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Because of Angelica..chpt. 6
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Previously
“I love you too mommy, now make the call”, Angelica took her mother’s cell off the table. She handed it to her mother. She went into her bag and pulled out Tina’s work number. She doesn’t answer her cellphone at work. You would have to call her directly. She hands the number to Bette.
“what’s this?”, Bette asked.
“mommy’s job number. Give her a call. I’m going to play in my room. I’ll be back in a little while”, Angelica stepped down out of the barstool chair.
“alright”, Bette smiled as she watched her daughter disappear arround the corner. She gazed down at the number baby A gave her. She retrieved her cell and called Tina.
“Harry and associates”, receptionist answered.
“hi, can I speak to Tina Kennard?”, Bette asked in a polite voice.
“sure, hold on”, receptionist put Bette on hold for a second.
“hi, this is Tina Kennard….”, Tina answered.
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(Bette’s on the phone with Tina, and Angelica’s in her bedroom playing)
“hey Tina. It’s be Bette”, Bette said in a soft voice.
“hey, what’s up?”, Tina asked. She was surprised that Bette was calling her. She never calls. This was a first.
“I was wondering if it was possible to continue with our date tomorrow?”, Bette asked
Tina was surprised. “sure, if you don’t mind me asking, what made you change your mind?”, Tina asked.
“you know who. She doesn’t let up”, Bette replied.
Tina chuckled in the background. She was happy to be laughing. She had one hell of a busy day. “oh, she got you too huh?”, Tina asked.
“more like talked my ear off”, Bette replied.
“I heard that”, Angelica laughed from a distance.
“sorry sweetie. I meant it in a good way, not a bad one”, Bette replied.
“what’s she screaming about?”, Tina asked.
“me talking about her. She has ears as radar’s. Nothing gets past her”, Bette replied.
“I know. She’s so smart it’s fucking incredible. I’ve never seen a four old carry on an adult conversation the way she does. She has a baby body, and a mind like a forty year old”, Tina said.
“I know, but atleast she knows what’s going on. She’s not stupid you know”, Bette replied.
“true. One thing I can say is god blessed us with a beautiful, smart, intelligent, and loving child. I’m so blessed that we’re her parents”, Tina said.
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I’ve just read your past few chapters. Amazing writer you are. I like where you are taking this story and I thought I should let you know that I so DIG UR STORY! I hope you continue soon. Real soon Bye. Oh and one more than I’m happy that Bette and Tina are finally patching things up. They’ve waited too long, and about Angelica. I love her. What would Bette and Tina do with her. She’s what you would call a blessing. Not all parents are blessed with an intelligent child like her.
Wow! I really love youre story! I think kids can be amazing, especially bette and tina’s ;) I have some troubles posting though… So if you have any advice on how to handle that, please tell me…
What the hell was I thinking?”, Bette asked.”about Bette Porter”, Angelica replied. LMAO I want an Angelica…someday. Definitely not right now though. She’d be like, “Mommy you totally fail as a mother.”
This is just so Great. Tina and Bette talking and doing Dinner together as a family. I hope the Date goes well. Tommorrow will be to long in comming
Love this, Children picks up on what they hear,No baby talk and smart people around all the time. Also the genes. Being around Porter would be enough. thanks
tomorrow huh????? I would’ve asked for a 2for Friday, but considering how the servers r working it may take me till tomorrow to read it…….LOVIN IT….LOOKING FORWARD TO AN UPDATE!!!!!!
angel talks like she is 15! ha cant wait for the next
Bring on the date/dinner! Get your family back Bette and Tina kick that jackass that you call Henry out of your life! Please post soon! I just love this story!
tina is right… angelica is a 40 year old in a babies body… love this story… get rid of hen-dick
What a smart child! Can’t wait for the date!
I am sooooooooo happy that they are having a dinner date or family night. In fact, I hope that they talk so much that they fall asleep (in each others arms of course) on the coach. Off course our little wizard Angelica will wake up and come and join them :o)
Grt strie!! Babie A is lil2Brilliant Einstein 4me but I dig it..Henry is a punk jus like T, they deserve eachutha..I dun understnd how ne bodi can jus 4give Tina like that&take her bak..it amazes me!..Tina’z a bitch..she may love Bette but that dun mean she respect her..hmm I guess u cnt hlp who u love..it’s all4Babie A!..give the kid her fam! Bette&Tina both need2get up off they arse..stop b-ing selfish prick’z&get they’re priorities in chek, get they life&marriage bak2gether&under control..fix it god damnet..4the babie!! Tina still a Grade A Bitch..THNX4the update..looking4wrd2the nxt chap
I am so excited and having trouble containing my joy. I have a neice that when she was younger could carry on an adult conversion better than most adults. But she was still a kid when it came to Santa Clause. Every noise she heard she thought that it was the jolly ole’ man himself. Please post soon and allow the date to be successful. Can’t wait for the Bette and Tina sparks to fly.
This is awesome and cant wait to see their date. Love Angel!
Excellent post, after the all this problem in the repost i was available to read your last 3 chapters, it`s incredible the way that you put all the feelings, i like very much Angelica is so smart and sweet and she is the one that put a lot of senses in her mothers, Tina just need a push but she need to value all the time that Bette had been waiting, i hope read your next post soon.
angelica is definately smart for her age but it’s good because at least she could make mama B to see what she needs to do…can’t wait for their date
please have these two talk, fight, make up..and get rid of Henry. thanks for the story
Wow, so many Baby Geniuses in this world. Why don’t we have them running the place? Great story regardless of what I think.
hey, I have been silently reading, and I’m amazed at how you bought this story together. You though of a setting in the future. I haven’t seen one like this one. I enjoy the character of Angelica. She is one smart girl, with an adult mind. She reminds me alot of my baby cousin Daisha. She’s about her age and she speaks and carry’s on the way an adult does. She’s very observant of her mother and father, and she always watching their every moves. She has a thousand questions in one day to ask, and when she feels as though you ignoring her. She knows. She not dumb or stupid. I believe in four years old to be able to act this way. It depends on the environment in which the child is bought up. My cousin’s the only child surrounded by a bunch of adults, so naturally she’s able to pick up on big words and express her feelings. Amazing. I admire your story and I can’t wait for the next post. Another post tonight would be nice, cuz I don’t think I could wait until tomorrow. Keep up the great work. Bye.
I like the story and am happy that Bette and Tina are going to finally spend time together, but no matter how smart Angelica is, I am having a hard time buying her being THIS smart.
Tomorrow, I don’t know if we can wait.
hey cutefacethickwaist. I am loving your story, and I’m with vakkav. My newphew Jonathan is the same way and he’s five. He grabs alot of attention from older people because of his personality, and the way he expresses himself. I find it crazy to believe that a child his age can understand adult conversations, and grasp the ideas we all talk about. He’s amazing in his own way. I personally feel he’s blessed, and I could only imagine what’s he’ll be like in the next years, and those to come. He just freakin amazing. Therefore I hope that u post soon. I’m so digging this story. For real no BS. I love it. I love your way of thinking, and how you put your mind to good use on paper. Your now one of my favorite authors..aww how sweet..lol. Anyway about posting tomorrow…DON’T DO IT! Trinigirl needs ya today my lady. So, if you can post tonight…pleeeeeze. Okay gotta go. CHOW!
Baby A is certainly articulate, isn’t she, like her mommy B? Aspergers by proxy I guess!
tks for reposting..finally…really like this story, although Angelica is sounding like a 16yrs old…her sentence structure is amazing…pls keep up posted!! tks