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    My Immortal ch2

    Story written on February 25, 2006 by corona.
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    what makes bette who she is!!

     

     

    Bette kept on walking toward the kitchen, just waiting for her legs to give way beneath her. She was falling apart. Now openly crying, she couldn’t control it now, it wasn’t a steady stream of tears it was a river. She headed straight to the place that had kept her calm all through the most emotional 20 minutes of her life, the pool. She couldn’t bear to stay in the house to wait for a reaction from Tina. She couldn’t face it. She wasn’t sure what Tina would have done if she had stayed in the room, possibly kiss her and make love to her for hours and tell her it didn’t mean anything or just pick up angelica and leave she just didn’t know. They used to be so in sync with each other always knowing what the other was thinking, finishing each others sentences just knowing each other. Where had that gone? That gift they had, it completed them and now it didn’t exist.

     

    Bette just couldn’t face another person she loved leaving her. It had been happening all her life. First her mother. Bette was only 6 when that happened. She remembered going to sleep that night, being tightly tucked into bed by her mother and then daddy coming by to make sure she wasn’t still reading late into the night. Bette had a habit of falling asleep book in hand, her daddy would come in kiss her on the cheek and remove the book gently placing it on the table at her bed. This night seemed no different.

     

    Bette sat down at the edge of the pool, her back to the bedroom, she couldn’t sit facing it she couldn’t watch Tina walk out of her life, and so she just sat, running her fingers through the water. Washing Tina away.

     

    Still thinking of her mother.

     

    She remembered waking up the next morning to daddy sitting in the kitchen, just staring, not reading his paper just staring completely into space. She saw a look in his eyes which she couldn’t recognise or explain. It wasn’t sadness or anger at 6 she couldn’t explain what it was. Now she recognises that look, she had seen it in her own eyes the night Tina walked out after provocations. Regret. That’s what it was.

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    1. Ive just this minute finished your 1st chapter,so left my comments there actually i was almost begging you to post again…and here you are..lol Thankyou so much for continueing you really have a talent and you really need to share it, this whole story is so emotional …Sigh!…Youve got me tearing up,,,

    5. Ok, you have to keep going…and as you said about ending a story…you can’t there is just so much more for you to write and you do it so well…I had no idea I was holding my breath..thank goodness is was only 2 chapters!!! Pls more and soon!!

    6. I expected Bette screamed and threw all the dishes to the floor and then found Tina not leaving. hoho. Am I too dramatic? Looking forward to their big talk.

    11. WOW…thank you for continuing. Bette bared herself to Tina in the first chapter and now she confronted a part of herself she long buried with her mother. Cannot wait for what transpires between Bette and Tina next. Thank you for the update.

    12. I’m delighted to see you decided to share more of your talent with us, thank you so much ! — It’s a real pleasure to read a writing of such a quality. Your Bette is so moving and you depict so well how her past emotional trauma strikes her deeper than ever facing the possible final lost of Tina. — No doubt, this already amazing fanfiction site wan a new great author here ! ^_^

    15. Wow, now here is lots of drama but Bette and Tina are still together. I don’t see why the writers couldn’t have some scenes like this…..thank you, more please

    16. It so hard to see Bette so broken,she will come up the stronger one in the end. Tina didnt realize the hurt she has given Bette and how she blame everything on Bette even her wanting to go with men. This was really good Post more thanks

    18. The intensity was almost palpable. Bette’s pain is getting more intense and in a way you experience it with her as we’re seeing Tina move inside the house and then leave. Emotionally, I hope there’s a reunion, but the suspense you’ve created is very real- I feel uneasy at the thought that Tina, as her life partner, is gone for good. I hope you’ll post soon.

    25. Just incredible, i can feel all the pain! but with the end of this chapter i think maybe will be good news in the next chapter, please let they work out they need talk talk and more talk, thanks for this post, i am waiting for the next!

    26. You are going to continue, right? Wow, that was some serious tension! Less bitchiness and more apologizing, communication and love, Tina. I’m most definitely looking forward to your next chapter.

    28. Tina paint that she inflicted on bette was way worse than Bettes affair and even though wrong is wrong but shit how much more could Bette take from Tina…dang I love tibette but sometimes I wish Bette would have just let go and move but I know tibette’s love is greater than that and it always prevail at the end.

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