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A Christmas story…chapter 1 of…who knows….
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Chapter i: Drama in the department store…Bette vs. her conscience
It was that time of year again…here I am at another damn department store…why Bette…why?….sometimes I ask myself why the ***** I put myself through this…I hate shopping with a passion….usually I would have my assistant James do it for me…but he so needed an earlier vacation this year…supposely his boyfriend came to town and he wanted to spend time with him being that he only sees him 4 months out of the 12 calendar year…woo!…I don’t know he could do it…”okay Bette I know you hate shopping but you have to get the ***** out the car…staying here in the parking would only delay your shopping…so either way it goes you have to get the ***** out the car”…there’s goes my conscience again…sometimes I wish it would just shut the ***** up…I yell out loud suddenly causing a crowd to stop and stare at me….I throw my hands up and say
“what?… like you’ve seen any one scream before”…***** I stare back…
I grill them like they grill me…they continue about this business probably thinking I’m an ignorant woman…I’m not people I just hate shopping on Christmas…I get the strength to open the car door and drag myself out onto the sement service….I close my door and begin walking towards the entrance…once inside my head begin to spin with the amount of women that roamed the floor…I’m in heaven..women…women…women…oh my…there are so many of them…which way do I go?….who do I talk to…“Bette…you know damn well that you are suppossed to be shopping for clothes…not women…women this season are out of stock…over”…there it ***** goes again….I say
“would you just shut the ***** up” I scream out loud startling the customers in the store…everyone stops and looks at me…I push my cart away embarassed….
I find a spot in the ladies section to try and hide my face…what the ***** is wrong with me?…why am I ***** flipping and bugging the ***** out…I wonder did Alice put something in my coffee this morning while I was at the planet…“you know damn well Alice didn’t put anything in your drink…how could she when you was watching her the whole time?”…oh god it won’t leave me alone?…why?…why did I have to be embedded with a conscience…why?…I buried my face into my hands and rubbed my face…I looked up when a woman said…
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I love how Bette talks to her self. I seem to be doing a lot of that myself. Oh right, that is what is known as insanity (or Bi-Polor). Nay, just kidding. Great story.
This is so funny nad cute about Bette and let see what’s next, thanks!
ok life is sooo unfair..why this kind of thing never happened to me find some hot woman to show me her bra in a department section???..lol..man..ok vakkav i really like it this lets see whats next..nad lets see if i can ready your mind..lol..post soon thanks :o)
Wow you are really on a roll here. Please don’t stop, I love all your stories and this is no exception lol. I bet they’ll meet again at the Planet or something. Please post soon
Love this story. Looking forward to more.
WOW..GRT strt, Grt chapter!I Hope Tina is like Alice’s frien or sum shit like that..I dunno w.e has fate throwing em in2eachutha’z direction waltsing in2the utha’z arms..”if it’s meant to be…it’ll be”…THNX4writing, Post soon I hope? :D
How funny is it that Bette is talking to herself then yells out loud at herself. LOL. It was cute and sexy how they were flirting. Tina got Bette’s whole name and Bette only got Tina’s first. Let’s hope they run into one another at the Planet. Please continue.
Ok I think maybe Bette has Tourette Syndrome like seriously that was some weird Shit right there hahahahahhaha, but I know tibette will meet again I’m just ready to read it, nice start great chapter