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Because You Love Me – Chapter 4: Finale
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Previously…
“And how do you think the woman standing beside her feels?” asked Bette softly.
Tina looked up from the painting and right into Bette’s eyes, “I’m not sure she is ready to think with her heart yet. Her mind is telling her to sit back down but her heart is saying to take a huge leap into this woman’s arms. She feels like she’s always hanging by a moment, never knowing what to do or say next. But in all this confusion and doubtfulness only one thing is clear to her, and it’s that she is in love with her best friend.” Tina had to look away as a tear rolled down her cheek. Bette reached in and softly touched Tina’s cheek. Then, just as she did moments ago with their picture, she wiped the tear away with her thumb.
“T, look at me,” Bette placed a finger under Tina’s chin, urging her to look up. Tina just turned the other way trying to hold back her tears.
“Tina, sweetie pleaselook at me,” asked Bette again. Tina finally, but slowly lifted her head to look at Bette. She couldn’t help but smile and how beautiful and innocent Tina looked, nose red and eyes glossy. Here was this amazing woman proclaiming her love for her, but it wasn’t just any woman, it was her best friend, it was the love of her life.
“You are absolutely beautiful, you know that?”
“Bette”
“And not only are you beautiful, you’re strong, you’re intelligent, you’re caring, and you’remy heart T, you’re my everything. You are everything I could ever ask for, want or need. You are everything that makes me love you, you are everything that makes me in love with you.” Bette just looked at Tina, waiting for her to say something.
“I see you sitting here, wanting more from me, and I don’t think I can give it to you,” Tina could feel herself slipping away from Bette. “I wish I wasn’t in love with you,” Tina said in a voice she herself almost couldn’t hear. But Bette heard every word.
Bette broke the eye contact, this time trying to hold back her own tears.
“You know I have this habit,” said Bette, “you are the first person I think of when I wake up in the morning. I spend half my day trying to get you out of my mind, failing every time by the way, only to have you as my last thought before going to bed at night, every night. But I would never wish it away.”
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I hope that you’re going to be an English major or one where you can use your excellent writing skills.
more please hated to see this one end
THAT WAS GREAT REALLY ENJOYED IT, i agree there is so much you could do with a sequel… but if you dont go down that road then maybe you should consider another story either way i enjoyed your writting ..thanks
I hereby rebel and yell: More, more, more. And The Smiths would add: Please please pleaseLet me, let me, let meLet me get what I want.Love your fic to pieces, Damien. Please continue. Cheers!
Please keep this story going!! Its interesting to read and explore how friends can become more after only knowing friendship!
Really great story. Glad that Eric knew and wasn’t bothered by Tina falling in love with Bette. That was very nice. The “Bette Porter Love Test” was funny…don’t stop at aleast a sequel…but it’s up to you. This story was great and thanks for sharing. Happy New Year!
Oh this is awesome and lovely. I hope u have a sequel and new story soon. Thanks!
Great story. I love it. And I’m with the others, please do a sequel. lol
grt waiting for part two!!!!!!!!!!!!1
hey, I can see you planned it as a short story but I’m with the others, it’s too good to end here. please, change your mind and write more.
I agree with everyone else… you must continue with this storyline. B&T are so cute and funny that they can’t end like this!
I hope that you will reconsider and do a follow up to this awesome story. Have a great New Year.
I loved this story, from best friends to lovers, nice to read a story with no or little drama. Thank you for writting it, maybe a few more chapters to see how things work out with B&T been lovers – only a suggestion
you can’t stop here…there’s so much more you can tell about them…go for a sequel…this was great…thanks
D this cant b the end its to good not to continue!! plz plz more!!
This wass a great story and i hope do a sequel.
Oh please dont stop here love this story
Aww this was so sweet to read first thing in the morning. Now could we please have more? This is too good to not continue. *puppy dog eyes*
damien..I hope you continue this story with a sequel. Even a new story would be fine. thanks
The end? Awww… more… pls?? Love your story very much…
What a great story. I’ve really enjoyed it. I”m sad it’s ending so soon. I hope you continue with a sequel or another story, I love how you write. Thanks for a great story about our two favorite girls.
Great chapter and story. I will hate to see it end. Please continue. Thanks for sharing your story.
END???? NO THIS CAN’T B THE END….YOU GOTTA LET THEM AT LEAT CONSUMMATE THE RELATIONSHIP, U KNOW LET’S SEE HOW TINA RESPONDS ETC. THINK ABOUT IT HUH AND CONTINUE…PLEASE!!!!!!!
Sweet and fun – a great story! Although you had me worried there when you had Bette walking atop that poor widow… “She walked over the widow looking over the driveway” ;-)
I love the story! Especially the final chapter! It made me smile all the time. Thank you very much for the New Year’s gift to all us readers!
The end???? Nooooo you can’t stop here…please do a sequel or continue. I love this story (reminds me of how me and my girlfriend started as more than friends many years ago) and I absolutely loves your writing. I will be looking forward to more from you :o))