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No More Crying Chapter 6
Saturday-8:15 P.M.
“What is it baby?”
“You’re beautiful, too. No, you’re beyond beautiful, you’re gorgeous.”
“You’re just saying that to get me to take off my clothes.”
“Is it working?”
“Yep.”
“No, this is a brand new watch; it telepathically talks to me.”
“It’s saying, you’re not wearing any panties,” Dana said in a husky voice.
“Well, it must be broke cause I am wearing panties.”
Dana flicked her watch, “Damn thing must be ten minutes ahead.”
“Of course.”
“I bet you can’t.”
“Well, I bet I can.”
“Oh yeah, what do you bet?”
Dana thought for awhile. “Okay the loser has to”
Sunday-10:00 A.M.
Shane walked into the Planet. She scanned the caf and when she spotted
“Shut up. Don’t you have appointments or something?”
“Not today.” Shane kept staring at
“What?”
Shane smiled, “Nothing, nothing. Um, what did you do with your hair? I mean green’s not a bad color but”
“I lost a bet.”
“What kind of bet?”
“I ain’t telling you.”
“Okay, okay.” Shane kept looking at couples in the Planet to, one, avoid
“The whole day.” Just then Dana walked in and spotted Shane and Alice. She smiled and walked over to them. “Hi Shane. I like you’re hair
“Ha ha, very funny.”
“Really, I’m surprised you’re going around in public like this.” Dana grabbed
“Well I really don’t care, I don’t know these people.”
“Well?”
“Well what?” Dana gave Shane a “you know what” look. “Oh, the ring. What about it?”
“Where is it?”
“It’s at my house, I have it hidden don’t worry.”
“I thought you were going to bring it to me today.”
“Well, I figured it’d be safer at my house cause
“I guess you’re right. But I want it by Wednesday.”
“Don’t worry.”
Meanwhile At Shane’s House
“Dammit, Shane’s the messiest person in the world.” Carmen was cleaning Shane’s house because Shane asked her to. She was in the bedroom and found a pile of clothes next to the bed and started putting them away. “What’s this?” She saw a small box and picked it up. She opened it and inside was the most beautiful ring she ever saw. “Oh my God.”
TBC
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poor carmen shes gonna get her hopes up…good post
Alice and Dana are sooo cute together. But who’s going to get the bigger surprise… Shane or Carmen?
ooh no no no!! poor carmen but WHOOOO!! for the danish :o)
Awww…that’s sooo mean. Poor Carmen.Peace