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Masked Feelings CH 29 All or Nothing!
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Dana knew she couldn’t go alone. She needed help and Roxy wasn’t an option. She went with her next logical choice.
She pulled up in front of the house. Running up the steps, she burst through the door.
“Shane! Shane!”
Carmen was in the kitchen while Shane had just got out of the shower. Both came running to the living room.
Dana was a mess… her eyes red from crying. Her hair,mussed from raking her hands through it. She had the look of a junkie hopped up on something. The crazed look on her face made panic rise in them both.
Shane – Dana…. what’s wrong?
Dana – You have to come with me. Hurry up…. lets go!
Shane – Calm down, Dana. You’re scaring me.
Carmen – What happened?
Dana – There’s no time… we have to leave now! It’s Alice…. I need to save her.
Shane – Save her? From what?
Dana – Lara.
Shane – Lara?
Dana – She’s the one who….who… who raped her. I think she’s going to kill her.
Carmen – OH MY GOD!
Shane – FUCK!
Shane runs in to the bedroom to get dressed. Dana and Carmen follows her in.
Shane – Where is Alice?
Dana – My family’s cabin.
Shane – Isn’t she safe there?
Dana – You don’t understand…. Alice set a trap for Lara. She forged my handwriting on a note telling her to meet me at the cabin. She’s going to face her alone! Alice is no match for Lara. Lara is capable of anything…..She’ll do anything to have me….Alice is a threat to her. NOW LETS GO!!
Dana runs out to the car.
Carmen – I think I better go with you.
Shane – No….. stay here. Call the others and tell them whats going on.
Carmen – Please be careful.
Shane – See you later. Love you.
Carmen – Love you too, babe.
Shane runs out to the car.
Shane – Move over… I’m driving.
Dana slides in to the passenger seat.
Shane – Give me directions…… then tell me everything else I need to know, cause I know there’s more.
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EARLIER…….
After humiliating Gina further, Lara took the gag out of her mouth.
Gina – Don’t just stand there, get me out of these things.
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You can’t just leave it there, this has become my addiction, so unfair :( great tension though in this chap its all coming together so nicely. Please post soon!
this story is great, im totally addicted lol pls dont let dana die.
Sweetie i will beg and beg until i cant beg anymore for you to post soon!! I hate that Whore Lara she needs to die!! You are torturing me so slowly and making me love it at the same time you are such a naughty vixen. I need more Danish this season is driving me nuts and no one else seems to be posting!! Please my love do not make me wait to long i wont know what to do with myself.
You have to post soon this season is killing me with it’s lack of danish. i am so glad somebody else is writting danish, pls post sooooooooon x
I’m seriously in tears from the last of that chapter. Dana cannot die!!!! Wow, Lara is SUCH a bitch. She needs to die, seriously. Where do you come up with this stuff? Lara burning Gina to death..that was just sick and twisted lol You amaze me, so much depth to this story. Dana has to be ok!!!!!!! Everyone is pulling for her. As for this chapter, you have certainly satisfied your biggest fan, no questions asked! And you told me you might update tomorrow…ah ha! It’s lucky I checked the website just before I went to bed. You. Amaze. Me. Now that I’ve had my fix, I still want more! I can’t wait to read more of this story, of course. AH!! It was great. You always, always, pull at my heartstrings..story or not. You’ve gotta know baby. Fantastic update. Like there was any doubt it would be anything other than fantastic. Pshhh.. it’s you. I anticipate greatness. I can’t wait to read the rest, and hear from you. Love you too, you crazy chick.
NOOOOOO!!! Oh man, i was close to tears at the end here,DANA CAN’T DIE!!!!! Lara is now on my hit list. I hope the ambulance gets there soon,but love how your story is comming together tho, hope you post soon!!
haha yay but nooo! It’s all so dramatic! Really good – update quickly!
I was saying my prayers from the second page. Lara is as evil as Layla_Gray’s Lucy! I can’t believe you left off where you did! I take that back, actually, I can! Save Dana soon. But then again, Lara is still in the wings …
Omg….You can’t leave it there. Dana can’t die. That bitch Lara needs to die. Kill her not Dana.
Ok, I’m normally not one of the persons who likes it graphic (mmh, why am I reading this story)…but I managed to read the whole story, and I loved the tension in this story. I still think Roxy should have been there to kill Lara!! :P Maybe she will come in handy later on in this story (*wishfull thinking*)? So one more chapter full of angst to go and then the cleaning up starts?!?!(Thank you for mentioning that, it gives me hope for the Danish love.)
Holy sh*t, you just stabbed Dana! So scratch out what I said before, you never seize to amaze. Oh, this is an awesome thriller you have going on and I trust you, remember that, so no killing Dana, right? And please, post soon cause you’re gong to kill us!
Oh good lord!! This story is crazy!! Seriously you have to update soon. Please let dana be ok, pleaaaase.
I CAN’T BELIEVE YOU LEFT US THERE! Great chapter and love the build-up but it’s making me crazy! You’ve gotta post soon! I can’t wait!!! And PLEASE don’t let Dana die!!!!!!!!!
You know, before reading this story, I used to like the character Lara. I do not feel so positive towards her anymore. I mean, DIE LARA, DIE!! :D Nicely written by the way, hope you post again soon.
please let Dana live and I want Lara to suffer and die . Please post soon . danish 4 ever !!! (ensemble pour toujours ..)
dont kill off dana…where is lara running to? This was great to read i cant wait until ur next post.
Thank you for the update. Please don’t leave us hanging for too long. Looking forward to the next chapter.
oh my god that is such a big cliffhanger and I can’t wait to see what you have in store for the rest of this story please post soon I love it and please don’t let dana die they have been though so much aready
Okay…that was AWESOME!!! I know I say it a lot, but I mean it. I love the love between Alice and Dana, I so miss it in S3. I know that Lara is going to get what she deserves and Dana cannot die, it’s bad enough the series is bringing me down. I love your post. I’ve read it 4x’s already…AWESOME!!!! Peace!
i’m speechless. i have no idea what to say. this was an awesome chapter! i was definitely on the edge of my seat. all the scenes were playing like a movie in my head. lara is a very cold, evil, narcissistic person. u are an amazing writer. i can’t wait to see what u dish out for part 3! ^ – ^
Aaaarg! You can’t stop now! I’m still reading this with great interest! Good story :)
Aaaargh! You can’t stop now! I’m still reading this with great interest! Good story :)