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Comfort Enough
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Tina crept around the doorway of the kitchen, watching with amusement as her wife stood in the glow of the open refrigerator door, shoveling chopsticksful of Kung Pao Chicken into her mouth.
“Now you’re hungry?” Tina grinned, crossing her arms in front of her chest and leaning against the counter.
“Jesus, T. You scared me!” Bette gulped.
“Sorry. I couldn’t resist. Well, don’t just stand there, bring it all out and share,” Tina said, reaching around Bette to grab some of the take out cartons and set them on the kitchen table.
Bette gathered the remaining leftovers from their dinner party and pulled plates and another set of chopsticks from the cupboard.
“So you got your appetite back, huh?” Tina said, arching her eyebrows as she spooned herself a serving of cold pork fried rice.
“Finally. I think Tonya actually made me queasy. What does Dana see in her? That woman isshe’s” Bette sputtered.
“Yeah. As Alice says, ‘She’s all that and a bag of chips,’” Tina concluded.
“What is Dana thinking? Is she really going through with this whole wedding?”
“It looks like it. The invitations are in the mail.” Tina popped a carrot in her mouth and chewed thoughtfully.
“That doesn’t mean anything. If Dana wants to get out of this, she can get out of it. People cancel weddings all the time.”
“But that’s the thing. She doesn’t seem to want to get out of it. Although who would know any more. It’s all about Tonya and what she wants. And what Tonya wants is a big, expensive, extravagant wedding,” Tina said.
“God, the way she hung all over her during dinner. And thethe creepy baby talk thing,” Bette rolled her eyes.
“Poor Al,” Tina sighed.
“Poor Al?” Bette snorted. “Poor Dana! She’s going to wake up on the morning after the wedding and realize that she’s married. This isn’t an endless game of Plan the Party. There’s a lifetime commitment waiting at the other end of that aisle.”
“But what about Alice? She thinks she’s in love with Dana and she’s too afraid to do anything about it. So instead she’s watching her become thisStepford *****.”
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I marvel at the delicious way you brought B & T together….thank you
Awesome. beautiful full of love/so tender thanks
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Stepford Lesbian
Now this was funny!
“Let’s just say that Alice was highly invested in the two of us getting back together,” Bette smiled, leaning in to kiss Tina. Tina laughed. “Don’t I know it? You’d think there was a commission involved.”
When I think about it, this is Alice all the way. In everything that she does concerning B & T, she does it like there’s a great big pay off (for her) at the end of the rainbow.
If only that would happen in the show, we can only dream & keep reading your wonderful stories.
Fantastic, beautiful, heartfelt. No matter how many stories we read where B&T come together as one again are we ever disappointed. And it would be nice to see this on the show. They way you write it, you can just feel the love and caring and sensitivity of these two. Just awesome.
HA! Stepford Lesbian!! That is so dead on.
It’s a always tricky when you try to talk to a friend about a person they’re involved with that you don’t think is good for them. Sometimes they will listen and be thankful that you valued their friendship enough to speak up…and sometimes it backfires. With Dana, I doubt that she is the sort that will be hurt for long if Bette talks to her. Alice needs to take the advice that she gave to Bette.
That was sweet, the way you had B&T reconnect sexually. No big plans were made, not over the top overatures. Just simple desire and love. Beautiful.
god that was beautiful. passionate, heartfelt, loving. and stepford lesbian, ha. thank you again for your gift to us.
absolutely perfect!
lovely…absolutely lovely…
YOU…..ARE……AMAZING.
When you quoted that bette was “writing poems with feather-light fingertips” I about melted into the floor!!! You have a way with words like know one I’ve ever known. Your talent is unparallel. You capture B&T’s love with the such detail that the show tends to miss. THANK YOU A THOUSAND TIMES!!!!!
wow, just beautiful
Did you know I just about have this story memorized?
Warm, tender, loving. Just magnificent. This made me want to crawl right back into bed and cuddle.
You right with such class with an amazing lifelike pace. Your journey of Tina & Bette and I’m more than happy to come along for the stroll.
That was great, but now I go to work…as always, thanks for the great story.
the right moment..the right person..everything seems juz right!
I’m all warm inside. Thanks FFC
nice…very nice. Beautifully written.
beautiful
as many times as I love to envision T & B together – every time is so different – that was so incredible. I love the vulnerability and passion you portray in these two. thanks
A much anticipated moment made memorable by your lovely prose. Thank you.
The way you portray their reconnection is just so…full of love. Simply charming.
simply amazing..i cant get enough of your story..love it..
Your story reads like someone whispering…you should be very proud; it’s a beautifully written story.