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A Night in the D — Chapter 4
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Tina gazed back up at Bette and for the first time felt a rush of confidence. Those dark curls had been so close she could have reached out and touched them. And there was no reason for it.
“Bette, I don’t think you want to wait until
Bette’s face didn’t alter much, except to betray slight irritation. “No, you’re right. Actually, I don’t want to wait at all. I’d rather you were free now.”
Tina blushed and she knew it. Bette knew it too. “Tina,” she said, leaning forward again, “I have to confess something.”
Their eyes locked. Tina nodded and smiled. “What is it?”
“I’m very attracted to you. I’m flying out of here tomorrow. If it weren’t illegal, not to mention inappropriate, I’d drag you back to my room right now.”
Tina was nonplussed. Utterly. The heat of Bette’s stare was melting her. She slid her chair back from the desk and went to stand up when she heard Bette utter the slightest, deepest moan. Tina felt it like a throbbing from her own body and her eyes moved questioningly to the woman across from her.
“You’re wearing a skirt,” Bette said. “I didn’t notice that before.”
Tina gaped at her, “Oh my god, you’re so forward.” She was trying like ***** to give in to her insecurity but Bette was making it a little tough to stay self-effacing. She knew she couldn’t keep denying this interest without starting to look like an idiot.
“Ok,” Tina breathed out, “You want to get a coffee with me later. Or a drink.”
Bette nodded. “I do.”
“And before then, or right after, seeing as you’re flying out in a matter of hours, you want to drag me upstairs to your room.”
Bette’s lips slid upward into a smile. “Wellnow that you mention it”
Tina laughed, a little disbelievingly, “Can I confess now? Or is that only you?”
“Please,” Bette said, gesturing grandly, “You go.”
“Well,” Tina said, slowly, “I don’t know if I’m going to ***** you at 1 in the morning, but if I don’t kiss you before then, I’ll never decide.”
It was Bette’s turn to look shocked. But she didn’t hesitate. Glancing around, thanking god for the emptiness of her surroundings, she reached across the desk and pulled Tina up towards her. “This will be chaste, ok? There’s a counter between us.”
Tina could barely nod before Bette’s lips were on hers, pressing lightly. Tina’s mouth opened instinctively and Bette teased her lips with her tongue before releasing the blonde and stepping back. Tina’s eyes popped open and she sighed reflexively. “Mmmm,” she whispered and Bette laughed.
“You’re eager, I like that.” Bette winked slyly.
“You’re dangerous,” Tina said, her head spinning with desire. She fell back into her chair. ***** this job, she thought to herself. ***** it so hard.
Bette seemed to read her mind. “Don’t quit now. I don’t want to feel guilty.”
Tina laughed, then smirked. “Don’t flatter yourself.”
Trying to look offended, but failing, Bette teased, “Oh I know, I know. I’m way out ahead on this one.”
For the first time, Tina authentically snapped. “Hey, I said I don’t know if I’m going to ***** you. Believe that.”
The smile on Bette’s face suddenly grew huge. “Hey, I got it, tough girl. I believe.”
Tina relaxed somewhat, but eyed Bette suspiciously, “Don’t make me show you how we do it in the D.”
“Oh please,” Bette said, tossing her curls over her shoulder as she walked away, “You’re already making me wait. Don’t make me beg.”
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What a story. I love the repartee btwn Bette & Tina. The dialgoue is smart, funny and clever. Just the right tone and tension with the gals. I’m hooked and not breathing so well. lol.
More and more interesting, hehe.
Wow!! I have an ice pack on my face cause I had my wisdom teeth pull out and I am so flushed its melting!! Please post soon!! you are an amazing writer!! soo good!!
you’re leaving us dying for more i like this tina and bette so far love the teasing going on but if i’d been tina i would of shoved the job by now
Uhmmm I don’t usually do this but I just finished chapter four and there is no five. What’s up with that? I think your capable of giving us one more chapter today. You seem to be that good. This a nice opening and I’m eager to read where you take these two individuals.
those two just made for each other, match made in heaven, love it
i don’t know whose more turned on – bette or me — phew
i am first your killing me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
make her beg!!! this is sooooooooooo good. Dont make us beg lol
oh my, this is gonna be a giant pissing contest, “don’t make her beg.” who wins this one? great post, enjoying this one. post soon please. thanks.
F*ck!!! That is just SO F*CKING SEXY! You are SO killing me with these short chapters! I see this is another one of those stories I love/hate. I love reading it and I hate getting to the end of a chapter. I pray that you are one of those people who can type fast and does not have ‘writer’s block’ anytime soon. In the words of Bette Porter, “You’re already making me wait. Don’t make me beg.” Please continue! Damn, this is HOTTT! I’m loving it!
very sexy, but very short! I agree please don’t make us beg for more posts!
Very sexy and hot…also very short. LOL. They’re very playful and forward…but who’s got time, Bette leaves in the morning. Damn this story is getting more interesting by the chapter. Please continue.
This story is awesome! More please…
so is bette after some or does she really like tina. if so will tina quither job and move to LA. i think should get to no bette and decide if they canmake it living in different citys.
Just caught up on your story. All I can say is WOW! The anticipation is killing me and I can’t wait until it is 1am in Detroit. You are so teasing us and you better make it worth it. Post ASAP!
This is gooood!