration. Hope Tina gives her a second chance. Very good story.
well i have to agree in part with Tina Bette deserve that her behavior was awful and terrible and if wasnt Tina it will be with someone else and that person will never get an “im sorry” Bette have to learn to respect somebody elses feeling BUT Tina was to tough too and hope they could talk and try to get through this misunderstanding..great chapter as always please post soon!!!!
Wow that was intense! Hopefully tina will be able to forgive bette soon!!!
Great chapter – love this story and your author name. Tina can forgive B…right??
Did I miss something? If I remember correctly, the chapter with everyone at Bette’s house already had them discovering who they were… when Tina was on her way to the bathroom and Bette was coming out of her bedroom, they nearly bumped into each other and said about crashing into one another one the street earlier that morning….? Have I missed something?
That was quite some over-reaction from Tina! Christ! Anger management number on speed dial I think.
-Dix