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Bette — Plan B; Pt. 84 (#1/2)
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Two nights. I’ve spent two nights in my bed, with my wife, my daughter living down the hall.
As much as I’m elated to be here, even if on a temporary basis, even if I’m living out of a suitcase, I’m not sure that Tina is as eager to have me as she once seemed.
We did agree, at least implicitly, that this was about living together, about getting to know each other again. This was not about *****.
Tina has yet to show herself totally adverse to the idea. In fact, the times that we’ve been intimate since I’ve returned are times where she initiated the *****. And, if the mood and opportunity present themselves, my apartment is ready and available for us should the timing not be appropriate here..
Each night, Tina’s been wrapped in the bedding, and lying on the far edge.
I haven’t forced the issue. Partially because I don’t want her to wind up on the floor. This behavior is totally different from the woman who used to sprawl. The woman whose hands, and sometimes feet, would end up in my face.
We haven’t had much time alone, but any time that I’ve tried to broach the issue with Tina, she says that it’s nothing. In fact, she very adamantly says it’s nothing.
That means that it’s definitely something.
Something I need to try to decipher before I leave town.
And it’s not just sleeping. It’s the few moments that we might possibly be alone, possibly discuss. These times have been rather rare between her work and my attempt to look for a location before I head to
I want to ask her about it. I hope it’s just the trip, something transitory. My trepidation on what this might open up, especially just before I’m to leave, keeps me quiet.
Kept me quiet.
This afternoon when I entered the house, she was sitting on the couch, her nose buried in a script.
I put down my things and went to the kitchen to grab some juice. “T, I’ve found the greatest property.”
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OMFG!!!P this is just to fucking awesome!!I mean I’m looking outside wonder if were heading into a ice age???lmaoWow you have no idea how good it is just to have your story to read. thank you and well I’m really looking forward to this little drama you have in store for us.
Did I miss something? Where did that come from?
damn Tina and her issues…lol…great post…please post soon!
somebody is lying…but really why would bette wreck the surprise, of course she would say more than a couple of days…boy tina is wayyyy too stressed about her leaving and is jumping on anything that moves…
oh dear mother of GOD!!!!!!!
my day is officially ruined…i hope bette will get the guts to talk to tia before she leaves…and why did alice lied? man, this is intense and you are the master…should i get supply of xanaz for the next couple of chapters? i hope you’ll fix it, please
Dear god please make this be a big misunderstanding, Idon’t know if I like the title begining of the end, I am soooo worried now, don’t know if I will be able to sleep
No fair to just end it like that! The next part is gonna be something else though. These two need to lock themselves in a room and get their issues sorted, although if they lock themselves into a room they probably won’t get much talking done so maybe Jess should be present too. Tina is letting all those old fears back in, they need to talk this crap out, although since we know what happens in Chpt. 85 I guess that doesn’t go too well. Let’s just hope this is as bad as it gets. NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE!!!
Another post!! We’re sooooo lucky these days!!!I some kind of like to Tina’s insecurity. It’s like a kind of expression of her love to Bette. =P
Whats up with Tina? I would like to say I did not see that coming but since you gave us a glimps into the futur I was ready for it… I can’t wait to read more and find out what the hell is going on in Tina’s head…Thanks a bunch for the post and on with the Drama.
Well, I am glad that they have a lock on the bedroom door! Lord knows they needed that! Tina needs to open up and get this bit off her chest, she, like us, has absolutely no idea what the deal is. Please post soon…you are driving me mad!
oh my god! You’re torturing us. Obviously Tina can’t let any of her insecurities go….
You have GOT TO come back with the rest of this!!!! So, Bette considers Tina ‘her wife’? What does Tina think? Good chapter!
What in the world is wrong with Tina? Is it because there is a surprise coming and she just nearly gave away her knowledge of it? WHAT? Post soon please.
god – tina needs yoga tina from sunsal. dont ya think? jeez. shes really got to learn to trust. and COMMUNICATE. your killing me p.
And the chill continues…brrrrrrrrr.Well, there was at least an attempt made to communicate, even if it was stilted. Hard to talk to someone when they are not willing to pay attention.Tina’s passive-aggressive behavior was very evident this go around. If she would just step back and take a moment and not give in to her usual histrionics they might get to the core issue.Bette, you have a tough row to hoe here. I hope you’re not doing something you shouldn’t be.Another great one, pseud.
Hmmm, did Alice spill? I really can’t tell… Suspense and drama!!! You’re getting me really nervous about chp 85. Tina needs to calm down and talk to Bette. Communication, remember? Boy, am I frustrated!
Oops, I meant I’m nervous about finding out what brought on Tina’s reaction in Chp 85. And I’m also waiting to see what happened to Chp 80.
That was a cold Tina. Just ask, stop beating around the bush, ask
Somebody needs to throw a bucket of ice on Tina.
As a very wise dog once said…”Ruh-roh”.
:( I know Tina’s all anxious about her worst fears coming true…waiting for the other shoe to drop… but COME ON! Friggin’ talk to eachother!!!! And why am I yelling at fictional characters?! Dang it, Pseud! ;)
You are being such a tease!! Keep the posts coming!!
Whoa! it’s getting intense and I’m getting nervous too Tina really have to wake up too her sense Thanks pseud I’m stiil catch up Please continue post soon!!
dum dum duuuummmm…. ok ppl. stock up on prozac and/or bonbons NOW. i have a feeling we’re gonna need it…
oh TIna must have thought that Bette was lying…! am i right?…Tina shld like get a grip
whats up with tina–know there will be bumps in the road and she does have a job to keep up with som what does tina want–can’t wait foe next posting
who are you – I mean do you write for TLW cause you are killing me here?? Bette’s in the dark and Tina’s melting down – this better not end bad cause I’m counting on you – your story has been so amazing please don’t kill the love.
Hey, I sent you bon-bons! Why the tease? Ooooh, Alice…what have you done. Maybe Alice thought she was helping Bette out, but looks like she dug a bigger hole for Bette. I hope Tina opens up and tell Bette what she overheard so Bette can explain. Do you take bribes? So you can post again, soon? Oh, a thought just came to me, will Jess end up being the one to help Tina see the good side of Bette? *tapping my fingers* *tap* *tap* patiently waiting *tap* *tap* *tap*
Oh fuck drama coming!