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From Afar
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The poignancy of the moment is not lost
on either of them. Today that started as
a normal day like many others was now ending with a life-altering commitment
being made by both. This was a
commitment that had been waiting in the wings for days and months. The fact that the predictable happen today
was fate and unavoidable a perfect day to make this happen. Sealing their promises with a kiss Bette
pulls back and needs to laugh. “Wow what
a difference.”
Tina not getting what Bette means
“Difference?”
“Yeah remember the last time it took me
a week to get all my plans perfect before I could ask you and even then I almost
pre-asked you before I asked. I was so
nervous about you rejecting me.” Bette is still laughing but laughing at
herself.
“Yeah you were pretty nervous. I loved your plan though it was so romantic.”
Tina defends Bette.
Bette laughs to yourself at the memory
and Tina defense of it. But her mind
quickly turns on something Tina said. “Baby am I romantic enough for you these
days? It just seems like we never have
the space or time alone and when we do we connect so deeply. I just want you to be happy.” Bette asks
suddenly concerned.
“It would be nice to have a get away
with you. We can fulfill all my romantic
needs then. Let’s try to do something
like that when things settle down a little.
Would that work for you?” Tina says with a smile at the thought.
“Yeah it would.” Bette commits her mind
already turning.
Chapter 140 – Reality
Irene came home with Anna to a house
full of laughter. Bette and Tina were
giggling uncontrollably in the kitchen as they both were attempting to fix
dinner.
“Bette of course I knew you were going
to ask me. I would have had to be as
dense as this ice cube to not know what all your hints were about. Did you really think that I would say no?”
Tina asks surprised at Bette’s insecurity over the first time she asked for her
commitment.
“Well yeah there was that outside
chance.” Bette says trying to act insulted and hurt. “I mean it was only a choice between me or
your family that you talked about all the time.
You know whenever you would make something special for dinner you would
always tell me how your mother did this for your dad or that special little
something for your sister. All those
special little efforts that meant so much to you. Those family ties that you swore you would
loose if they found out the truth about you and me. I just didn’t realize at the time that I was
more important to you than your family.” Bette confesses.
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WFT!!!!!!!!!!!!!GRT!!!!!!!! your killing me
Talking to Peggy might help.only if Peggy will wait until the other mess is over. If Bette and Tina are smart They will protect Anne with everything that They have. Helene is really sick, needs help. You can almost feel for her.but can reach out to help her. Shane is so tired and such a good friend. thanks
Bring it on …the bitch needs to go down!!! and shes digging that hole for herself sooo well…
Teasing again huh? hehehehe…. it’s all good tho. Like the chapter…. thank god Peggy is now coming in… I can’t wait to see what happens! Jwet you’re fantastic as usual! :D
you are like the puzzle master. it just keeps getting deeper and better. were gonna be having a cold snap here so it should reach you in a couple of days. sorry. thanks. wonderful as usual.
Its time to get the big mama to get her crazy and creepy daughter home before Bette kick her crazy ass. Hope Bette get Peggy in person, goodluck to her. Ok post soon please, thanks!
another great chapter. I never said before but I love this story.. how could I not love it?… Can’t wait to see Bette and Peggy talk. Thanks
Just caught up on the last 3 chapters after being away on vacation. Simply beautiful. Thanks, J. I just have to say that I loved the whole commitment sequence. Have I told you how beautiful your writing is?! And now, it’s time to have a conversation with Peggy. Looking forward to the fall of Helena!!
yeah its about time Bette talk to Peggy..to Peggy start to control her freak daughter..that bitch is beyong crazy she is evil..she need some ass kick and quickly..great as always thanks :o)
Still loving it. Post soon. Looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing this story.
Great job! I think maybe now you will give us some insite into why Helena REALLY hates Bette I am hoping that Peggy can shed some light on this.. Maybe Irene might be good choice to train for James’s job??? Just a thought..Post soon you know how much I love to see a new chapter posted.. One more thing.. I really though Bette was going to tell Tina about the delivery room when Tina brought up her ring.. I guess I have to wat on that…Thanks again
Oooh the drama of it all! Lol, keep it coming. At some point I really want Bette deliver a knockout punch to Helena. I know she’ll probably have her arrested for assault but the satisfaction of it would be amazing. Great chapter once again.
B&T have to have 24 hour watch over Anna and i hope peggy will help, helena has to be stopped..and i’m also still waiting on bette admitting that she was there during the delivery
Ok, so you are forgiven for now considering that that wasn’t too much of a cliffhanger, BUT PLEASE continue with more of your delicious story! I can’t seem to get enough:) Hmm, I wonder what Peggy’s gonna say. I hope it’s nothing to stop helena from falling for the bait with the other foundation. keep writing. I’ll be reading.
After a long hard day at work; and some down time with friends, it is so nice to come home to this story! Thanks for continue to share. I did not mean to point out the HMS … I actually forgot HMS is for Hot Monkey Sex!! I’m getting old.I’m kind of hoping that Peggy doesn’t come to the rescue mostly because I feel Bette and Tina has enough resources (friends) and don’t need Peggy to step in….maybe give insight. I guess I just feel Bette, Tina and their family and friends will come through. BUT it is your story and a very good one. Gosh, I’m long winded at night?! Thanks and I really mean it that this is a nice story to come home to, after a long day at work! Thanks.
It took me 4 days to read the entire story and believe me, I don’t regret it. It is full of hope and hapiness and it makes me glad. I love the way you write, you can convey so well the differents emotions… Thank you very much and please, post soon !!
Thanks for another fantastic chapter as you meticulously complete the story. I’m still curious about how and when Bette will reveal to Tina her presence in the delivery room and Peggy’s insights into Helena’s behavior.
Bette is being very calm and using her intellgience to handle Helena. But if Helena tries to lay a finger on Anna, I think Bette would kill her. I love how Bette is with Anna, she brings out a totally different side of Bette. As all of them have been another great chapter.
ROFLMFAO at your comment!!!! I think a tree house is a great idea, but we should have two, the first a very rough prototype, HELLena must visit this to check it out, but oh so suddenly she falls out, bangs her head and then the tree house falls out the tree and lands on her. Well one problem solved. The we can work on a new design for the uncollapseable tree house, with crushed velvet cushions!!! LMFAO that was classic, what shade shall we go for? Do we get to spray the SHSL 4 SST on the outside?
yes about time, another great as usual, please post soon
I am going to love to see Peggy’s reaction to these photo’s. Helena little house of cards is about to come tumbling down around her. Helena is really and truely a sick puppy (No offense intended towards puppy’s LOL.). I love that B&T are waring their rings again, but I thought that Bette would use that time to reveal that she was a Anna’s birth.(and yes Jwet I know that you are tired of me mentioning this Hee, Hee–sorry for being a bad girl) love you anyway :o)
Helena has her cleats dug in…can’t wait to see Peggy reacts.
Peggy to the rescue..GREAT JOB..THANKS
Completely and totally Awesome as usual. Still loving this story and I can never get enough of it.