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Pick A Part – 7
"Is it normal for her to have so many things connected to her?" Angelica asked her mother as they stood together just outside Terry’s hospital room.
Tina shrugged, relieved that there were noticeably less machines and tubes connected to Terry than yesterday. She and Bette had agreed to allow Angelica to take the day off from school today, avoid any of the excitement she may likely encounter there. After calling in a day off for herself, Tina had brought Angelica to the hospital, both wanting to know more about Victoria Mayhew’s condition.
Angelica glanced at her mother, and was met by a reassuring smile from the blonde.
Tina glanced around, and saw a doctor nearby. She turned to Angelica. "Stay here."
"But–"
"Stay. Here." Tina repeated, and went to the nurse’s station.
Angelica turned back to look at where Terry was, and sighed. How was she going to explain to her MaBe how the accident happened? Cutting class, handing Terry the keys, running a red light… the clear delinquency and disobedience leading up to the accident.
Her mother was going to kill her.
"Angel," Tina said, coming up behind the girl. She pointed at the doctor and nurse behind her. "They’re going to check on Terry, and afterwards we can go in. Okay?"
Angelica nodded.
The doctor, who had been in the ER the day before, smiled at Angelica. "Miss Porter. Fancy seeing you again."
Tina stared at the young man, then looked at Angelica, and back at the doctor.
"Kyle Petersen." He smiled at Angelica’s mother. "I was also the one who bandaged her hand from the kitchen stove incident, a few months ago?"
Angelica flushed with embarassment, while Tina broke into a smile. "I thought you looked familiar."
Dr. Petersen smiled at the two women. "I’ll call for you when we’re done."
"Thanks."
"Why don’t you two sit," he suggested before he went inside Terry’s room.
Tina led Angelica to the row of chairs. "Great. Doctors know you by name."
"Not my fault," Angelica protested.
Tina lifted an eyebrow.
"Okay, nearly burning the house down may have been my fault, but it’s not my fault some doctors have a good memory to go with their looks."
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Wonderful dialog, as always. Thanks for brightening my Monday.
Love it….
Wonderful update.
I have a great mother myself, but it was a different era when I grew up. Very much enjoying your depiction of B & T as parents, they mangage to BE parents (to many run away from the responsability and opt to be “friends” these days)and be cool. Angelica’s a lucky girl, at least the way you depict it. I bet she had her own crib to sleep in as an infant.
My youngest son told me today that he wanted me to be his friend,I told him fine,But i was his Mother before and he had better remember that,Angie and Tina are so cute,Angie doesnt make muchoff of any of her Moms. Love this can Tina and Bette handle another child. thanks
Love the connection and rapport Tina has with Angelica. It’s so sweet, loving, and humourous. Terry’s parents are no-shows, seems like they care more about their vacation than their daughter. Thanks for the update, please continue.
Okay, the following was too damn funny: Angelica sighed, and flipped open the classifieds. “What jobs are available… What jobs pay in the thousands for a day’s work?””Jobs that I don’t want my daughter to be in.” Tina said simply.It was Chris Rock who said his only job in this life is to keep his daughters off of the stripper pole. I love your writing and can’t wait to read whatever you write next.
thanks for this cute story, Porter-Kennard family is alive and well and hopefully will be for many years to come
love this… tina and angie was good together… and mabe will get to have her fun also… too funny… so please continue…i love it…oh… it also looks like they will have another daughter…hmmmmmmmmmm looks like terry is going to be there a while…
Happy to see another post of this fic, need more and soon. Love the interaction of the whole family, no wonder Terry was a mainstay at the Kennard-Porter residance.
Excellent chapter and story. Looking forward to more.
Good chapter and looking forward!
TD,Another expressive and genuine chapter in the lives of Bette, Tina and Angelica. You have acaptured Angelica’s youthful exuberance and non-chalant way of dealing with the fall out from the accident. This is all down to your great flow and ebb of the story and dialogue. Can’t wait to see what happens next. Pleas make it soon. Your Loyal Fan.
love it..