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I thought we could spend the evening together…. PT2
I thought we could spend the evening together. PT2
Tina deepened the kiss, bringing her hand behind Bette’s neck, pulling her closer, regardless of the fact their lips were currently coursing towards becoming bruised with the tell tale signs of intense passion, her urge was that she wanted Bette closer still. Their tongues began a dual for supremacy, only this was a battle that neither wanted to win, but both wanted to be part of.
Bette’s hands remained wrapped around Tina, but their positioning altered its course and destination, her mind setting the journey south towards the roundness surrounded by the lycra that she had earlier admired, her fingers manipulating the surface, feeling the tight curving muscles beneath her hands.
With ragged breathing their lips parted, “Babe, don’t forget we still have company, Shane’s sat beside us!” Bette’s tempered breathing a tell tale sign of how the intensity of their kiss was affecting her.
They both looked around at Shane, only to find an empty seat and no sign of their friend and confidant. Their eyes returned to each others, a small knowing smile of how their friend had upped and left without either of them noticing, they rested their foreheads against each other, eyes locked together, shallow breath emitting from slightly parted lips, their hearts pounding with anticipation of the intensity of the moment.
“How long were you standing behind me T?” Bette enquired – unsure of how much of her heart rending confession Tina had heard.
“It’s Ok babe, I heard it all, every word, I listened to everything you said, and I am so sorry for making you feel all of those things, I know that I haven’t been easy lately”
“But T, I should be spending more time with you and supporting you and being there for you, to support you emotionally, I shouldn’t be working so many hours and we should be talking T, about everything that’s going on, how we feel.” Bette’s rambling words were exposing her vulnerability, trying to voice all her thoughts about her own failings within the current deterioration in their relationship.
“Bette, baby, I haven’t exactly been open to your attention or affection lately, and if we’re being completely honest here, I’m sure that I haven’t really wanted it either, and I uh don’t know why that is,” Tina moved her gaze downward, ashamed at her own admission, the reality of the evening’s emotions finally settling into her mind and shaking her to the core.
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(50 votes, average: 3.90 out of 5)
Wow great, Communicating is important and so is…loving… lol can’t wait for the next one
This is beautiful. ………………comminictating is one big thing in a marrage. They took the first giant step in their future. thanks
Very nice – communication is a great thing! Amazing what you can learn if you just really listen and be honest.
Amazing! See what you can learn when you simply listen and are honest in expressing your feelings. Communication is a key factor in any relationship…esp. marriage. B & T took a big step. Please continue.
Love it, please continue..so many possibilities!!!!
THIS IS GREAT…and yes they need to talk… your doing a wonderful job here… i wish the show did something like this… and yes now bette needs to show tina how much she loves her… so please continue
awesome!! i agree with amandamg – the show should’ve done something like this. can’t wait for the lovin! ^ – ^
Your first two chapters were filled with so much emotion. I could feel the heartbreak and pain coming from both of them. Communication is very important and I think they learned this lesson the hard way. Please make them have happier times together now.
Nicely done Jo.Looking foward to chapter 3.
Keep this story going, please. I love it.
That was wonderful. Looking forward to another chapter.
Please continue this story. If only IC had taken this avenue with the show. Yes, Tina heard Bette say that she loved her, now Bette indeed needs to show Tina how much she loves her. Please continue the story, we all want to see what should have or could have happened. Thanks for the post.
Holy F*** Cow is right this is so awesome. You’ve got SHSL being all vulnerable and SST being all nurturing Damn HOT! HOT! HOT! Great job mate.
WOW i just love what your doing with this, its so emotional,what can i say? except please continue soon cause i cant get enough of it …thanks
Amazing I love this story
That was amazing! Looking forward to more.
This is beautiful and amazing !
More please :)
How lucky we are that B&T are in your capable hands. Wonderful dialogue Mate.
this is a great script-edit – i sure wish IC would have hired you as a writer – please continue this is sooo great and worth exploring …
Very good one, I’ve just read the first one and now I just finished this. And I’m speechless about the way you write. Please post soon!!!
think of all the heartache this would have saved us all.
Good heavens!!! U almost made me cry with all that emotion!!Loving this story..Fantastic job!!
this is great..!
i like them both vulnerable, they are honest with each other and showing how they truly feel about each other…wonderful
OMG – this is so beautiful, warm, tender, loving an so on. I just love the way you are making them communicating and they are so honest with each other..GREAT. Please keep writing :o))
I love the way you’re telling it. This is what I wanted to see.
Well I would say that you captured the essence of Bette very well. It was truly a showcase for her character.