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    Love Revisted – Coming Home Part 64

    Story written on September 6, 2005 by arceextl.
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    Franklin treads dangerous ground; Susan treads on Bette & Tina’s ground; and Candace just treads on the devil’s ground. Tina, trust your feelings…please.

    Love Revisited – Coming Home  Part 64

     

     

    Previously

     

    A familiar phrase went through the driver’s mind regarding Helena Peabody: 

     


    “Be very careful of  what you wish forsomeday you just may get it.”

     

     

     

    Bette and Tina’s party was winding down.  Shane and Carmen along with Jenny were helping clean up.  Alice and Dana and Susan had left a little while ago.  Kit had also left with Ivan.  

     

    Angelica was waking up and letting everyone know it was baby attention timeand be damn quick about it.

     

    Tina was doing dishes and said, “I’ll get her, babe.”

     

    “Can I get her, Tina?” asked Shane.

     

    “Sure, you can, godmother.  She’ll need changing.”

     

    “No prob.  I’ll get her all spiffy and bring her out.” Shane said.

     

    She walked to the baby’s room singing something no one understood.

     

    “She just loves Angelica.  It’s so sweet.” Tina said to Bette and Carmen.

     

    “I know.  She talks about that child so much.  It is so cute though to see tough ole Shane just melt when she’s around her.”

     

    “I don’t know, Carmen.  You better watch out.  Sounds like Shane may want want one of her own.”  Bette smiled at Carmen.

     

    “Yeah, well, she knows I’m an old-fashioned girl.  She better walk me down the aisle before I put any buns in this oven!” Carmen laughed.

     

    Bette and Tina laughed, too, both secretly hoping that Shane would do just that, walk her sweet Carmen down the aisle.  What a great day that would be for everyone – especially Shane.

     

    * * *

     

    She sat on the cold bench – funny how even with the warm California weather, cement was cold.  Perhaps because it’s in the shade of a tree.

     

    Coming out to sunny California seemed to be the best choice to make, considering all that had been going on in her life.

     

    It wasn’t a pleasant ending but the relationship had been rocky for a very long time now so it really was no surprise.  We really were two very different people.  Sometimes I just didn’t know how to feel – somewhere along the way that sense of feeling and caring took the wrong path and got lost in the dark forest of indifference.   Even finding our way out, we both accepted the fact that, try as we might, our relationship was never going to be what we so desperately wanted it to be.

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    1. Things are heating up! I really hope that Tina follows her instincts. Susan really seems like bad news. What’s Candace up to? Hmm… Great chapter, rc!

    2. Arce,

      Am completely intrigued as to what exactly is going on and loving every moment of my bemusement.

      What exactly is Susan’s game plan and what is Candace up to?

      Who has Helena lined up for her next attempt at destroying Bette and Tina? Looks like are many pokers in the fire but not sure which one will hot enough to use yet.

      This articulates your brilliance at weaving so many threads in to a magnificent tapestry of a tale.

      Thank you for sharing your talent and skill with me.

      Your Loyal Fan.

    4. Can’t believe that Helene and Candace are so into this. Just hope Tina remember that feeling . Maybe Susan isn’t as smart as she think she is. Study then write thanks

    5. CANDYASS and HELLNO… OMG… i hope tina goes with her feelings… and i hope the bitch and candyass get theres… please keep our girls safe…
      keep studing and write when you can… later baby

    6. RC…what DRAMA! Damn…don’t tell me that Helena, Susan, & Candance are all working together to get back at Bette & Tina. DAMN what a gang.LOL. I wonder what Peggy is up to..I know she just saved Bette’s job from Helena, but why the secret calls with Franklin (who is indeed an idiot). Hmmmmm…great chapter, RC. Really love how the story is progressing. Good luck with school.

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