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    More Than a Feeling

    Story written on March 26, 2006 by Manda L..
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    Chapter 15



    Bette came back from the concession stand with two sodas, searching the arcade for Tina. Surely, she still wasnt in the bathroom. She spotted Alice and Dana by a pool table, so decided to interrupt, just for a second.

    Hey you two, have you seen Tina? Bette looked around one more time.

    Nope. Alice said as Dana struggled to steady the pool cue. Alice just laughed. How many times do I have to show you?

    Maybe once more. Dana said, still bent over the table, looking at Alice over her shoulder, smiling.

    Alice shook her head, leaning her body over Danas, taking the brunettes hands into her own. Youre holding it wrong. She whispered, forming Danas left forefinger and thumb into a hole and gently guiding Danas right hand along, slipping the end of the cue through. There you go.

    Thanks. Dana said, hitting the ball. It totally missed the solid 6, but it was worth it.

    Okay. Bette breathed, raising her eyebrows and widening her eyes. Just, watch the sodas; you think you can do that? Alice and Dana werent even paying attention. Bette just shook her head. Ill be back. If Tina shows up, tell her Im in the bathroom looking for her.

    Bette walked off to the restroom in search of Tina.

    ———————

    The minute Tina stepped outside, she thought of Bettes story. It happened right there in the alley next to this arcade. Whos to say he wouldnt try it again? Eric– Tina tried to rip her hand from Erics grasp, but he had it in a vice-grip.

    Before she even knew what was happening, he had his other arm hooked around her waist and she was being carried into darkness. He slammed her up against the brick wall, knocking the wind out of her. Pictures of a poor, helpless fourteen-year-old Bette raced through her mind.

    The only light illuminating the pitch-black alley was a flickering fluorescent, and it was fading, casting half of Erics face into a shadow, making him look so sinister, Tina stopped breathing.

    She tried to fight him off. Eric stop! She shouted, but was cut off by his mouth. He attacked it like a wild animal, biting at her lips. She tried to push him away, beating on his chest and shoulders with her fists. It only energized him further. He grabbed her wrists with his hands, shoving them down.

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    5. Manda, if you could quantify begging how much would it take to have you write another chapter tommorrow…wait, it’s 12:55 am, I mean today? A huge thanks for posting this stellar chapter! I’d also like to put in some additional begging in the hopes that Tina doesn’t shut Bette down. Both Bette and myself wouldn’t be able to take it. As for Eric, I’m pretty sure that Shane and Tina have ensured that he’ll never be able to have kids. An Eric free world is a lovely place…like S3 Denialville.

    6. I thnk Tina should report Eric..if he can do this2B..if he can do it2T..he can do it2ne defenseless gurl..sum1 should prevent Monty frm touchin nebodi..asswhipe..cut off his testicles, that might help? This was an amazing chap Manda..AMAZIN..as r aLLLLL the uthaz of course..Bette&Tina..I so happy4them..sad failed attempt at they 1st kiss though..tsk tsk..tragic..they like eachutha! Fantastic :) GO4IT..Post soon please?!..Love this strie..ur talent is wild dude..realistic&Beautiful..THNX4the update! it was primo keep it up..

    9. thank god tina wasn’t abused completely, that asshole deserved to eb castrated…is tina gonna tell bette that she likes her? or that she knows that bette likes her? post soon

    11. Eric are such an fucking asshole and just want to cut his dick of and shove it up his ass, glad Bette and Tim get there on time to save Tina and to see Tim kick erics ass, he awesome. Ok now let Tina open up to Bette and talk about their feeling and let Bette help Tina go through this. OK post soon please, thanks!

    12. Eric is an asshat and Tim should’ve continued his assault. Alright violence is wrong. Whatever. I say Tina and Bette divulge their feelings and let the chips fall where they may.

    13. HAHA Eric got what he deserved! Great chapter, as always. Hope Tina tells Bette she’s having al kinds of feelings…for her! Well bring on the next chapter!

    15. Manda… i just finished reading all 15 of your chapters… and i have to say i loved evry one of them… you are doing one hell of a job here… and after the show last night… man do we need you more then ever… so please continue

    17. When Bette told Tina that she was gay too I was like what Manda and Tina are thinking?? but it makes total sense now, I like the way the story is going.

    18. Manda L. I am a recent convert to your wonderful and awesome story. I started it last Thurday and finished it on Friday so you can only imagine my glee at this latest addition to your majestic, marvelous and magical masterpiece. I am completely drawn into this universe and can only hope that Tina admits to Bette the depth of her feelings. Your writing is both eloquent and entertaining. The horror of Eric’s attack was realistically brought to life. Thank the heavens for Bette and Tim’s timing. Thank you so, so much for this terrific tale. I will be waiting and watching for your next chapter. A Fan.

    22. you are rigth, this was a rude chapter but Eric deserved more than that! Tina has to tell to the police, anyway, Tina find out she wants Bette for save her and when they almost kisser was nice i like it so much please continue post

    23. Wow I didn’t know anyone besides me used the term “fuckrag.” lol Gotta love Tim. He’s the big brother every girl wants to have. Hey where’s the little teddy bear? Yes, I’m a detail freak. :p

    25. Hi, I love your story and I hope Bette talks her into reporting it. She knows it wont go away. He wont stop until someone stops him. I don’t know how true this is but I was told a Rapist will commit 12 rapes before one person even reports it. Just something to think about. I sure would like to see Tina put a stop to his apprenticeship. Please post soon. OLO Soapy

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