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The sergeant and the babysitter…chpt.1
“THE SERGEANT and the BABYSITTER”
January 1, 2006…
“mommy…mommy…wake up” yelled an excited Justice
“what baby?” said Tina
“today’s New Year’s mommy, it’s the start of our new year’s resolutions. I made my list mama…see” Justice replied. The young girl waved the list in the air as she jumped up and down on her mother’s bedroom floor
“Justice, please stop jumping up and down. How many times do I have to tell you that we have neighbors sweetie?” Tina said
“sorry mommy, I was a bit overly excited. I’m just happy that 2005′s gone, and now we have something to look forward to this year. For me 1st grade, and for you maybe you might find you somebody to share the year with” Justice replied. She pulled the covers away from Tina and got into bed with her mother.
“I don’t know about finding somebody baby, but I do know about you starting the 1st grade this year. Are you excited that in 5 months you’ll be graduating from kindergarten?” Tina asked her daughter
“uh-huh, I’m excited mommy. I won’t be considered a baby anymore.” Justice said
” you’ll be my baby” Tina said. The blond kissed her daughter’s forehead. “don’t you like being my baby?” Tina asked her daughter
“yes mommy, I love being your baby.” Justice replied “mommy” Justice said
“yes J?” Tina asked
“do you have to work today?” Justice asked
“no, remember I took the day off, so we can read one another our New Year’s resolutions, and so that we can spend some mother daughter time with one another” Tina says
“good, I want pancakes” Justice replied “mommy, will you make me some pancakes…please?” Justice asked
“sure, but after you get washed up and changed. You know how I feel about lounging around in your night clothes all day” Tina said
“yes mommy, I know. I’m gonna go and wash up now.” Justice says. She pulled the covers away and got out of bed
“okay sweetie, are you okay with doing it by yourself?” Tina asked
“mom?” Justice pouts
“okay, I’m sorry. Carry on” Tina replied. The blond smiled as she watched her daughter go into the bathroom, and close the door. Tina sighed and crossed her eyes. “ouch” The blond mumbles under her breath.
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(40 votes, average: 3.95 out of 5)
Great, please continue. Post soon
fantastic start, please continue and please post soon!
great start, i love B&T beginnings, they are the best, please continue
MORE…MORE…. MORE!!!!!! DAMN WONDERIN WHEN AND HOW WILL THEY GET TOGETHER…IN FOR ANOTHER SLOW BURN……”SIGH” ANYWHO UPDATE SOON……REALLY, REALLY SOON!!!!!!
Good start..please continue!
i really enjoyed this chapter… it’s a great start, keep them coming! thanks
Love new beginnings. Please continue.
very different though but thats good!keep it up ;)
Hey that was a great start…What does Bette do and how long have they known each other? Please post soon can’t wait for more.
MORE MORE MORE.
Wow! Great start – VERY promising. It seems like you are going to go for a nicely slow-paced one here – my favourite. I can’t wait to hear more backstory to how these girls know each other. What are their individual histories? How long has Bette like Tina? Does Tina realize she likes Bette yet and if not when will she realize? Who is Justice’s father and where is he now? How many heart-stopping moments are you going to write (loved Tina suddenly asking Bette if she was attractive – oh boy!)? When will you post another chapter? So many questions!
great story. I hope you post really soon. Definitely continue. It should be intresting to see if Justice had a particular woman in mind for her mom.
I think that is a wonderful start…please continue for us. Thank you.
hey that was cool. so bette is like the homemaker and tina is the workaholic? brilliant….keep it up please
Nice, this Bette can COOK!!! lol Great start, please continue.
That was sooooo great…..a really wonderful beginning…..more please…
“how was that?” that was bloody great, i have no put downs what so ever and i say continue. its a very interesting tibette begining and i am looking forward to finding out why Tina is starting to act weird around bette, lets hope its because she finally realised she has feelings for bette. anyway great story lovin it so far, and am sure i will love it always.
wonderful start…..I am looking foward for more….please post soon….very soon…
cute!
{that was great,would like to have more.thanks {bettyvhall}
This is a great beginning and i hope you continue.Post soon.
I think it’s good. I like to see where you take it. Good job.
Liked it. Always love new versions of B&T
That was good! Me want more!
This was a great start! I like the idea of Bette being such a good homemaker, and I am looking forward to the next chapter!! Thanks!
Cool story, post more soon.
As a first timer, yes def continue, this was good and the more you write the better it will be…great start
Loving it so far, please continue!
j’aime beaucoup. j’attends la suite avec impatience. merci
GOOD!!!!