“Dana let me in!” Alice‘s voice was loud and raspy due to the mixture of yelling and crying that had taken over her throat. She had been standing at Dana’s door for more than five minutes, yelling for Dana to let her in. But with no luck. “Your car is out the front and your lights are on Dana! You never go anywhere with your lights on! Please just open the door!”
Dana leaned her forehead against the door, closing her eyes and willing herself not to give into Alice‘s desperate pleas.
“Alice. Alice please just leave,” Dana whispered into the door, loud enough for Alice to just hear it. “Don’t do this.”
“No Dana, no it’s the other way around,” Alice babbled, a slight hope ignited in her at the sound of Dana’s voice. “Just open the door, don’t ignore me. Dana please.”
“I can’t Alice,” Dana replied, her voice stronger this time. “Al you have to go. You cheated on me, and you forgot about that dinner and” Dana let her voice trail as she tried to think clearly about what she had to say to Alice. “And worst of all you dragged me along like some stupid dumb puppy for the ride, you allowed me to trust you.”
Alice winced at the pain evident in Dana’s words, knowing that regardless of what Alice had meant to do, or what excuses she had, everything Dana spoke was the truth. After all, Dana had always told her the truth, always.
“I’m sorry Dana,” Alice croaked, her mouth tasting the sweet tears that fell from her eyes as she spoke. “I-I I made a mistake. Fuck I made one mistake after the other but.. Please give me another chance Dana. I’m not complete here without you you’re my life.”
Dana leaned her back against the door and slid down it quietly, the tears steadily flowing from her eyes. She put her hand over her mouth in an attempt to muffle the gasps from her crying. She didn’t want this. What she wanted was to open the door and kiss Alice and make everything all right.
But she couldn’t do that.
“It’s over Alice,” Dana managed to say confidently between sobs. Her voice didn’t crack once as she spoke, her heart in the meanwhile broke into a thousand pieces over and over again. “I don’t want to see you anymore. I don’t want to love someone I can’t trust. I don’t want to know someone I can’t trust.”
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I was so psyched when I saw that you had updated so quickly. I can’t wait for the launch.
i love this story and was so happy to see you update so quickly please do it again!! i need a serious danish fix!!
I was so stoked to see you had posted so soon!!! I love where this story is going! Ok now when they do the album launch at the planet you have to have Alice sing that song and in the middle of her singing the song she wrote about their breakup and she then sees Dana in the crowd…as cliche as it sounds I would LOVE you for it. I have dreams about serenating and being serenated..ok I’m going to stop rambling now. I CAN’T WAIT FOR THE UPDATE!!!
You’re gonna make me cry with so many quick updates. Oh my, 7 months and they still love each other. And that album, I’m thinking it could easily be called ‘Dana’ =) I adore this story, thank you again for updating soooo soon!
Crumbs!! Was so excited to see your post. Love it, love it…needed my fix like everyone else…miss my girls…Peace
aaawww!!! love this update!!! path to reconciliation?
Maybe ‘hate’ was a big word. ;) I should have said “I don’t like you very much right now”. :P But I loved this update. Alice used the drawing of the unicorn. How romantic!!! Will she be playing the song for Dana she wrote after their break-up at the album launch?? I’m thinking (hoping) the same as Slip 79, the path to reconciliation?
Can’t tell you how glad I am that you’re still posting and posting often since there seems to be a dry spell of Danish fics. Love your story!! Can’t wait to read what happens.
awesome update! glad to see u got the juices flowing. that was so sweet of alice to put dana’s drawing on the cover – talk about the grand gesture! can’t wait for the launch. ^ – ^
Awesome! You’re such a great writer! I think that’s kuel how Alice used Dana’s drawing for her new album. It’s pretty funny how I almost cried last chapter. I told my friends n they laughed their asses off. Three posts in one week, good work! From:Stripes (I didn’t forget this time)
I was so excited to see you posted ch.10 so fast! Please keep them coming. This story is amazing! I can’t get enough!!! U r an incredible writer :) I love Danish!!!
Great chapter! Love this story. Please post again soon.
Moving on quickly – please! Can’t wait for the launch. Great story!
hey – you are doing such an excellent job with this story. and you have been so quock that i haven’t even gotten a chance to comment. but anyway, i love them all. you are such an excellent writer. please post soon., if not i will be pm-ing you to see what the problem is.
that was great great wait to see if dana will go and what will happen please please post soon I love it there is so much drama for alice and dana in this
Awwwwwww!! This fic is just too good! Please let them get back together, pleeeeeease??
Sometime I just can’t understand Alice. she is something else. Kit was nice to try to get the gang together and have aband play at the sametime thanks
I just adore your writing Bojangles. This is such a great epic Danish saga…*lol* I can’t wait to read the next installment!!!
please please please let dana and alice be together, too fucking sweet great post x
please please please let dana and alice be together, too fucking sweet great post x