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After loving you – c 10
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After loving you chapter 10 All the king’s horses and all the king’s men Bette’s condo Bette looked at the caller ID on her phone and frowned. She and Tina had not talked on the phone since they separated, but now her name appeared on her cell. It was early, but Tina knew that Bette would be awake and still at home. “Tina.” “Bette.” Tina’s voice sounded shaky. “Everything’s OK. I want you to know that first.” “What is it?” Bette began to feel some fear. “Angie was sick last night, but she’s OK now, she’s just fine,” Tina rushed these last words to reassure Bette. “She had an earache and a high fever, but they took care of her at the hospital.” “I’ll be right over.” Tina’s house When Tina found herself talking into a dead phone, she went back into Angie’s room and told the nurse that Bette was coming. She stood by the bed and looked at her, so exhausted that it was hard to stand. Almost immediately, it seemed, Bette was looking into the crib. Tina wondered if she had dozed while standing up. Was that possible? Angie was drowsy but reacted to her other mom. Her eyes always lighted up and her little arms and legs moved happily when she saw Bette. This time, though, Bette noted, she wasn’t as active as usual. But she recognized Bette and was happy. Bette stroked her head and face and allowed Angie to grab one of the fingers of her other hand. “Her grip isn’t as strong.” “She’ll be OK.” Bette looked up at Tina and really studied her for the first time since arriving. Tina looked haggard. “When did you last sleep?” Tina looked at her with dark eyes, “I don’t remember. Not last night.” “You need some sleep. Come on.” Bette had moved around the crib to Tina, put her arm around her and led her toward the bedroom. Bette got out some pajamas and led her into the bathroom. “ Bette sat on the bed and waited. Just as she had decided to go into the bathroom and check on Tina, the door opened.
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Did Bette just say that she might be in love with Leigh or are my eyes deceiving the hell out of me!!!
No Shahi thats what you read…Poor Bette thats all I can muster today. Thanks Pancha
WOAH…wasnt expecting that!!!and not sure Bette or Tina were either…so ill just trust you and where your giong with it…But! and theres always a BUT…”there was no intimacy”…so methinks theres a very long road to go yet…Maybe just maybe Bette had to do this to figure out where or what shes going to do about Leigh.ON a lighter note when i saw NC17 i did assume it was going to be Bette and (yes guys im sorry!)Leigh…lol. so thanks as always lovin it!
This story is still stressing me. On one hadn its great Tina seems to have figure out as most do, that the grass is not always greener, its just different grass. Bette, is struggling with so much she doesn’t know what the heck she’s doing. Theirs no doubt that they love each other, even if Bette cares for Leigh, but until Bette and Tina can let go of the excess baggage, it will always be touch and go. Waiting for more, I think.
When I saw this chapter was NC-17 I had almost come to the conclusion that it was Bette and Leigh but then thought, “Well, it COULD be B&T.” The dork in me was obviously hoping for the latter even if it wouldn’t have been totally realistic. Tina’s last thought just tells me that she definitely isn’t over the affair. And Bette is AGAIN left feeling like she did the day of the ultrasound in episode 209, except this time she probably did just want it to be a mindless fuck and that’s it. A part of me feels bad for Bette, but at the same time the set up was similar to that of 209. Anyone with half a brain could see what was about to happen. Eh, I could go in circles on this which just means I can’t fully justify the actions of either of them without a counter justification for the other side.
She thinks she loves Leigh doesn’t equal she’s in love with Leigh, rite? Even not equal she loves Leigh. I’m a pollyanna. I will never believe Bette or Tina could really move on after one another. I think I’m a 60% Jenetter+40% TeeLunner=100% TiBetter. I’ll love both of them as long as they’re together at the end, you too. =D
This was awesome – having them connect around the baby and then stumble into sex – I like how you are writing Bette as someone struggling to figure herself out something I wish IC would do. Now how about Tina can she get introspective to.
