Fan Fiction
This story has been set to a rating of R. Age verification is required to proceed.
A Night in the D — Chapter 25
Login to add story to favorites
(74 votes, average: 3.35 out of 5)You need to be a registered member to rate this post.
Loading ...
They disentangled at the first knock on the bathroom door. Tina’s eyes widened and Bette laughed. “Fuck” Tina breathed out.
“Not exactly.” Bette muttered the words and received a chastening look from Tina.
“Hey,” she said.
“Hey what?”
“Stop acting frustrated.”
Bette laughed. “I’m not acting!”
Tina threw her another glance of disapproval before opening the door and smiling widely at the woman in front of her. “Sorry about that,” she said, before grabbing Bette’s hand and pulling her into the blue-black light of the bar, which was beginning to fill up. Tina glanced at her watch. Almost 4:00. Thank god she didn’t have to work tonight. But she did have things to do, including Bette if she could squeeze her in.
Bette, who she came face to face with as she turned on a dime. Bette, who smiled down at her, surprised at the sudden proximity. “Are we going to make out again?” she whispered suggestively.
Tina laughed and even blushed a bit, stepping back slightly to make room for clear thoughts. “I have some things I have to do later.”
“How much later?” Bette’s forehead creased slightly. She planned on finishing this back in the room and didn’t like the suggestion that she might not be able to.
“Later later,” Tina said, brushing hair from her eyes, giving Bette a shy glance. “But I should make a couple calls, try to keep everything free and easy.”
“Free and easy,” Bette said the words over, noting how out of place they sounded in the context of her and Tina. In the context of everything that had transpired so far.
“Yeah, I don’t want to be worrying about other things while we’re” Tina looked to Bette for help but didn’t receive any. “Y’know, while we’re.” She smiled.
“While we’re?”
“While we’re in your room.” Tina smiled again. “Watching the snow fall.” She broke eye contact to glance out the front window. Yes, still snowing. Thank god.
Bette’s eyes were agleam. “Right, ok.” She continued to stare mischievously at Tina, who rolled her eyes.
“Can you get our bags from boytoy?” she asked flippantly. Bette had handed them to him before they retreated to the bathroom, counting on his attention to all things Bette-related, and he hadn’t disappointed.
Comments
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.
when is drama going to stop! great chapter please post soon.let have some N-C FUN
Allright, luvrgirl. You’re not going to give me anything I need. I guess that’s fair….not so much. Enough titillation. Come with the goods, yo.
seriously LG im dyin here…all the anticipation!!
God. Don’t tell us it’s someone calling in sick and Tina has to work. Fuck that shit. She worked 2 shifts in a row and needs a break. If after all this is said and done and they don’t end up together, I may just have to stay in bed for a few days to let my heart recover.
it could be 2 things: someone can’t come and tina has to work for them, or she has boy/girlfriend and not free…i hope it’s nothing, i don’t want drama
your killing me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
OH shit…now Tina has some mystery to her….please post soon..you are killing me
Y OH Y DO U TAKE SOOOOOO LONG TO POST???????!!!!!!!!
Great story i am really enjoying the wait!!!
Hey lurvgirl! I am transfixed by your story. Tina is making phone calls for ever. You are making me wait AND beg! PLEASE give us an update!!!!
Gotta say I love the way you write! The back and forth is excruciating…hope you post again soon.
Good chapter. These 2 make more drama for themselves and now let see what’s happen next, thanks!
I get soooo excited when I see you’ve posted! Sometimes I go do other things while enjoying the anticipation of what you’ll have to offer when I finally allow myself to read. You see, the sooner I read, the longer I have to wait until you deliver another installment. And of course I always know it’ll be no less than spectacular…the writing, the depth of exploration, the emotion evoked. You’ve got some major talent, lg! Major!
The anticipation of these two actually getting to know one another and getting to know what they themselves want is AMAZING. It’s so intriguing how they push and pull when they just really want to be held. Really do enjoy this so immensely. Thanks for the update.
When I do not see anew post from you I go back and read your earlier ones. I have read it so many times that I could recite it backwards! Please hurry up and tell us themystery of Tina. NC17 stuff can come later for all I care. (Well ….. I admit, I do care.)
This is really an interesting take on Bette and Tina. So carefully written and so full of in depth exploration of the emotional dynamics between these two that I am temporarily forgiving you for playing with us.
Ok, enough, we are getting enough in S3…we need release!!!! God your killing me here, just killing me…it’s not gonna happen is it?? is it?? Please just shoot me already!!!
All caught up now. I love the back & forth between the two. You’ve got us right where you want us & I’m ready for the ride to contine. Your writing captivates me…