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Imitating Georgia O’Keeffe (10)
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Bette’s POV
It’s another Monday and Monday, as we all know, is a very hard day. One week ends and another one begins and you just wonder what you’re spending your valuable time on. But like one great guy said, time you enjoyed wasting was not wasted unfortunately, he was shot by one of his crazy fanatics and that only proved another of his brilliant sayings right – you either get tired fighting for peace, or you die. Surely John Lennon didn’t know he’d end up like that, but seemed to have predicted his own death with his words.
…And with the direction that my thoughts are taking today, I can surely start to mentally prepare myself for a showdown at the C.A.C.
I was the first one to wake up today and that’s probably because I fell asleep even before 10pm with Tina straddling me – usually my pre-orgasmic state doesn’t result in falling asleep, but I guess I can allow that to myself from time to time Which is another way of not admitting that I’m getting old.
When I was having my morning coffee in the kitchen, Tina got up and went to the shower, and that’s quite strange because I usually get a sweet good morning kiss first; I don’t know if falling asleep could be followed by her pouting all day long, I certainly hope not.
I come back to our bedroom and put my black jacket on to match my black skirt and white blouse and while I’m doing that, Tina goes out of the bathroom, wearing only panties and a couple of tiny water drops on her back. We smile at each other and before I say hi to her, my eyes travel from her face to her perky nipples that are looking rather appealing in the morning sunlight and my mouth waters in an instant. I slowly swallow and watch her as she comes to the mirror and starts doing something with her hair that might actually be brushing, but it looks more like she’s moving her bent arms up and down just for me to catch a better angle of her nipples.
She catches my eyes in the mirror and smiles seductively or maybe I’m just imagining that after all, seeing her breasts has always made me lose my head just a little bit and that could lead to complications with my optic nerves.
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I am definetly looking forward to round 2!!
I enjoy the references to notables like CD, Childers, and Lennon. (Well, especially Lennon.) It makes the writing more connected and true to life. I don’t know whether you write chapter to chapter or have the whole thing already done, but it seems to me that you have become much more comfortable in your story telling. The chapters seem to have a more natural and even flow than in the very beginning. Maybe it’s the reader that needs to adjust to your writing? Anyway, this reader is really enjoying your story! Thanks for taking time to write and post!
i’m ready for round 2, hopefully i’ll be back from work by then
Shit! that was hot…thanks a bunch for posting.
Someone should tell B&T’s guests at the next pool party what they do in that pool! Hee hee. It’s interesting to see Bette deal with her adolescent energies! Interesting character development and it’s neat to see the thought process.
Round 2? I want ringside seats. I didn’t know Cathy was a switch-hitter. She gets mad at me every time I try to follew her. She starts yelling at me and my French isn’t that good, but I did catch something about my being “une bete” (not Bette). Moi? Une bete? Non! I was thinking of a movie she did with Daniel Auteuil where they were competing over a sullen, not overly pretty young women, why I don’t know. But that was the one in which the kiss wasn’t so convincing, may have been because the girl was unappealing. So anyway, that chapter was pretty fucking hot.
I really love your writing. It made me laugh when it’s non NC17 content and made me drool when it is. Let’s see if they’ll choose a song of the Beatles for Ep8. ;)
yes we are… gring it on… (hope no one is watching)… please continue
I’m glad i didn’t read it at work! I don’t think i would be able to work normally again, i get really hot each time you let them do all these exiting and loving things to eachother. Let’s get to rfound 2, i’m home now!!!
Yep, ready for round 2, then 3 through whenever they get tired.
Round 2works for me..
Very nice! whew
can i take it!!!!!!!!!!! you will give me a heart attack lol
I do love your little anecdotes. They are charmimg. Unfortunately, John Lennon was murdered on my birthday. What a horrible way to have my special day commemorated. I love the detail in your stories…makes them so much more realistic. DeNeuve is an exquisite woman…truly elegant.
Some one should sell tickets. Love to be in that neighbrhood
ROUND 2…Sweet jesus i should be working…How the hell am i goona work after that…never mind round 2..lol Seriously tho this is beautifully written,not to mention HOT”N”SEXY… BUT should carry a health warning if your doing an NC17..lol as always lovin it…