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More Than a Feeling
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Bette sat there, waiting, swimming in the tense silence that suddenly filled the room. For a second, Tina had locked eyes with her, but now it seemed as if she were staring at nothing. Unable to stand it for a second longer, Bette spoke up. Tee? She reached out and took one of Tinas hands, afraid that the blonde was pulling into herself. Thats not what Bette wanted at all.
Tinas gaze lowered to Bettes hand, feeling her own hand tingle at the contact. How does she do that to me?
Noticing Tinas uncomfortable gaze, Bette removed the offending hand and placed it on her lap.
Tina wanted to grab Bettes hand and put it back. Bette
What?
Tina frowned for a second, seriously debating whether she should talk or keep it to herself. I cant She unintentionally mumbled aloud. She looked to Bette for some reassurance.
That, concern and a whole lot more washed across Bettes face. You cant what?
BetteII might How to put this into words? She tried a different approach. A-a few days ago, Dana said something to me that made mestart to think about things.
Perplexed, and scared out of her wits, Bette swallowed hard. She wanted to grab Tina and hug her, hug her until she couldnt breathe, until she melted into Bettes body and they became one. What did she say?
She said thatwell she thinks that
What Tina, please, youre killing me here.
She thinks you have feelingsfor me.
BOOM! Tina dropped the bomb and it landed right on Bettes chest. She could feel the weight pressing down, making it very difficult to breathe. She didnt know what to say, what to think, what to do. What now? Deny it? Affirm it? What then? Will she freak? Will she hate me?
Judging from Bettes reaction, Tina hoped it had to be true, and seeing the difficulty Bette was having in trying to respond, Tina decided to put her mind at rest. If thats true Bettethen I have a confession to make.
Im startingI think Tina exhaled and pushed her tea away, lowering her head to the table. Why is this so fucking hard?
Just say it. I think I might have feelings for youtoo.
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I never got confused but at first I thought that the timing wasn’t good for Bette to confess she was gay, now I realize how wrong I was, the timing was perfect!!!!
manda, just read this again, slowly to savor the sweetness of this story. it’s perfect! thanks so much!!
This is so cool! Here Tina is the straight girl who decides to tell the Lesbian Bette that she has feelings for her. Thus causing Bette to be totally speechless. I could picture this and the shocked look on Bette’s face. Finally, the girl that she likes, actually likes her back. I hope that you post soon.
haha Alice is a character shes too funny…great post like always am looking forward to the next one and now i can sleep happy lol
Alright! Great chapter! loved Alice, so funny! Well can’t wait to see what’s next, a first kiss maybe, so Tina finds out there really is a spark! Thanx
Thank you so much for this story, I really love it and it makes me smile ;-). Your girls are sooo sweet! They are really taking it slowly, though… I can’t believe they didn’t even kiss! will they soon??? Hope so… BTW I think big sis Samantha will grasp it pretty soon.
Love your story, love the girls. Please keep doing what you do.
Manda… i am loving your story… i wish bette would off kissed her… just wait till then and tina watch out… the sparks will be fying… please continue
yay! great update! cannot wait for more:)
YAY!!!!!! time for the first kiss.
Manda L. Another touching, tantalizing, tasteful and torturous tale; the trepidation and tip-toeing that Tina and Bette are engaged in promises to build in to a spectacular love affair. Finally they have each faced their fears and are still on speaking term. This luxurious longing for one another can now be the foundation of their romance. Being honest and open, sounds so simple in theory but so difficult in practice, is the only way forward. The tingles and tickles that they only feel in each other’s presence are a sure sign that love is in the air. Some times it touches you gently like falling rain; other time a deluge threatens to wash you away but either way you end up wet. Given your perfect prose and passionate paragraphs this will be an eloquent, entertaining and enjoyable journey to follow. Thank you so very much for all of your effort and productive posting. Your Fan.
Props to Tina for sharing her feelings with Bette. Bette made me smile when she asked Tina if it was all a dream. How sweet is she. Please use “asshat” as often as you wish. It can be quite liberating. Great closing song.
OMG… WOOT WOOT.. * jumps around* Tina finally came out with her feelings.. GREAT! This story is sooo kick ass.. Love the way you write alice.. so funny. *10 million stars* haha
Yes finally Tina tell Bette about her feeling for her, they can take thing slow and be happy. Ok let see whats next, thanks!
FINALLY! Now let’s hope Tina doesn’t get scared and runs from Bette. Let’s also hope Alice doesn’t spill the beans to anyone else. Shane already picked up on the vibe. I think Tina’s mom will be cool with it. Not too sure about her sister though. Well, I stayed up to see if you’d post and since you did, I can go to bed now. =D
Finally they talk about their feelings! i am so glad neither Bette or Tina freaking out! but i know that maybe B&T will have a little hard time but definitly almost all the time happpy times continue post please
wonderful, finally even if we didn’t get a kiss…can’t wait for those 4 to go on more fake dates LOL
Manda, why oh why did I go down that path? Your equation is precisely why I had to take math in summer school one year. Thus my B.A. in Sociology and me currently working in the TV/movive business…peace out to math! However, I think I can manage your formula. Thank you for posting this stupendous chapter..go ‘head with your bad self, Bette! Once more with feeling, PLEASE post as soon as your schedule allows…that’s was the answer derived form the formula.
Hey Manda L – Sorry I haven’t commented on the last couple of chapters, but I absolutely loves this story and I’m so excited about were this is going and how B&T will take this further….please post soon :o))