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No More Crying (Part 1?)
4:00 A.M.-Thursday
Oh God, she’s so beautiful. I can’t believe I left her for Lara. What was I thinking? It just feels so good to have her in my arms again. These thoughts ran through Dana’s mind as she stared at
All of a sudden the alarm went off and she wondered just how long she’d been staring at
“Don’t worry, baby, sleep all you want. I have a surprise for you in the morning when you wake up.” And with that Dana got up and got ready.
8:00 A.M.-Thursday
Just as
She hid behind the door and when the door opened she hit the person on the head, knocking the person down.
“OW! What you do that for?”
“Oh My God, I’m so sorry! Dana! Are you okay?”
“No, I think I need a kiss to make it better.”
“Really?” She placed a kiss on the spot where she hit her. “Better?”
Sniff. “A little.” Then Dana hit
“Ow.”
“Do you need a kiss to make it better?”
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great start….I have to say that I’m an absolute sucker for any story where Alice plays guitar…keep it up
Yum Yum!!!… more Danish. I love it. Dana really went all out to get Alice that guitar and then to have it for so long before making a gift of it shows her commitment to getting Alica back. Keep on writing.
I really hope you continue with this story! Oh my god I’m such a sucker for stories where Alice plays the guitar too. Please continue!
Of course you should continue. They are so sweet together. I wonder how they found their way back to each other in your story.
Awwww dana is soo sweet, luvin this fic so far keep em commin’!!
Great start… by all means continue. I loved the breakfast in bed, a peach with vanilla yogurt,lol. Dana is a true romantic. Alice and Dana are so sweet together. Thanks.