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Never Say Never: Chp.8 Fire
They all entered through the cabin door with Dana and Carmen trailing
behind with heavier bags. The whole group began to “aww” and “ooh” when
they saw how well they had been hooked up. Of course there was no TV or
things of that sort. It was simple and decorated with a very stylish
hand. Big windows brightened up the main room and in all side of the
main room there were three rooms and on one side it gave way to a comfy
kitchen and dining table. This all connected to a sliding door with a
porch outside that faced a medium sized lake and a small fire pit; one
located on the front yard of the cabin and one further in the distance
by the beach and bbq pit. The girls ran all over looking at the
different rooms choosing which one they would like to stay in as they
went along. But in the midst of doing so, Shane stopped and noticed
that Carmen had already found her way to the porch. She passed the main
room where jenny was trying to figure out how to get the fire place
going. The place, unfortunately, was cold and hadn’t been occupied in
awhile. Shane made her way to the porch where Carmen was looking at the
lake.
“Hey.”
“Hey, Shane.”
”This place is beautiful.” Shane continued looking at Carmen not
taking her eyes off her girl not even for a moment. She nodded.
”Yah, it is.” She walked up to Carmen from behind and wrapped her
arms around her waist. Feeling this, Carmen rested her head against
Shane’s and they both looked out into the distance.
”Thanks for being here.” Shane stopped for a moment to consider
what Carmen was really trying to say. And with a complete genuine
response, Shane muttered,
”Thanks for letting me.” She spun Carmen around so she was now
facing her. And with a smile, Carmen knew exactly what she wanted and
kissed her affectionately. But affection grew to lust in the middle of
the kiss and they were both surprised at how bad they wanted each
other. They admitted that it had been awhile since their plans in the
van, and as they were about to turn to find a room, the girls jumped
out from the door.
“Oh my god, look at this view Dana. It’s so nice! I know you guys are
trying to get freaky, but that’s what the rooms are for.” Shane let go
of Carmen’s lips, while still holding her, and turned to face a
mischievous Alice.
“Hello al.” Shane spoke plainly.
”Carmen! Let’s go for a walk.” Alice grabbed her hand and led her off the porch in the direction of the beach.
”Whoaaaaa! Ok, ok. I’m coming.” She finally let go of Shane’s
hand and began walking with Alice while Dana and Shane began another
conversation.
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Great chapter. Cracked me up.
Love this story. Please, please post the next chapter soon.
Awesome update!It’s nice that they got away. I’m really interested in the next chapter, I guess Carmen is coming back to her mother, I wonder who it will affect Shane&Carmen, maybe her mother will forbidd her to see Shane?Aynways, so looking forward to the next update!!
Thanks for sharing. Great update. Will Carmen’s mon love Shane?
oh damn you are doing a really good job! I love this story and thanx for the constant updates!
That was awesome. There were some very funny moments in it. But what’s coming up next?….Can’t wait, post more soon!