Fan Fiction
This story has been set to a rating of NC-17. Age verification is required to proceed.
The Roommates – 2nd Dimension: Chapter 45
Login to add story to favorites
(68 votes, average: 3.47 out of 5)You need to be a registered member to rate this post.
Loading ...
The Roommates – 2nd Dimension: Chapter 45
Previously~~~~~~~~~~~~
Dana stared at her feet and was quiet for a moment. Her demeanor gave the impression that she was finally at peace with Alice’s explanation. Then her head whipped up and the fury in her gaze shattered this illusion.
“Soare you ***** somebody else? Is that it?”, she asked, her words furious and stinging Alice like daggers.
“What?”, she asked, the incredulousness shining in her eyes.
Tina took this as her cue to soothe the gaping emotional wounds that were opening up before her. She quickly moved in front her friends, “Guys, come on. Don’t do this. Everybody just calm down.”
“I’m done being calm, T. Let’s get to this club. Maybe I’ll meet someone that actually wants to be with me.”, said Dana.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
By the time the foursome reached the club, it was painfully obvious that Dana was neither speaking to nor making eye contact with Alice Pieszecki. She was the first to push past the throng of females crowding the entrance and the first to have her id checked under-aged hand stamped. It wasn’t long before she disappeared into the flashing lights and thumping bass beat.
Alice just threw up her hands in defeat and wandered off to watch Dana from a safe distance.
In the mass of gyrating women, Bette walked behind Tina, holding onto her lover’s sides, instinctively marking her territory in this den of vultures. Tina’s natural beauty, innocent look, and unfamiliar face all combined to label her as fresh meat and the hungry stares and lustful looks tossed in her direction were not lost on Bette’s attentive eyes. She frowned slightly as they moved through the crowed, feeling as if they were an item on display.
The dark-haired beauty jumped slightly when he felt an unfamiliar hand caress her butt and give a rough squeeze. With indignation flaring in her dark brown eyes, she whipped her head around to launch an attack on the offending party, only to find the task meaningless. The floor was packed with people and the touchy-feeler was hidden in the crowd. With a huff of frustration and her jaw set in anger, Bette turned back around and tightened her grip on Tina’s midsection.
Comments
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.
Thank goodness you are back. That was hot, sexy, and absolutely wonderful!
MTS… THANK YOU for continuing this story!!!!
Welcome back…no need to hang your head and sob. You’ve produced the goods. *lol* Nice chapter…
hey MTS. of course we remember your story. pls post soon.
Remember you and love your story please post sooner!!!
MTS I’m with mclaerin, no need to hang your head, you’ve just redeemed yourself!!! Post soon.
you came back with a vengence. excellent. please post sooner. have missed this story. thanks.
you’re back, awesome…it was hot and intense…i just hope alice won’t do anything to reuin B&T’s relationship
Guess who’s back? That was a great update to your story. I was wondering if we were going to have to put an APB out for you.
Good to see you back MTS and this chapter is awesome and love it. Ok let see what’s next, thanks!
Glad to see you back.I am MTS when i see a post from you.
Welcome back & what a great chapter to come back with
I missed this story! Thanks for posting again :) Hot dance floor number ;) and great introduction of new characters.
Hoo-Ray Hoo-Ray another great chapter. I’ve been missing this story something fierce. Bette and Tina on the dance floor were hot and it was nice to have a chapter with no bad news for for B or T this time around. I guess we’ll be getting back to reality soon and finding out how Tina deals w/ thinking Alice is still hot for her lady. Please don’t keep us waiting.
It’s good to have you back. Really enjoying this story.
Lara!!! Yay! I hope that she becomes more integrated with the gang, even if she’s currently with Holly. *Wink wink nudge nudge* lol Tina and Alice need to talk. Hopefully it goes well. Thanks, MTS! It’s great to see you post again. :)
I’m too late LOL.. but i really can’t read your story without leaving a comment.. Thank you..
MTS… i missed this last week.. have no idea how that happened… love your story… and i know life gets in the way of Fan Fiction..so write when you can… later baby
YES your back!!! I loves this story and your writing, soooo please post more often…
glad to have you back and i like the twists and turns you’re taking me into. loved your writing.
Hey MTS:)Long time no see. great update, thanks!
yass your back!!! :) amazing as always, :)
Now you see it’s hard to really get annoyed when you return with 9-page posts!I’m loving the story but I just want to go on the record as saying, you don’t have to parallel your story with the show, i.e. Bette and Alice DON’T have to get together! I really hope this doesn’t happen…they’re gonna have enough drama when Tina’s folks find out, they surely don’t need to add to it.
yay ur back :Dive missed ur wonderful writing!
this was great !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! make dana lara story I know it will be as gerat as this one!!!!!!!!!!
Thanks for writing back I just missed this great Story Please continue!!!
yuk..I dun like Lara..but it will make it interesting..I hope they can still stay friendz&Dana can win Alice..
I’ve officially caught up on all your chapters…its been months but i’m back…anyhow, I think you captured the thoughts in Ms. Beverly’s head perfect….I think its even rougher coming out in the black community.