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How the WeHo West Was Won – Chapter 1
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How the WeHo West Was Won
The sunlight streaking through the window touching her face awoke Bette. Her mind was immediately restless but her body was bone tired due to her deputies sending for her in the middle of the night to help break up a saloon brawl. Bette extended her arm to the empty place beside her and burrowed her head in her pillow. There used to be a time when she would have found Tina there, and if matching her breathing to the calm blonde’s didn’t work she would have nuzzeled Tina’s neck and found all the spots that she couldn’t resist. Sure Tina would have feigned a protest and cried that she needed to start her day at the school in mere hours while Bette wouldn’t be needed at the pokey until later in the day when the drunks from the night before had finally sobered up, but they both knew she would give in and satiate Bette and leave her sleeping like a baby. Those were days before Tina’s ultimatum and her leaving Bette for being married to the law.
Bette had thrown half a dozen men into the cells last night. Her patience was particularly thin and that was saying something since patience (except for when she was tracking down two or four legged beasts) was something she notoriously lacked. Carmen insisted she needed to get laid and offered her one of her girls on the house. Bette replied that it wouldn’t look too good for the Sheriff to be seen visiting her house of ill repute so Carmen offered to send a girl to her place right away, again Bette declined Carmen’s generous gesture with a chuckle. Carmen made it known that her offer was open ended. It’s not that Carmen was trying to bribe her way into the good graces of the Sheriff she genuinely liked Bette and wanted to help. It also happened to be bad for business to have half of her best customers locked up every night by the short-tempered Sheriff.
Instead of the steady sound of Tina’s heart beating Bette heard the birds chirping and Sonya in the kitchen, raking out the fireplace, getting the kitchen ready for another day. Bette knew there was no way she would fall back to sleep so she prepared herself to start the day. Bette got out from under the covers and was welcomed by a chilly spring morning. She walked over to her dresser and poured cold water from a white pitcher into a matching bowl and splashed the cold water on her face. She took off her white cotton sleep shirt and took the washcloth and dipped it into the water and rubbed some soap onto the cloth as well and rubbed along and under her arms, her torso and ***** and shivered. She dipped back into the bowl, rung out the cloth and started on her legs, she didn’t neglect her most private places, but she was quick, she didn’t want to give any credence to what Carmen had suggested last night. She opened the drawers of her dresser, put on under clothes and a comfortable pair of denim jeans and an old shirt and her favorite broken in tan cowboy boots. She picked up the brush with the worn silver handle and ran it through her unruly curls and tied her hair back with a black ribbon and put on her weathered buckskin jacket.
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HAHA I see I’m not the only one amused by Carmen’s role in this story. Hell I almost fell out of the chair laughing and immediately had images of “Best Little Whorehouse in Texas” floating through my head. Anyway, hell yes continue with this because I said so! We have to see B&T go for a roll or 908374583531 in the hay. ;)
Definitely continue with this story. I always love fresh approachs like this one.
What a delightfully different beginning. Please post very soon.
Man this is interesting and please continue, thanks!
wow, this is gonna be good…….keep em’ commin guv, keep em’ commin
hi madc! left you a note but it may have disappeared! anyway — just wanted to say — keep churning ’em out cowgirl! :-)
Very interesting! please continue :D
like it continue please
I love westerns and this was great. Fun, different and due to your writing I can actually see Bette Porter as the sheriff of a town and Tina as the school teacher.
What a fun take on the L-gals. Bette’s the sheriff, Tina’s the school marm, Helena’s the bandito (although the doing for others thing…hmmm…), and Carmen’s the madame. Not to forget Kit, and the little nudge at Ivan. I look forward to seeing how the rest of the crew get worked in. And I feel sorry for Carmen if Jenny goes to work for her…although hiring Shane might give her a whole wider clientele.
Very interesting. I’m loving it. Please continue soon.
I really love the old westerns and think your putting the L gals in this setting is great. The characters are beautifully placed and I am especially amused by Carmen as the madam. Now, IMHO, a “city” cowboy wouldn’t wear chaps; that’s for the cowboy working cattle in brush county. However, Bette may just want to be impressing Miss Tina, the school marm. (Maybe Miss Tina is particularly attracted by chaps. That brings lots of fantasies to mind.)
Awesome! This was so much fun to read! An L Word western lol. I like it. Bette as a sheriff, Tina as a school teacher, and Carmen as a madam – I can totally picture it now. I wonder how you’ll introduce Shane and maybe Jenny though. Will Shane be a womaizing cowboy or deputy? Will she be one of Carmen’s girls? Will she be a stranger just happening to pass through the town, and deciding to stay for a bit when she sees Carmen? I’m so curious! I wanna know what happens next, so please continue!
Great start. Do continue please~
Fantastic MadCap!! I hope to read more…I love period stories!!
Great start can’t wait for more!!!