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Youthful Divergence Chapt. 3
Shane started up the engine as Carmen hopped into the passenger side of Shane’s new truck “Listen, we have to stop at Wax first before we go to The Planet.” “What for?” Shane hesitated a moment before answering “Well, to pick up a friend of mine, a co-worker. She’s new and she doesn’t know anyone in this area, so I just thought I don’t know, I don’t know what I thought.”
“So, I’m sorry, who is this girl?” “Her name is Sean.” “Do you think she’s hot?” Shane turned to Carmen with a look of confusion and disbelief “I don’t even know how you can go from knowing her name to asking me whether or not she’s hot?” “Well, it’s just not very Shane like to invite a co-worker toanything, and to give them a ride, thatthat’s not you!”
“Look I’m just trying to help her out, she doesn’t have a car, I don’t even know if she has a place to liveand anyways, she’s too young for me.” Carmen shot Shane a look that could cut glass “I’m just kidding! God, I’m just kidding. I love you Carmen. Remember?” Carmen just rolled her eyes.
They pulled up outside Wax and Shane spotted Sean leaning against the gate smoking a cigarette. She was wearing some of Shane’s old clothes that Shane had given her because they surprisingly no longer fit her, but they fit Sean very well, almost a little loosely.
Shane waved out the window to her and she started walking over to the truck. Carmen watched her as she made her way to the door of the backseat. She couldn’t help but notice that this girl freakishly resembled Shane “Great, now there are two of you.”
This comment seemed to go unnoticed by Shane, so she turned around in her seat to say hello to Sean and to introduce Carmen “Sean this is Carmen, my girlfriend, and Carmen, this is Sean.” Sean extended her hand to Carmen “It’s nice to meet you Carmen.” Carmen took the girls slender hand and smiled at her politely.
Sean helped Carmen bring some of her DJ gear into The Planet through the back door while Shane went to go find the girls inside. Once Sean had helped Carmen all she could she followed the loud blare of people talking and dance music playing into The Planet to look for Shane.
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i would love to make it longer, but I’m in school right now, so between girls, friends, and work, there isn’t a lot of time for writing. But i will continue to add more, bit by bit
i really like this story. please continue =)
yeah.please continue with this story. it’s really good. although i wish you’d make it longer.
umm…….so…….i love this story. just thought you should know that. :)