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I thought we could spend the evening together… PT18
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I thought we could spend the evening together PT18
Previously
As their intense duel continued, Tina’s finger searched lower, she could feel the moistness against her fingertip, she shifted her body slightly and moved her finger further in at the same time, trying to deflect the attention that her finger may have caused, she stilled it for a moment, knowing that the next move would need to be spot on, she urgently probed her tongue into Bette’s mouth, a groan emitting from her as her own body’s reactions caught up with her. Her distraction technique had worked with Bette so far, she had been so caught up in their kissing and the body movements that she had not noticed the zip coming down or Tina’s finger inside the material.
Bette’s body was on fire, every nerve ending was crying out, every sense throughout her body was merging with another; she had a pounding in her ears, her heart was beating faster than she ever remembered, it was hurting to breath, the muscles in her groin were burning, her inner walls pulsating, when she could take no more, she broke the kiss.
As Bette broke the kiss, Tina pulled her in close, making sure that Bette’s head was on the opposite side of her neck to the table of their friends, she lowered her finger into Bette’s folds, her fingertip being enveloped in the warmth as she came into contact with the swollen nucleus, she moved gently across the jolting centre.
Bette’s face was buried into the side of Tina’s head, her blonde hair caressing her face, her eyes closed, her breathing ragged, her heart pounding, she suddenly felt the pressure on her throbbing centre, her eyes flew open, as the shock reverberated through her body, “T, oh my god, what are you doing to me” her arms tightened around Tina, holding her close, her fingers pressing into Tina’s back.
Tina continued to stroke the swollen nub, flicking her fingertip across its tip, “Its Ok, baby, try and stay still, let me touch you, just hold onto me baby”
“OhT, fuck, I can’t” desperation, pleading in Bette’s voice, close to Tina’s ear, her eyes screwed shut, her body automatically reacting to Tina’s touch, knowing she wasn’t going to last long, she could feel it building, her legs beginning to shake even though Tina was sat on them, she tried clenching the muscles to no avail, her breathing was deep, her fingers digging into Tina’s skin, Tina’s finger bringing her closer and closer
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Oh yeah!!!
One word…FLASHDANCE!!!!!!
HOLY SHIT!!! please post soon. PEACE.
“What a feelin’…” Loved it! Too bad its just fiction! More Please…
cut it outttttttttt!!!!!!!!! make the post longer
Jo, that was HOT HOT HOT. The way you describe Bette dancing I could see it happening like I was there. Great as usual. As for not wanting to reread that part again that you put in from your last chapter—you are kidding right.
she’s a maniac, MAAAANIAC!
This is pretty hot just because it is so out of character…shows the lengths Bette would go to to impress/surprise her love. This is just cool…I would have loved to see it in person. Great post!
well holy fuckin hell..that was so freakin awesome we need more quick!!
No cascade for the finale? Oh, well. Pass me the vitamins.
Sweet jesus…that was hot`n`sweaty…just great as always…
oh my good god!!!!”it’s getting hot in here, so take off all your clothes”!!!!
Oh way toooo hot. The shower is awaiting my return. Pole dancing is suppose to be a great way to exercise. I don’t know who to feel sorry for, Bette because of what Tina will do to her once they are alone, or Tina when it really hits her how much Bette really and truly loves her.
Jo, *bowing down to you* we’re not worthy! I’m so extremely thankful for you and your brilliance! An excellent choice of song too…CREAM…need I say more?
OMG!! Holy …that was amazing. Show’s how much Bette loves Tina to do something so out of character. They really love one another — loved that Al helped Bette with her plan. Thanks for the update.
well babe you didn’t change a word did you – scared of big bad al ? Ha awesome as always — there is not an author on the boards who comes close to you in terms of the descriptive way you describe their love making at the moment. and by the way — imitation is the sinceriest form of flattery so don’t worry about that either . Brits rule !
Yes we all know the SHSL existed but to see her up were she belongs. No fear or scorn or Al could prevent the beauty that is our Bette and Tina reaction is perfect. Awesome job once again
HOLY SHIT! I just love that mental image of Bette dancing around a pole! HOT!
OHHHH YEAH….BRING ON THAT HOTT, RAUNCHY, SPONTANEOUS, (u get the idea…right??? LOL) SEX, NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Didn’t see that coming! Let the payback continue! Thanks for writing.
I can’t believe you stopped there!!!! Please post soon.
Damn that’s hot and we shoud call it What a feelin’…or Maniac…! Ok post soon please, thanks!
S3 Tina showed us in last week’s episode how much she loves the pole. ANYWAY, yeah, that was definitely, umm, compelling. Shit, that was hot! If I was Tina, I’d grab Bette’s hand and run out to the car like my life depended on it once she was through with her dance. Good Lord, Tina’s going to be like a caged animal when she gets Bette alone. Handle your business, Tina! As always, excellent Jobadge. Please, please, please post soon.
I could see that beautiful woman doing this as only she could. With so much grace thanks
Ah – so now we know what your REAL day job is huh? (& I didn’t think they had clubs like that down where you live) But your secrets out now! Either that or you have a very rich fantasy life/imagination – COOL! ENCORE MORE MORE!
Did we sort out what happened to the security tapes from the museum? Is Bette going to watch them?
this was great more soon i hope
Who would ever think that Bette Porter would do something like this. It must have made Tina really hot. Can’t wait what’s next to happen!
WOW! Just read your story from start to finish and am reeling from the experience! Seriously, your writing should come with health warnings my friend. There are so many moments in these chapters which will linger in my imagination for years to come – thank you so very much. Can’t wait to read more when you update.