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A Discourse on Desire…Chapter 2
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Bette stood by her new neighbour’s gate and knocked on it loudly, the noise made the woman turn around. She was holding a cardboard box that was obviously too heavy for her. Bette went in without permission and took ahold of the box on the other side. The woman looked up into Bette’s eyes and said without talking THANK YOU. Bette and the new neighbour slowly turned around and walked up the steps into the house. Bette looked around as they walked down the hallway…she was curious as to what this house looked like. The cookies Bette brought was resting on the box but fell off when the new neighbour tripped slightly. A big “*****” slipped out of her mouth too. Bette felt herself fighting to stop laughing out loud. Nobody had said anytihng yet. They se the box on top of the table. Now Bette felt a little uncomfortable, a little out of place. She squirmed in her shoes and was saved from saying anything…the new neighbour had a huge smile on her face and reached out with her hand. “Hi…Tina Kennard”. Bette smiled back and reached out to take ahold of her hand. Tina was shorter than Bette though not by much, shiny healthy blond hair that went a little past her jawline, a slim body, and an expressive face that right now was expressing gratitude. Bette smiled her best smile, always good to make an impression. Bette acutely knew how she herself looked like. Tall, dark, strong, intense eyes, and a toothy smile. She felt her previous anxiety over the past few hours melt away. It must have been the atmosphere of this home, it was so….homey. Still notihng much was said until Bette said “Welcome, i just wanted to welcome youa nd brought you some……o *****” Bette spotted the cookies on the floor in the hall where they fell off the box. Tina said it was alright she would clean it up but Bette reached out and took ahold of her arm…shaking her head no, she would clean it up..it was her mess. Bette felt her hand grow warm from Tina’s pale arm. She walked over to the hallway and crouched down. Tina called out that she would get Bette some juice then. Bette nodded and went back to picking up those stupid cookies, she didn’t even make them. Paxton did. While leaning down Bette caught sight of the hallway bookcase and something stood out like a sore thumb. “Leather and Dykes” Her curiousity piqued tenfold. She looked sideways to see if Tina was still bosy, yes. Then quickly she took out the book and flipped through it. Her critical curator eye picked out all the flaws, but the whole thing was creative to be sure. Leather….whips…power relations………..women……with women. Bette closed the book and put it back quickly. She scooped the crumbs and cookies and went back in the kitchen. Tina was there with her glass of juice in her hand. Bette felt suddenly very uncomfortable. She had just seena hardcore book and this woman in front of her looked so innocent. She took the juice, said a quick thanks, and gulped the whole thing down. Tina noticed and started to move out of the house to get the rest of the boxes, all of whom were small and no extra help was needed. Bette appreciated the way-out. She felt there was something more to Tina, something….maybe disconcerting? Such contrasts. On her way out Bette noticed a picture that was on the table….Tina with a man and his arm around her shoulder. Was that her boyfriend? Her brother? Bette shook her head. who cares? Out in the yard Tina said thanks for the cookies and to come by anytime. Bette nodded in that curt way of her and they shook hands again. Much more formal now than the first. Bette left the yard and went back into her own.
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ok, as a lesbian….and likely speaking for the other lesbians among us…..EWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW! ….. but I will give you some credit, I have never read a story like this on this site before. Not sure I can stomach another seen with Bette and a man, though. Just seems wrong….lol. I mean I don’t mind if people are straight as long as they stay away from my children and save the affection for behind closed doors.
jeeesus – did i really have to read that. i feel like ants are crawling all over me. yikes!!
now leather and dykes, thats a good visual. i dont feel the need to go and take that kind of shower.
god that is gonna stay with me all day. i think ill go and read GREENTEA to get rid of that horror.
still here.
TRACI – thanks you honey. and dayum that was funny.
ha ha ha ha ha ha ha….I can’t stop laughing from the comments…traci921-as long as they stay away from my children and save the affection for inside!!! Th albeez with the greentea comment…You guys are too funny – that will stay with me the rest of the day!! Yes I admit the Bette/man thing is a bit off (way) and Paxton doesn’t seem her type…don’t like him really..She obviously thinks she loves him but that doesn’t sound like love…welcome Tina!!! tks post soon….
HONDA – come back. email me. please. you sooo crack me up. i left you a note somewhere around here. must be under my notepad. i left my email address at lastkids lovely chappy.
I double the EWWWWWWWWWWW. But I know (I guess) it was needed to establish Bette’s feelings for her husband. She seems happy but something is definetly missing. Would love to hear a little about the leather deal. Not much written on this site about that, and I for one, have never experienced that, so it would be fun to learn a few things.
Man?!!! I have to agree with Traci…EWWWWWWWWW
Leather dykes!
I like your story. Please, continue. I’d like to see how Bette gets rid of that man…whatshisname. Hmmmmm, I wonder if Tina is going to make a pass at Bette or vice-versa.
Glad to see you back…your storlines are always very intriguing! Thanks!
have learned to expect the unexpected with you………good to keep us on edge, cos its at the edge we really see clearly.
phew I thought I would be the only one ready to crawl out of their skin after reading that scene. *so getting the shivers as I type* Traci921 so true so true. Anyways nice twist something different is always welcome in my book. Its quite interesting that Bette is projecting her sexual issues unto Tina. I mean someone owning that book doeS not necessarily make them a lesbian. I mean I dont own that book and I definitely am a lesbian.
Good chapter and I agree with Cnick and let see what’s next!
The story is interesting girl and as a newly annointed lesbian that was like Traci921 said EWWWWWWCKKK.
Bette with a man. That is a horrible nightmare. Did notice Bette was on the top. that should tell us something… thanks