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Journeys – Ch 10 – “the long and winding road…”
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CHAPTER 10 – Holy Unitus Interruptus Batman!
(The knocking woke Bette and Tina from their dreamlike exploration, bringing them to a consciousness in which they were suddenly startled by each other and their new circumstance.)
BETTE- (Closes her eyes briefly, expressing her angst at the interruption, and she whispers gently) “Wait here.” (She gets up and walks to the door with an intensity that would scare friend or foe. She opens the door, ready to turn away the unlucky guest. It’s Shane.)
SHANE- “Bette, hi, are you ok?”
BETTE- “Yeah why?”
SHANE- “I saw your car and rang the door bell but there was no answer. I just wanted to see if you’re ok and ask if it’s ok to use the pool. A couple of my friends are over.”
BETTE- “Ohyeah, sure. No problem.” (She just glares at Shane, with a blank look.)
SHANE- “You alright?”
BETTE- “Yeah, yeah, fine. Listen, Shane, thank you for helping me out with everything. I really appreciate it. I knew I could count on you.”
SHANE- “Hey, don’t mention it. I’m glad to see you’re ok. Well, I won’t keep you. Goodnight. And, don’t worry, we’ll be like 20 minutes tops.”
BETTE- “It’s ok. Like I said, you’re welcome to use the pool. Enjoy.” (Shane walks off and Bette feels her body drop from its hightened state of alertness and tension. She stands there for a moment, looking out. Bette slowly closes the door and stands again for a moment, holding the doorknob. She swallows hard. The next steps she anticipates will be her hardest in a while. She can feel her heart and sense her body’s contemplationan eagerness juxtaposed with a feara huge fear. She swallows again and turns. As she starts toward the kitchen, she panics ‘where’s Tina?’ she asks herself. She quickens her pace to the kitchen, pans the area with her gaze, and then, just as she thought that maybe it had all been a dreamshe finds the wonderous figure of Tina, who is now cleaning the broken plate off the floor with a little broom and dustpan.)
TINA- (Looking up at Bette) “I just thought I’d get this. Almost done!”
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wonderful…now we can see them falling even more in love…i always love to read beginning of B&T, because it’s romantic and beautiful (most of the time LOL)..thanks
I shouldn’t have read this at work. All during the kiss I was like, “Get me through this…get me through this…” But it was even worse when I was interrupted. Call it mental blue-balling if you will. Now I need a cigarette.
your story is so poignant!!!! R U GONNA EVER LET THEM CONSUMMATE THEIR RELATIONSHIP …. boy if I were a dude, I’d have some serious blue balls about now!!!!!!!! LMAO!!
Excellent chapter i loved it.Let the happy times begin.Post soon
Another wonderful chapter…take your time, this is a beginning story, so they don’t have to have sex right away. Your pacing is great! Thanks!
Great chapter. Finally getting caught up since I’ve been out of town. Looking forward to more.
beautiful chapter, I love how long this story is taking, we get to experiencethe milestones and everything inbetween…pls keep stretching it out and driving us mad!!! Love it..
OK, OK, without a doubt, that was the best written, sexist kiss on this site. I felt every emotion they were feeling. So glad you took your time with Tina’s first kiss, because in so many cases, that’s how it is for the first time. It’s slow, you explore the unknown, then pee in your pants (just kidding). Be seriously, great job. I love the pace and I’m looking forward to how Tina starts to deal with all these new feelings. It’s so overwhelming. But you seem to be right on. Thanks for the great story.
Breathtakingly beautiful. To embrace someone new in your life and in that moment of contact realize that within your arms you hold your future…that is truly divine. In that defining moment, all that drives you in various directions finally comes together to rejoice your new discovery of LOVE. Bette & Tina are in that connected in that moment. You wrote it with such love, discovery, humour, and clarity that it was enveloping. They opened themselves up to one another. They welcomed vulnerability for the possibility of their life with love. Maybe a first love, but an open and unconditional one at that. One that they both were waiting and longing for secretly. Your writing is amazing. It’s so full of passion, clarity, intensity, humour, and love. All that B & T are or will be. Thank you for this lovely update. As always it was a pleasure. Cheers.
Aw, that was lovely. Nah, I don’t need 1200 pages…this story is great, so every little bit is wonderful to read. But, you know…don’t let that dissuade you from posting 1200 pages should you get on some literary superhighway. ;)
Magic! You really paint the picture well!
Great chapter Merlin i am really enjoying your story!!!
That was sweet. And intense. Many authors can make B&T sexy, but you also make them sweet – and that adds a lot. Thanks.
This chapter is captivating, as usual. So sweet and so sensual. Thanks for sharing.