Can’t wait for you to give us the analysis, Pancha. (Yeah, I was a little surprised, too.)
great update!!!!!!!! b&T
Lordy, Lordy, Lordy! Bette and her women. Who’s she gonna pick? Only Pancha knows. Thanks for the update- love reading this story!
surprise surprise sex scene just like what season 2 offered! I could actually breathe after this chapter… I feel like they will always share something that can never be forgotten… I know you have to do your thing to the story, but me as a B&T fanatic, I’d always want them to forever be together.
well well well… i think maybe you are waring down… you know bette and tina belong together… i hope this is not just a tease… and the hurt… hurts a little less… thanks… please continue
i was like lamentamini…i was thinking, NC-17, oh no, bette and leah will do it…but now, after bette said she might love leah and that she left right after sex with tina, i don’t know if i’m happy they had it or sad they had it….i think bette loves leah but she’s in love with tina and she needs to go to her now and maybe talk
hmm this could go either you are doing a great job keeping us on the edge it’s not easy being Bette or Tina these days.
pancha, I have been following your writings for a long time and truly have enjoyed them, I trust you on where you will take this story, with only 3 chapters to go, I know it wil be good.and worth looking forward to. my vote is already in for you to win winter fan fiction
only 3 chapters to go ha. i agree with B&TF, to love someone and to be in love are two different things
OY!
wow, intense, not sure how I feel about which way I hope this story goes…but then I don’t really have to sweat about that it’s all in your hands…but I’m along for the ride…tks
Remember that S2 ep Late, Later, Latent? After the ultrasound, how B&T manage to end up in bed together? You might as well call this chapter Late, Later, Latent, Lunatics! Oh, these two will be the death of me. I so desperately want them to be together but, at the same time, I want to see how they get off that emotional rollercoaster ride that they’d bought tickets for. And I always love your take on their fic, Pancha. Cheers!
Just saw S3 E1… donnow whether I should put hope on B&T or not… the same thing goes to this story… should I put hope on B&T together?
Well atleast before you break them up they had a “Brief Encounter” They will always love each other but they need this time apart to heal themselves. Who knows,I can see them getting back together in a few years. Thanks for the story Pancha…now I will resume your other story for happier times!!
I read all your replies to the comments again. All the signs indicate that there’ll be no TiBette at the end, including your choosing 13 as the finale. I began to mourn now…
I think if Tina could forgive Bette then they could be together. Otherwise, we are just going to have reoccurences of what transpired in the first three glorious chapters of this story. There needs to be true forgiveness and resolution. Tina needs to make up her mind: Can she live her life w/o Bette in a sexual manner? I personally don’t believe so. They crave each other as plants crave water and sunlight. Oh, they’ll be OK away from each other for a short period of time but like a moth to a flame, they are drawn to each other. It is an immutable fact.
I believe my Friend that that was a tease. The last horay for Bette and Tina. We know they love,But not in love Hope Tina enjoyed it. will be her last from Bette.. thanks
so are u going to bring them back together or are they going to be sex buddies,and what about leigh she’s to much of a nice to be caught up in the bette and tina triangle.
After this chapter, I feel like I bought tickets for a rollercoaster ride. I love how introspective you have made Bette in this story. I just hope her introspection leads her back to Tina. I’m sorry, I’m a TiBette fan!!! Love the story.
Thanks for another great TiBette story.
oh shit….that’s all.
What a surprise chapter. I thought that Bette and Leigh having sex but not is Bette and Tina just like it S2. Now Bette think she love Leigh but hope she not in love with her and she still in love with Tina and they will talk and work thing out and get back together soon hopefully. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Bette thinks she’s in love with Leigh, but she knows she’ll always love Tina. Poor Bette, she’s just as confused as ever. The lack of intimacy with Tina after sex was due to their fear, not because they no longer love one another. They had sex because of the common fear they shared of Angie being sick and them being together; however, they weren’t ready yet. It’s like getting married and then saying I love you. You know your destination, but you have to begin with the journey. JMHO. Please post soon.
they both juz gotta figure it out. is juz too heart wrenching.
Bette can use Tina like that this is not a cycle of revenge..if she donsent thing she can be and love only Tina let het go..Tina did wrong but Bette was the one to fucked yp from the beginnig..read this is torture..lol..i must like to suffer..lol..post soon thanks
Wow, that was an amazing chapter! Passionate, emotional, harsh, wonderful.Oh, the desperation of not knowing…