Fan Fiction
This story has been set to a rating of PG-13. Age verification is required to proceed.
More Than a Feeling
Login to add story to favorites
(44 votes, average: 3.61 out of 5)You need to be a registered member to rate this post.
Loading ...
The next day, Tina woke up tired, confused, and most of all, late. She rushed through everything, not even stopping for breakfast when she ran out of the house just in time to see her bus pull away from the curb. Wait! She shouted as she ran, but the bus didnt stop. She gave up half a block into it, knowing that it was no use in trying to catch the bus once it had fully pulled from the curb. Slowing down to barely a walk, Tina bent her head back and exhaled, looking up at the sky.
The honk of a car horn made her turn to lookand then suck in air in surprise. It was Bette.
Hey stranger, need a ride?
Uhyeah. Tina said, laughing.
Hop in.
Tina opened the door and got in, feeling her heartbeat faster than it had when she was running. What are you doing here?
Well, I came to see if you wanted a ride to school, and I caught you playing tag with the bus. Bette laughed. I guess its good that I came.
Yeah. Tina nodded her head spinning. All of the thoughts about Bettes feelings toward her and her own feelings towards Bette that kept her up most of the night were swirling around in her head.
You okay?
Huh? Tina looked at Bette.
You zoned out.
Ohsorry. Im just tired. I-I didnt sleep well last night.
Well dont worry, because were picking up Alice next, and she can be like a triple shot of espresso.
Oh joy. Tina deadpanned and Bette laughed.
Hey, I was wondering, how about we make this a regular thing?
What?
Me picking you up?
Tina shook her head. Oh no. Thats too much trouble.
No it isnt. Id be happy to do it if it meant you wouldnt have to ride the cheese bus every morning.
She wouldnt do this for you if she didnt like you. I dont know Bette. I dont want you to feel obligated.
I wouldnt Tee, I swear. Bette pulled up outside Alices house, parked the car, honked and then turned to face the blonde. I wouldnt ask if I didnt think I could. Come on, just say yes. Bette flashed her smile and poked Tina playfully on the shoulder. You know you want to.
Comments
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.
MEAN GIRL!!!! what’s next??? i confess, i’m addicted!! great cliffhanger. I supposed you’ve been very busy but I thought you were on spring break… I can’t wait till the next chapter. Hope you have fun!
This can’t be good.Bette thinks she is in the bathroom,unless Bette steped out side for a smoke. thanks
Thnak you for posting this chapter so soon. I hope you had a nice weekend! I really liked the date…except for the cliffhanger. Eric is bad news…I hope Bette (or Alice or Dana) will stop Tina from going outside.
This is bad idea for Tina to go outside with Eric and hope Bette there to save her. Ok post soon please, thanks!
manda ur a tease till monday!! i guess ill wait plus im on spring break!!!! let the games continue
oh no…can eric just get hit by a bus? don’t make anything happen to tina…bette to the rescue…post soon
If Tina was going to go outside with Eric, she really should’ve told Alice and Dana. This became one of my favorite stories from the first sentence. Have a nice weekend and I’ll be on the lookout for your next chapter!
Awwwwwwwww, thanks for the shout out Manda! This story and your writing is necessary and fan-fucking-tastic…unlike Ilene the Destroyer and her season of terror. I said it once and I’ll say it again, when S3 is released on DVD it’ll end up in the clearance bin alongside S1 of Alf. Hope you like them apples, Ilene. ANYWAY, you didn’t disappoint with this chapter. I think I read one word a minute so that I could drag the story out as long as possible. You know, to stabilize my addiction until Monday. When Tina went outside with Eric I felt like I was watching a horror movie because I actually said rather loudly, “Don’t you go outside with him, girl!” I suspect I should have popcorn ready for the next chapter ’cause Bette’s going to make Monty eat lightening and cap thunder…and then her and Tina should make out…a lot. Enjoy your weekend!
Oh no, this can’t be good… Tina better kick his ball if he tries to do ‘anything’ on her… and then he won’t be able to use his thing for the rest of his life… muahahah
Love the story, but Tina seems to be stuck on stupid where Eric is concerned. It doesn’t make sense for her to go off alone with the @sshole after what Bette told her about him. “Hey, Tina, run back inside before the jerk friggin rapes you or something!”I hope Bette is close by and rescues her before anything bad happens. Manda, you’ve got me all worried. Now, you know I need the next chapter like most people need their morning cafiene, don’tcha? =) Really good story! I am loving it. Keep the chapters coming, please.
fuck that can’t be good, but then again I smell Bette gonna come to the rescue, and poor Eric is gonna need to stay home for a few weeks while his balls heal….LOL!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE DON’T LET ANYTHING HAPPEN TO TINA!!!!!! Instead let her fall into Bette’s loving arms after she rescues her T!!!!!!!!!!
Well seems like Eric is still the same dickhead as he used to be, he used the same trick on Tina as he did on Bette all those years ago! Well lets hope Bette rescues Tina from the big bad monster so they can finally be happy together. I know how it feels to go to school, work and then write! But just so you know I’ll be waiting for the next chapter, doesn’t mather how long it takes!
I think homeboy Eric/Monty/Romeo may have a severe case of split personality. I really do enjoy reading your story…it is enchanting.
oh for heaven’s sake when is Tina going to learn men are all dicks especially Eric, please let this turn out well and let Bette save Tina…I simply love your story, Please post soon, I can’t handle the suspense.
Damn, we all know what that dickhead Eric is going to do. Even Tina feels it. Who will help her get out of this mess? Hopefully, Bette will see this and piss her off enough to go after Tina and not just have her sit and pout. Have a great weekend!
I am really enjoying this perspective of the characters. Setting it in high school was a great idea. I really like how it’s moving along and now you have me on the edge of my seat.
yeah Ditto! this is so becoming one of my favorites!.. Damn eric! kick his ass again.. Hope you dont make up wait to long for the next chapter! hahaha
ahhhh come on!!!! lol good post cant wait till the next dont keep us waiting 2 much
This is becoming one of my favorite…please post soon. I love the way Alice and Dana alrealy like each other and Bette and Tina are great. Cheers…Peace