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The Trouble With Love Chapter Thirty
It was Monday morning and Tina stood in the shower trying to figure out which muscle ached the most. She and Bette had made love well into the early hours of Sunday morning, and after a few hours sleep spent the rest of the day in bed, reacquainting themselves with each other and trying to reach higher and higher levels of pleasure. Now she was paying for it, but as she let the hot water wash over her body, she smiled to herself as she let the memories replay over in her mind.
When she woke up this morning she was tempted to wake Bette up as well, just to remind her how much she was loved, but when she saw how soundly Bette was sleeping, it just didnt seem fair. She watched Bette for a while, mesmerised by the rise and fall of her chest as she slept, just the very top of her breast peeking out from under the blanket. It took all of Tinas will power not to reach out and begin a slow steady caress of the that breast, so when she felt herself really beginning to crack, she got up, out of bed, and into the shower.
As Tinas mind was preoccupied with thoughts of Bette she didnt hear the bathroom door open and was therefore surprised to feel the rush of cold air as Bette opened the shower door.
T, you left me all alone. Yesterday you promised to never leave me.
I dont think I meant quite in this context. laughed Tina, loving the way that Bette was pouting.
Will you make it up to me?
If you get yourself in here and shut that door behind you Ill make it up to you, and then some.
Tina pulled Bette into the shower and before anymore words could be said her lips were burning a trail across Bettes neck and up towards her mouth. Bette gasped at the onslaught on her senses, the combination of Tinas warm tongue and the hot water of the shower almost brought her to her knees, and the way that the water made their bodies move together, without friction, was almost enough to make Bette come, right there and then.
Bette concentrated on Tina hands roaming her body, over her breasts, down her stomach, and then on her hips, pulling their bodies together. Then she felt Tina inch her right leg in between her own, kicking slightly at her instep, insisting that she get her way. As Bettes legs opened Tina could feel a fuller wetness covering her skin, letting her know that Bette was there with her, in a way that only she could. A battle raged within Tina, a war between wanting to have Bette instantly or making her wait, hinting at the pleasure that was hers for the taking and then delivering it when the waiting had become too much for the both of them.
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(32 votes, average: 4.53 out of 5)
that British water…the potential is amazing!!
shower scenes are always welcome, they are hot and wet LOL…i love that they are so in love and together now, i hope nothing will come between them
dam i now need another shower… this time a cold one… loving this… loving them together… thanks… and keep them cuming
LOL…i think maybe the shower scene was a sucess….personnally i only read it 4 times….no more than anyone else!!!lol.. Same effect as the last chapter…Sweet devine J….Very Hot!!and there not done yet….
waooooo! this was excellent de shower scene was incredible, this is what i call a reconnection! you make this day worthy! i like it so much, i hope they will be more happy each day! continue post
OMG!!!WOW!!!! I’ll take a shower like that any day or any time. Please Post Soon
That’s how every single person should get Monday mornings started. Fantastic, Citygirl!
hotttttttttttt
I just can’t seem to get clean. The number of showers that I have taken lately has pruned my skin. No just kidding, but really all these NC-17 fics are shooting up my water bill. Are you sure that we can not get rid of IC and let you writers take over their jobs. They don’t seem to have a clue as how to write a loving couple into their stories (especially Bette and Tina). Thanks for this visual image that will remain with me for a few hours.
My shower will in the morning will not live up to this. Damn that was hot! thanks and post soon.
Wow hot hot hot!
*takes notes* :O
Great reconnection going on back at this hotel – have loved this story from the start, excellant job!
Mercy that shower scene and before were superb. All of the writers in the different stories do have some skills in the lovemaking department or overly active imaginations. The NC-17’s are to die for. Thank you ladies. Thanks for the post.
yes!!!!!!! god bless all skillful lovers. with tender touches, beautifull intuition, and happy lovers all around. i love your story it is so beautiful. the shower scene…. uhh still at a loss for words right now. except um… DAMN!!! please post soon. PEACE.