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    A Night in the D — Chapter 27

    Story written on February 17, 2006 by luvrgirl.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=59633
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    Ne me quitte pas.

    As expected, Alice picked up on the first ring. “Bette what the fuck? I’ve called you a million times.”

     

    “And I’m calling you back.”

     

    “Are you still in Detroit? What happened with the hotel chick?”

     

    Bette bristled. “Nothing.”

     

    “Nothing?” Alice‘s voice was disbelieving. “Bette”

     

    “Nothing yet. It’s complicated.”

     

    Alice laughed. “So you’re still there? Snowed in.” She said the last two words suggestively.

     

    “I’m still in Detroit at the hotel, yes.”

     

    “And you’re calling to check in. With me.” Alice laughed again.

     

    “No. I’m calling to tell you I’ll be back shortly but I’m not sure when. So you can stop calling.”

     

    “Oooh, so you called to stay stop calling.” Alice lowered her voice. “Because you don’t want to be disturbed.”

     

    “Exactly,” Bette said, looking up at Tina, who emerged from the bathroom. “One second,” she said and Tina nodded.

     

    “Oh is that her?” Alice‘s excitement burst through the phone. “Bette, you’re supposed to have hit that and moved on by now. What is going on with you?” She couldn’t help but be amused at the situation. So not Bette.

     

    “Alice, don’t be ridiculous.”

                             

    “What’s ridiculous? I’m sorry I couldn’t talk last night but you know how much I love Kathy Griffin-”

     

    “Yes, I know. And that’s fine. We’ll talk when I’m back in L.A.“

     

    “About this?”

     

    “About whatever you want.”

     

    “Uh huh.” Bette could practically hear Alice‘s toe tapping on the other end. “You cannot call and get me all riled up on this gossip, Bette, and then withhold. That’s seriously unfair.”

     

    Bette glanced at Tina, who’d looked away when Bette mentioned L.A. Bette sighed inwardly, not feeling up to damage control already. She stared at Tina’s back as she spoke into the phone.  “It doesn’t take much to rile you, Alice. I’m not taking responsibility.”

     

    “And you hooking up out of town?” Alice said sarcastically. “That’s just usual?”

     

    “No, it’s not usual.”

     

    “But I don’t get the story till you’re back in L.A.“

     

    “Right.”

     

    Alice sighed. “Okgeez. Should I be a friend or something here? I’m not prepared. Do you need somethingwhat do you need? Support?”

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    2. wow… luvrgirl your writing is so emotively powerful. My breath hitches and gratefully won’t unhitch as I swim in your beautiful prose. I am just captivated by every chapter, so raw, so peeled back are your Bette and Tina; they are incredible women as they are themselves, and as they are everything to one another. Truly, I cannot wait for your next glimpse into their world of multifaceted and unavoidable passion. Much Thanks…

    7. so emotional…i hope this will turn into something resolvable…like bette will leave and tina will take the next flight and follow and stay in LA…love the dialog, very emotional and intense

    11. shoot me, please, anything, just put me out of this agonizing misery…I can’t take it anymore pls stop teasing…Tina rip her clothes off or leave the room, just dooooo someting!!!!

    14. OK you are seriously taking my breath away with this…and in your own words this is “Just for fun”…well im truly in awe of this story …BUT… im not having fun!!!lol… while your dealing with raw emotion in a beauitful manner,its becoming very emotionaly charged,even sad…. when you started this all we wanted was the ultimate sex scene between 2 people that were obviously very attracted to each other….now its so much more than just sex..IF (and im starting to wonder) it does happen then it wont be just sex!!!It will have been so much more, this is amazeing and wherever you go with it,it will still be amazeing, Thanks

    15. Loved this story since the first chapter, Can’t always comment butI do read,it gets better and better. Just hope that Bette takes Tina with her thanks

    18. This has to be one of the longest slow burns I’ve ever read. Not that I mind though because all of these chapters of foreplay and push and pull will lead to a mind-blowing experience.

    24. Like so many others, I’ve been completely captivated with this story from the beginning. You’ve woven what could have been a simple, straightforward pairing, into a wonderfully loving and complex relationship. It’s truly a joy to read and I look forward to reading each new chapter. Thanks!

    25. jamais ma cherie, jamais, mais alors, combien de plus que vous les restez comme ca? ah, ca cette le question … mais quand vous esquez vous vient je vous attend avec plaisir, s’il vous plait, depeche toi…..translation readily supplied with additional posting

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