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***Business is business… or something else??*** –Chapter 2
Previously..
Bette: “Wait, wait, wait, as far as i’m concerned, YOU decided that, not me, so CUT the cr–”
Suddenly, Bette stops talking… she sees the most beautiful woman approaching the counter and asking for coffee…
TBC…
The woman was very attractive, she was wearing a pink flowered skirt, white sandals a white tank top and sunglasses, her hair was short, but not too short, it falls on her shoulders, blonde, when she removed her sunglasses, Bette notes she has beautiful eyes in which you could get lost thinking you’re in heaven; a perfect nose, and, finally, soft pink perfect lips(not that Bette could know they were soft, but she though so…). After receiving her coffee and paying, the ‘vision’ left.. Bette never took her big brown chocolate eyes off of the creature which had just left… Meanwhile, Alice only noticed that Bette was staring at her when she left…
Alice: So, Bette, enjoying the view?
Bette didn’t hear her, so Alice decided tease Bette a little, it was a hard to break habit that Alice had since she first met Bette…
Alice: “Ahem(clearing her throat), Hey Porter,if you want, I can help you looking for your jaw, apparently it fell from your face and left with the hot blonde”
Bette:”What?”
Alice:”You heard me. We can go after the blonde to tell her to give us back your jaw…”(she starts laughing)
Bete:”You, smart *****!”(lowering her voice a little, in a serious tone) “What do you think?”
Alice: “She’s hot, but not my type, not this week, this is my straight week” Alice says as she starts laughing hearing what she just said.
Bette:” I had never seen her around here”(Bette starts looking in her head the blonde’s image, maybe in a party, at RADAR, at MILK, nothing…she decides to ask Alice, since she knows everybody’s life,after all, she’s a journalist and has a BIG mouth which never stops asking the most inappropiate questions)”Hey, Alice…” Says Bette shyly… Alice senses it…
Alice:(Rolling her eyes)”Yes, Bette?”
Bette:”Do you know who she was??”Bette asks getting a little nervous, but not letting Alice notice this.
Alice: “Maybe yes, or maybe not”says Alice, getting Bette anxious
Bette:”So?What do you know?”
Alice:”I don’t know if I should, Bette, I mean, right now I’m a little hungry, and I don’t know if I have the energy to deal with your mood”Says Alice
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Yes please continue with the story…it’s a great start – very promising. But you are definitely killing us with these short chapters…longer please.
Oh man I love this story and Alice and Bette so funny and please conintue soon, thanks!
yes… but you did… so i’m reading on
This is very good. I’m really enjoying it. Next time make it longer and post soon.
Please continue. :-)
i agree longer chapters and let her kick alice’s ass too,lol
YES PLEASE CONTINUE. GREAT BEGINNING THANKS SO MUCH
Hey I’m just catch up Whoa! it’s to shorts! but Hey it’s great Thanks! Please continue post soon!!
is great..!! do continue!
you should defintely continue
PLEASE CONTINUE.ELLEN DEGENERES (DORI): “THIS IS GOIN’2 BE GOOD I CAN TELL.” PLEASE CONTINUE PEACE.
good job! plz continue..i think its really nice of you to translate=)…ur english is fine no worries=)…post soon (“,)
Yeah, this is great. You’re doing a fantastic job!! So how does our little Alice know Tina????
I love the beginning. My only request: longer chapters!!!
Yes please continue!!! Y dejame decirte que I am very impressed of your writting skills… In english and spanish. Por favor sigue la historia… We always love B&T begginings… gracias!
Come on man that was way to short!!!!!!!!!!!! please continue and make the post much longer hurry it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Please continue….I am enjoying it!!
You know.. if I could read the spanish I’d read it twice ;) I still do but ya know what I mean. Good job hun, keep it up. need more :)(P.S. Thanks for the authors note thing… *flower*)
Yes, you should definitely continue! A B&T beginning is worth reading. I am a fan of these two. Hmmmm, I think I am addicted to their stories. Keep the chapters coming, please.