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Bette continues her journey living her fantasy down Tina’s
chest but at the same time Bette begins to gently caress Tina’s outer thigh,
slowly running her left hand in circular motions with the lightest of feather
touches. “I can’t live without your love
there”
Bette once again almost looses her focus on Tina’s
breasts. They are so much more luscious
since Tina’s pregnancy. They fill
Bette’s mouth as she sucks, tugs and licks, feeling them become hard points
beneath her administering. “I’ve locked
it there”
The touch of Bette’s hand mimicking Tina’s nipples, becoming
harder by the moment. The deep primal
moan penetrates Bette’s thoughts as she hears Tina. “I need it there”
Bette continues making her way down to Tina’s navel running
her tongue around the rim before plunging in to explore its depths. Bette now drags her hand up to Tina’s
center. “I live for it there”
She can feel the heat before she gets there. Creasing her brow Bette needs to focus, the
combination of Tina’s aroma, her heat and it’s feel against Bette’s tongue and
fingers are leaving her stimulated almost beyond her control. “As long as you’re in my heart”
The tingling radiating from her own center is a tide
rising. Bette needs to increase the
speed of her journey if she has any hope of reaching her goal before she comes
into her own. “You will always be with
me inside”
Bette now moves with all speed to Tina’s core. Taking her fingers Bette gently spreads her
folds and slid two fingers in. The
warmth of the welcome encouraging Bette continue in speed and depth. “I can’t live without it there”
With her right hand Bette pulls Tina’s leg up over her
shoulder, bending down to run her tongue over Tina’s clitoris. “There will never by another”
Lingering on the nub with her tongue, Bette can feel Tina
close, with one more deep thrust and a twist Bette hits Tina’s spot. “Only you in my heart”
Bette can feel Tina start to tighten, her breathing rough “I
only have room for your love”
Tina explodes into Bette about the same time Bette reaches
high tide herself. “I survive because
your there”
“With your love in my heart”
“I love you”
Boat returned from its cruise returning
back to dock, they are alone a drift with their rocking motion as they both lay
wrapped in each other in front of the fire.
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speechless again LOL…i can see poor baby with her sad face calling for mama…i love B&T loving, they are so belong together…thanks
been outta pocket for a while but just caught up. thanks for the updates and please know that they are enjoyed.
I love the way you completely cover all the elements in a story with such passion, humor, drama and grace. I appreciate your immense talent and how generously and faithfully you share it with us. Thank you.
I can’t believe I’m about to say this BUT IN DANA’S DEFENSE I recall once watching a comic porn film (so long ago it was shown at a drive-in and Ron Jeremy was a young man) in which a bed recalled the various encounters it had supported.
Great story, also like the connection of Kit with Anna, let hope everthing goes as planned for Bette and Tina. Looking forward to your up and coming chapters.
Well mate, what can I say – your comment blew me away – thank you so much. HFC is just as it is though, this story and your writing has been inspirational, as has your friendship. LMAO at the performance issues within the “SHSL & SST Bed of Lurve”, its a lot to live up to! Do you think we should have one of those beds on our pedestal?? Also I like that Tina can get Bette into just as much of a “state” as SHSL!!! Magic!
I’m really glad you carved out some special time with B&T. I’m down with Dana saying no to ALice in the B&T bed. : )
As always great chapter and the love between these two is so obvious in your writting it all comes out so naturally…so only a few chapters left and tho thats sad for us its also coming to a very natural end youve taken this story to such limits and always kept us hooked i truly love it and am looking forward to the finale but more importantly to new stories written by you as i can only imagine if they are anything like this they will continue to entertain and amaze us oh god im gushing oops sorry ya know i love it tho!lol
Thank you for the high praise. It is I who has been blessed by your friendship. I was blown away by your writing in your first story, ‘Let It Go’ and I have had the pleasure of watching you grow into a master writer with this story. Your depth of passion for your characters and the way you allow us to visualize them has been extraordinary. I bow to YOU! I sincerely hope that you will continue to write so that your adoring fans, including me, can be taken along on a wonderous ride. I loved the ‘favorite wine story’…..priceless! I’m glad Tina was able to answer the Love Poem in her own special way! So, is there any pumpkin pie left?
Excellent as always Jwet.. Can’t wait for the meeting and BTW you did an excellent job with Bette and Tina REALLY connecting.. Post soon. I also don’t want to see this story come to an end… Post soon..
I’ll ask again. Why are you a *insert expletive of your choice here* writing machine? Damn. Getting all caught up was so much fun and now you’re telling me that it’s almost over? *frowning* Looking forward to what else you have in store babe.
Well, I don’t want to blame anyone for no multi-post…but….with all the laughing with Ferg1 and Down Low; could we hope for a joint story venture between you’all? Thank Chasemenow for writing (parts of) this post; I’m guessing she wrote Tina’s response to Bette and the Bed of Love??? I’m so still enjoying this story. Thanks to you and your writing partner(s) continuing this story!
Bette and Tina awesome and hot hot. Alice and Dana so funny. Ok now let see what’s next, thanks!
Awesome….. Wonderful thanks
The Bette and Tina of the last two chapters are so romantic and sexy – just beautiful. Bette was brilliant.Your story is wonderful, as usual. Sorry I haven’t been able to comment for awhile, but I’m still around and admiring your work.
Excellent. Looking forward to the next one.
Wonderfulllll………………….
Humbling? Ahhhh…thanks! I often do not read as I don’t have the time to read stories and write mine (as you pointed out) but I do enjoy yours and always make a point to read it although I don’t always comment. Good job – loved Dana in this chapter with her performance issues! I posted another chapter right before this so you’ll see it and yes it’s been a while…Thanks!
AWESOME!!!! Like I would expect anything less. Wahoooo…
Wonderful!!! Just finished reading the last three chapters and they were all excellent and so romantic with the girls on the yacht. The description of Bette making love to Tina and the words that she said were awesome. Outstanding depiction of their lovemaking. Thanks for the posts. Hate to see this coming to an end. Post soon please.
I love your play on words. The dialogue during Bette and Tina’s lovemaking is breathtaking. I look forward to the end of this story as well as the start of a new one. You’re a wonderful writer.
This story has touched us all. You are my fan fiction goddess! I will celebrate the close of this story and anticipate the beginning of the next. I know you can’t stay away for long. Bring it home J, I will follow.