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Cant let her go Chapter 4
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Bette left the shower first, she hated the cold water and quickly cleansed herself so she didnt have to stand in the cool water. Candace on the other hand in no rush took her time in their and seemed to enjoy stalling Bette in any way possible despites Bette’s attempt to rush off.
Bette was dressed, and nearly ready when Candace emerged from the shower. She had nothing but a whitel towel wrapped around her, her body beaded with water and her face flushed not from the water but their previous activities. As she walked by bette, Bette stopped and stared, and as Candace brushed against her, Bette took hold of the towel and ripped it off.
Bette: Now that’s better
Candace laughed as she wrapped her arms around Bette, and they kissed lightly.
Candace: I thought you had to rush to work
Bette: Well you shouldnt have come in here looking like that, your to blame
Candace looked deep into Bette’s brown eyes, she smiled, she gently caressed the side of her ckeek wither finger, Bette tilted her head to the side.
Bette: What’s on your mind?
Candace: Remember what we spoke about last week?
Bette sighed, she had put off this questiion because in all honesty she wasnt sure what she wanted to do quite yet…but Candace’s proposition was starting to make sense more and more every minute….
Bette:Yes, vaguely…
Candace: Well let me refresh your memory then, me…you…in my apartment permanantly, we sell this house and have you move on…
Bette: Candace, I…
Candace brought her finger up to Bette’s lips to shush her, Bette obliged…
Candace: Bette, it’s over, whether you want to admit it or not, what you and Tina had is completly over, and although you may have some hope that she may contact you, it hasn’t happend in six months or so, You were a mess when she left you and now your finally starting to get your life back, Im starting to see the Bette I fell for rather than the depressed woman youv’e been.
Bette sat there letting Candace’s words hit her. Each time she said over it was like a slap in the face to her, Her life was over or was it? Here she had a new relationship and now a possible real estate venture, Things were getting better, and although the love she had for Tina, wasnt the way she felt for for Candace, who said those feelings couldnt emerge.
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hmm… wasnt quite as bad candyass-wise this time, but the bits with kasey were heartbreaking! i think the only reason im still reading is cuz i know… er… hope… that B&T are gona b 2getha at the end. in any case, post again soon!
Yes please contact her, please please please lol, please post again soon. Love it… oh and Tina should tell Bette about the baby.
SHAVED THE DOG?!?! – That’s very funny and I’m still laughting about it… PLEASE don’t make Bette moving on that Bit³£¢³¬³¢ !!!! Despite all I love this post, I read the first ( Bette and Candyass) part very quickly to easy my pain ( kidding )but I love at all. Post soon!!! Ps. Where’s the gang?!
Bette is so much a part of Kasey’s family that it’s going to hurt her when she’s told Bette isn’t family anymore. Cannot believe Bette is giving in and up…Tina should call. Oh..and shaving the dog was very funny.
Just catching up on this story…and it is fabulous!! Heartbreaking…sad, but the writing is wonderful…thank you!
Ok nyc your bad making me fall for the kid like that. Come on, that ain’t right. As for Candace I have no words if I write anything about her it will be really really bad. So I’ll just keep it to myself. Ya know what I have one request can you have Bette cheat on her please please pretty please with sugar on top. She thinks Bette is her girlfriend well let’s see how she feels when Bette cheats on her with the next best fuck.
Candace and Bette – that’s just not right! :-(
Tina’s got to tell bette about the baby before she moves in with that witch help us out nyc!!!
god what is in the water where your at. you and tiff. it really must be the water. lets all play nice and fucking talk to each other. very well done. thanks.
Great update. I love Kasey she is precious.
I just can’t get rid of the shaved dog image, so hilarious!!! Tina really does need to call Bette again, and I don’t care if it’s for Kasey’s sake or her own. She just needs to do it!
candyass better be gone by next chapter, i don’t like what i’m reading, it’s really well writen but bette and candyass? in B&T’s house? just so wrong
Ok now its time for Tina to call Bette and tell Bette about the baby and try to work thing out together, and for Bette is to break up with Candace and come to Tina and beg her for forgive. Ok post soon please, thanks!
OK your breaking my heart with this!!! im not into ooohing and ahhhing of even cute kids but…ok ok Kasey IS getting to me, and as for Candace and Bette being gross…bit strong i thought!!lol nothing with that woman (i mean Bette) could ever be gross! god forgive me not even Candace…lol good job its only fiction….
Bette is still the same she needs to get her shit togther!!!!!!!!!!
great story NYC. like tina anad her niece getting tina to get ahold of bette is great.
nyc…I putting my trust in you..even though my heart is breaking..just don’t write any more scenes between B and Candyass…ugh…please give us more soon
more angel more cant get enuff
For thelove of god u are killin me. Not cranky this time, just not gonna br able to sleep. Feeling pukey. Thanks for writing though.