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A Night in the D — Chapter 8
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“You’re what?” Tina asked, staring blankly.
“I’m sick,” Dean repeated, coughing again. “God, so sick. Tina. I can barely breathe.”
The words reverberated and Tina glowered at him. “You can’t be.”
Dean raised an eyebrow inquiringly, “I can’t?”
“No.” Tina stood, scooping up her personal belongings and sliding them into her scuffed leather bag. “I have to be somewhere. I can’t stay.”
“No, I can’t stay,” Dean insisted, looking panicked. “Tina, you owe me. I did it for you!”
“Yeah, well,” Tina said. “I can’t do it for you. I’m sorry.” She kept grabbing her things and Dean’s pout grew larger.
“Tina, I’m serious. I’ve got the flu or something. You know this is not fair. I worked three nights in a row for you last week when you were depressed. You are so not ditching me now!”
Now? You wanna talk now? Tina stared at him. You, ***** boy, are so not doing this to me now.
“Dean, I’m sorry sweetie. I am. But I have something important and I can’t get out of it.”
“What?” he asked. “And since when? What important thing do you have??”
Tina glared. “Don’t be a *****.”
He rolled his eyes, extreme irritation taking over, and the gesture reminded Tina of someone else. Someone upstairs. Waiting. For her.
“I need you,” Dean whimpered.
“I understand that,” Tina answered, looking him directly in the eye. “But I have needs too.”
He scowled. “In general I’m sure, Tina. I’m talking about right now.”
“So am I,” she shot back.
“What needs do you have now?? Sleep, I know. Look, I brought you a Vicodin. You’ll breeze through.”
Tina stared at him, unblinking. “Um, thank you? For thinking of me?”
He frowned. “Honey, don’t get all mainstream on me. I feel wretched enough as it is. I’ll get you some water.”
He started towards the inner office before Tina grabbed his arm. “No, no,” she barked, shoving the pill into his hand and pulling him behind the desk with her, noting his dark curls and perfect skin, and remembering someone else with those same features. Someone upstairs. Waiting.
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Nooooooooooooooooooooooo!!!! Drats! Foiled again! -sigh- I’m interested to see how (if?) this works out. Maybe the storm will get worse and Bette will have to stay longer???…or maybe Bette will come visit the office???…hmmm…
Awww u dun play nice :(
Now that’s just cruel…brilliant but cruel
This story just continues to be f-ing brilliant!! I agree with dixirella – Bette should stay longer and make an office visit –at least! Please post again soon!!!
oh no…tina needs miracle, now…
this sucks!!!!!!!!!!
noooooooo. why aren’t tina calling to tell bette? agh. but this is great. thanx for posting.
God, your writing is so fresh and clever. Do you write script for a sitcom? You could, ya know. Where have you’ve been hiding?
Well I am officially off bed rest, but are gonna gimme an anxiety attack! You want to kill us?? who will read your story if we all die waiting?? LOL just kidding!! You are just so f-ing brilliant… I said it three chapters ago… I will just have to trust you! and even if it gives me a tooth ache I will…
That’s just mean, plain ole mean!!!! But then I’m thinking that you know that and you have something else up your sleeve right???? Pls say yes….Oh god I’ve waited for these chapters and now this…errrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
The useless man! I hate to see guys useless… But maybe it’s good thing for Tina and Bette’s relationship if they want to develop one.
Awwww, what an upset! Great story though!!
NO F*CKING WAY!!!
you trying to kill me, luvr? UGH…you posted this one quickly..how about another…I am loving this story and I hope someone else can come in and cover for the wuss of a man. thanks
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!! But Why?
Please let Bette be grounded one more day. They need to get together.
OK offically that was co crual you deserve a medal…for cruality! my god woman what were you thinking…tho you post so often im sure youll put us out of our misery SOON??? ok please then!
Ohh no bad luck for Tina!
hype.. damn u .. all this and its just hype.. pff heehe.. great writing.. and im loving where ur going with it.. i think i can see it.. but.. hey u might surprize me again and go someplace else.. hehe :)
All Tina has to do is close de doors of the hotel and go upstairs!it’s as simple as that :) post soon please!
Ok, I am just going to break both of Dean’s legs and beat him down. How dare he get sick and keep Bette and Tina from devouring each other! Deeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaannnnnnnn! You are SO not cool right now, man! LOL! Great story! I’m going to drop a few ice cubes down the front of my pants now. The cubes and I will be awaiting your next post!
more snow right ? oh god i am just in pieces and thats not nice when i have to go to work in an hour. brilliant
Just caught up with your story. . LOVE IT! I hope Bette goes back downstairs. . .PLEASE POST AGAIN SOON!