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Fall in Vermont – Chapter 5
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Previously…
“Bette, do you mind if we stop by my place on the way back into town –
I need to check on something really quickly” Tina thought it might be
better for her to just meet Jessie in person and get it over with.
“Sure Tina, I’d love to see more of the area and where you live” The
drive was short but felt like it took forever, Bette could feel her
pancakes forming a knot in her tummy and the fake smile on her face was
starting to actually hurt.
Tina focused on the road and thought the sooner the better, the sooner
the better. The pulled up and driveway lined with red, amber and yellow
trees. The house was limestone and cottage like – it looked just like
someplace Tina would choose. “Welcome to our place” Tina said as they
came to the front door.
tbc
Chapter Five – All things Jessie
As Tina walked in Bette followed behind her. It was warm, charming and
definitely Tina. Just then in a flurry Bette felt something flash past
her and she looked as a small person was leaping into Tina arms.
“Mommy!” Just as Bette turned and there was the most perfect child on
the planet. She had mocha colored skin, sandy brown curls, hazel eyes
and definitely Tina’s smile. Bette was in shock.. the little girl
turned to Bette and said “I’m Jessica Elizabeth and your picture is in
my mommies room”
Bette felt like she should sit down and that is exactly what she did –
found a sofa and sat. Meanwhile Tina and Jessie were talking Bette did
not even know what they were saying she felt faint. Tina noticed Bette
was pale and thought she need some water. “Bette, let me get you some
water” “That would be a really good thing..” Tina put Jessie down and
went to get Bette some water.
Now Bette and Jessie were face to face. She was like a little angel and
for the second time in her life a Kennard women was beginning to steal
her heart but Jessie did not to steal it, Bette would happily give it
to this little creature. From the door way Tina could see Bette and
Jessie staring at one another and then she saw Jessie do something she
had never seen her do – with out saying anything she placed her small
hands on either side of Bette’s face and looked into her eyes and
smiled. And Bette smiled back in full Porter charm in that flash of
moment Tina could see that they approved of one another.
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aww, so cute, it’s her little daughter, whew, i was sweating for awhile, thinking that tina moved on for sure…there’s definately a chance for those two now to reconnect and get back together…yey, i’m so excited
Ooooooooooooooooooh I’m so excited I just found this story. Oh, please find a way to get them back together. I got all teary when Jessie told Bette she’s the one from the picture in Tina’s room. Come, on how romantic a reunion in Vermont. Can’t wait till Kit finds out about Jessie. Lovin this.
when i saw the summary it broke my heart and i nearly didn’t read it but i love your style so i dived in. this is so lovely – thank you for this – its a real nice twist and you are doing this really well
Love your story. Looking forward to more.
Thats so great. Little Jessie sounds so cute. But I’m sad that Bette is leaving before it even began. How do you get these two together??????
And then there was three. Great beginning
that was so cute i was worried for a min
Beautiful story.. Can you please maybe let them find there way back to each other…Post soon Love this story.
Nice continuation! — So, who’s Nancy? ;-)
This is maybe an opening??? They will move towards each other? Please? Well, please post soon
ok, so its official…you are like my new favorite fanfic writer!!! i have never really left comments but i had to let you know that you are on to something really good!!!i love this story and hope to every god above that you continue. Thanks so much and i look forward to more…O and Jess….soooooo cute!!!
I absolutely loves this story and your writing. You write so romantic and I’m being drawn into B&T’s (your) world. I’m really excited to see how they will stay in contact when Bette leaves and how their relationship will develop from there. I’m already looking forward to next friday :o))
damn chaka got my eyes a lil teary!! continue soon
I wasn’t expecting that! Nice touch!
Splendid as always…
Jessie has great taste in women just like her mommy. How are you going to get these two back together? I can’t wait to find out. Thanks for a great chapter.
Ooooohh damn, I thought it was going to be another woman. YOu really got me with this one. Now maybe they can get back together and be happy. Thanks for the post. Post again soon please.
Why dunt Bette try to get Tina back. It’s obvious that Tina still has feeling for her. Bette’s somehow abtuse sometimes.
You scared me and so glad that Jessie is Tina’s daughter. She so cute and sweet. Hope Bette and Tina talk more and work thing out and get back together again. Ok post soon please, thanks!
excellent wrting and loved it. cant you make them have car trouble and bette stays. not until next friday, hmmm. dont like that. thanks.
OMG! If not naming her daughter after Bette, even if it is her middle name, doesn’t show the love she still has for Bette then I don’t know what does. Beautiful chapter. Post Soon!
oh man..can’t you post before next Friday? I love your story and can’t wait to see what happens when it is time for Bette to leave.