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The sergeant and the babysitter…chpt. 2
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“THE SERGEANT and the BABYSITTER”
January 2, 2006
That night, Tina walked in at about 12:15 A.M. “hello” Tina called out loud
“shh” Bette said. “She’s sleeping” She adds. The brunette points to Justice’s bedroom door
“oh, I’m sorry.” Tina whispers.
“it’s okay” Bette replied “come on” She adds. She welcomes Tina over, with the wave of her hand
Tina smiled and proceeded towards the brunette. She stepped into the kitchen. Bette walked over to the sink. Tina grabbed an apple from the fruit bowl.
“so, how was work?” Bette asked. She smiled as she rinsed the dishes.
“work was okay, It wasn’t busy, due to the students being out for the Christmas holiday”. Tina replied. She took a bite of the apple
“that’s good” Bette said. She just finished washing the dishes.
“and guess who asked me out to dinner?” Tina asked.
Bette closed her eyes and inhaled. She exhaled instantly. As much as she didn’t want to say the word “who?” she knew she didn’t have a choice. So she said, “who?” She forced a smile and turned around. “who?” She asked again.
“David Ryan. He asked me out to have dinner with him.” Tina said. She blushed and lowered her head
Bette watched her carefully. Tina was extremely exited, and it seemed as though it was something, she had been wanting for a long time. Even though she didn’t want to say” that’s great” she said “that’s great Tina.” Bette forced another smile. The thought and knowledge of Tina having dinner with David burned her heart. The organ was no longer warm. The heat rose within it
Tina lifted her head. She smiled and said, “thanks. Girl, I am so happy. I’m excited. I’ve been dying for him to ask me out for months. I’m way too shy to ask anyone out.” Tina replied. She took her mirror out and checked herself out. She stroked her hand through her curls and said, “if you want me…(she licked her lips)…then you’ll have to come and get me.” She closed the mirror and gazed over at Bette. “don’t you agree?” Tina asked the brunette
“yeah” Bette replied. “I understand you all the way. He’s a lucky guy.” Bette said. She checked the time on her watch. “I should get going. I have to go and visit my grandma tomorrow. It’s tea and bisquits time. ” Bette adds
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yesssss!first i thought that Bette was more like the Tina type in the show, like doing the cooking and all those things…but after this chapter, i see there’s so much more to it, which is great!your story has so much depth in it, it’s just fanatastic! so keep it up ;)
you should definately continue, the only thing was that i thought it was too fast for tina to accept bette like this and offer dating…she was just so excited to date a guy and suddenly she wants to try with bette…looks like it could be just an experience for tina while bette is in love with her…tina needs to show more emotions…but it’s a great story, so please continue
Bette and Tina forever, I agree with you and I disagree. The reason for Tina throwing the guy up the first place was to catch Bette’s attention. She had something for Bette, but she wanted Bette to ask her out. That was the point of me throwing the mirror scene. She closed the mirror and glanced over at Bette and said, “don’t you agree?”. Tina threw in a few hints as well. She’s not the type approach people. But the story is still in it’s early ages and eventually Tina will come out and confee something. I can’t tell you what it was, but it’s surprising I promise. But, thank you all for your comments and I appreciate them. If there are any other concerns let me know, I’ll be here… good day
hell yea!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! we know about tina’s demons are bette’s going to start coming out of the closetlol
yes please continue… i read last night at work and liked what you wrote… we need all the bette and tina loving we can get… thanks
Shoot I wanna see this continued because Bette’s the domestic type. LOL It’s rare to see that in a fanfic. I was like WOOOOOO! when I saw one of the neighbors was named Rita Moreno, but I’m a geek like that. Anyway please continue. I hope Justice will be cool with Tina dating Bette.
This is an original storyline. I’m curious to see where it’ll go. I’m wondering why you describe Bette as having a small body/delicate one…or am I missing something? I see what BetteAndTinaForever is saying about Tina in terms of emotions being developed/shown. But I also see what you’re saying. I’m curious to see the beginings of their romantic relationship in your story. Look forward to the next chapter.
are you crazy, of course you can continue, you HAVE to continue! this is a great story, and a great tibette begining, i love it, looking forward to the next post!
Don’t have to ask… please continue for as long as you like.
OMG yes you should definitely continue….this is so great and a very interesting beginning. I hope that Tina is serious about them dating and not playing with Bette, she was a bit quick to accept Bettes feelings…..I hope she doesn’t wake up with regrets and thoughts off David!!!…Looking forward too the next one…..By the way, I love your Bette – babysitting, cooking, shopping so cute and sweet :o)))
yes you should. great chapter though it’ll be great to see more emotion from tina :D
yes please and soon
Definitely continue, looking forward to more.
Please continue thanks
yes you should great chapter post soon
yes, please continue
yeah, you should continue, i really like this story. Good Job.
I also thought it was a bit quick but still love it. Please continue the story I am hooked already! Maybe Tina will have some second thoughts, or at least some doubts…but obviously not hurt Bette too much in the process. I am intrigued as to how you plan to continue. Thanks for posting.
SO GOOOD!!!!!!