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Twisted Triangles ch. 19
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Previously :
Grace: “A little birdy called me at work. Told me that they were coming to see you tonight. I just don’t want to be there, when they’re there, ok?”
“Ok…… You want to tell me who this mystery person is?”
“Nope, said they want this to be surprise. But I gotta go love. I’ll call you if Bette can’t come ok?”
“Alright.” Again I tune out of the conversation at the revelation that someone is at my house now, waiting for me. To do what, I don’t know. But I want to find out like now.
“Good luck, sweetie.” And with those three words she ran to the closing door to the studio, leaving me in her busted chevy guessing about the stranger in my house
A Few Hours Later
I know, chicken, right? I couldn’t help it. I have no idea who’s in my house. And needless to say, I hate surprises. On one hand, it could be Eric, which would make Grace smile. Maybe this was a setup. Maybe there was no acting class tonight and her and Bette are on a date. No, Bette would’ve told me. Right? And Grace could never keep that a secret from me. So we’re back to Eric as the visitor. I really can’t take Grace and then Eric right after one another. It’s too draining. So that’s where I am now. Circling my own block waiting for whoever is in the house to get a clue and just leave. But so far no luck. Damn, I should just get it over with. Sooner the better, right?
When I get to the door, I have to take a few deep breaths. Ok, ok let’s go. ***** my hands are shaking. That can’t be a good sign. Cool it Kennard, hold your ***** hand steady and open the damn door.
“Mickey!! What are you doing here?”
“Is that how you greet your big sister?” ***** it’s Mickey, my big sister. But you just heard that.
“What are you doing here?” I ask again, hugging her a little awkwardly.
Don’t get me wrong, I love my sister. It’s that we don’t exactly, how can I say this tactfully….well we really don’t like each other. She’s always been a holier than thou type of person that doesn’t do anything for anybody else. And I was always the one to pick up the slack as far as taking care of my mother; being there for her, taking her places. So when I decided to lead my own life finally and move to California, it was a huge deal for her. Now, she would have to answer to mom and take her places and hear mom complain all day how no one cares about her. All the ***** that I couldn’t take and happily left in New York.
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k baby. the plot thickens. if bette is a pussy im hunting you down. lol. im proud of tina also. i think ill get good and drunk and play that little scene for my mom. ahahaha. oh this should be good. and i mean it, it really should be good. its hard but soo worth it. coming clean is so cleansing. heehee. so when are you gonna give it to us. soon i hope. thanks.
Wow Tina is awesome and brave, and good for her and sad for her to. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Excellent chapter, can’t get enough of this. Loved it.
Well if grace sees the picture of Bette, Tina could always lie and say she was gonna give it to her for a present! But it sounds like she’s coming clean with everything! THe shit is gonna hit the fan! Please post soon!
I’m proud of Tina of telling her sister. It’ll be even better when she tells Grace. I thought it was so cute that she keeps the picture in her drawer and talks to it everynight. That’s just so damn adorable!! Let’s hope that the alcohol will help Tina and Bette admit their “relationship” and maybe a little more dirty dancing? Can’t wait to see what happens!
I ree-read this chapter then chapter 1 because I briefly remembered something from Chapter 1. Ok, so…how does one year pass and we get to the point where there are now to the point of Chap. 1? It’s obvious no one else is the wiser of B/T, but also the girlfriend word is used, and not for our fave couple! I know I know you getting the stroy there, but then I want like several chapers in a day!!:) I can wish right?
Oh WOW!! What a Chapter!! My heart is in my throat!
The whole time I’m seeing red. Then my sister’s dead body in the livingroom. Then me being fingerprinted, and my trial afterwards. I could plead insanity. If anyone had met this bitch on wheels they would understand.
I can actually picture Tina saying this.
“She’s not my girlfriend yet, but we have been trying to fuck each other for about a month. Almost happened right up against the front door, if you really want to know.”
And this little moment caused my mouth to drop open; I can barely type right now.
Superlative chapter. I found the scene between B & T heart warming, and thier sub-conversation showed how connected they really are to one another. Can’t wait to see it from Bette’s point of view. I am intrigued to find how this will circle back to chapter one. Thanks for the great post.
damn man!!!!!!!!!!