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    A Thin Line – Chpt 5

    Story written on March 28, 2006 by zheese.
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    Helena surprises Bette with a phone call

    Every minute of every weekend that I had with Angelica was precious. And I thoroughly enjoyed each second. But I must admit, taking care of a child, not yet one year old, could take its toll on me. I was always grateful when nap time came, and we both could get some rest.

    This Saturday, I was particularly thankful to lay her down in the afternoon. Thinking about the previous night’s encounter with Helena was sapping my emotional energies. And it didn’t help that my sleep had been fitful. My mind had been in turmoil trying to understand where all those feelings had come from and what they meant, if anything.

    At least Tina’s dropping Angelica off that morning proceeded without a distressing incident. That wasn’t always the case. We were still battling each other on adoption and custody arrangements, so I never knew what might come up. In the interim, I was joyously overwhelmed that she was allowing me every other weekend with our baby girl. And it was becoming a relief that every time I saw Tina, I realized my heart was mending just a little more. But, make no mistake, I certainly still had my challenging days and my despondent moments.

    As I lay Angelica in her crib, covered her with her quilted baby blanket, and kissed her fat little cheeks, I lightly sighed admiring her beauty. After checking the monitor, I retired to my room, stretched out on my back on the bed and closed my eyes. I thought I might find a few moments to meditate and to find some peace.

    The attempt, however, proved futile. Almost as soon as I closed my eyes, I envisioned Helena in my arms. I smelled her perfume just like she was there with me in my bedroom at that moment. I breathed in, deeply, welcoming her scent. It evoked the memory of feeling her tongue licking against my ear and my neck. I remembered how my body instinctively drew her closer as she rubbed my back and my bottom. My ass. Helena’s hand had been briefly on my ass. And I relished the sensation of it, wishing I could feel the flesh of her palm on my bare behind. How nice it was to feel desired again.

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    5. Yay! I thought I’d test my luck and see if you’d updated before I went off to bed, and yes yes you have. I loved this, as per usual. I liked the whole intimacy with Bette and the playful banter between the two on the phone. I’m excited for Bette! This all seems so natural, like it could very well be written in on the show. (which, after seein the finale, I am starting to lose hope in) So, I’m glad you’re continuing. :) And check your mail, if you haven’t gotten the note I left a few days ago.

    8. Ok, I’ve pimping this story and a couple of others on the discussion board at the Helena/Bette thread!! Soooo I’ve decided to actually leave a comment:) Love the story and the pace of it. I always look forward to your postings and can’t wait for more!!

    14. Zheese, Another magnificent morsel into a potential pleasureable paramour between Bette and Helena. These way that Bette and Helena are beginning to open up to one another is marvelous. They are tip-toeing towards each other with such awe and deference. Afraid to make the wrong move but equally propelled to make a move. The temptation is there and must be challenged and satified to allow them to take the final leap. This is a must read tale now. I only hope that IC reads your fantastic fan fiction and realizes just how magically this partnership could become. You have pitched it perfectly and managed to capture and portray the desires and needs for both Bette and Helena as they succumb to their emotions. Can’t wait for the following chapter as the gal meet for dinner and…. Your Loyal Fan.

    16. Another excellent chapter zheese. Do I detect a certain familiarity with the french language? Merci beaucoup pour l’histoire de Bette et Helena…..

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