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    Are we Family? FINAL CHAPTER

    Story written on March 30, 2006 by strtgirl1.
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    FINAL CHAPTER

     

     

    It has been three months since Danas funeral, and here we are again at St. Lukes laying to rest another loved one.

     

    Marissa died three days ago in the early morning hours, with me and Bette at her side. She had slowly been losing her battle with this dreadful cancer, as the end grew nearer, Marissa labored for breaths to tell us how much these past months had meant to her, to be with her girls again, she wanted us to remember her now, not the mother who abandoned each of us, We told her we loved her, She smiled and squeezed our hands tight, and was gone. We sat there with tears running down our faces, lost in our own thoughts, for a long time after she passed. I finally stood up, I kissed my mothers cheek for the last time, I  then went to Bette, she had her head in her hands crying softly, I kneeled down to her, and pulled her in my arms and held her tight, telling her it was going to be ok. After several minutes, I let her go, and I said, I need to make the arrangements for the coroner to pick our mothers body up. Bette just nodded her head ok. After the paramedics left with Marissas body, I walked back to the room, Bette was still sitting by the bed, and I could see was lost and was having a hard time coming to terms with Marissa death. I turned around and went back to retrieve my cell phone , I called the only one I knew, who could help Bette at this time, and could  give her the strength she needed.  Tina.  When Tina answered the phone, I explained to her, Marissa had just died, and that Bette needed her. Tina told me, how sorry she was and that she would leave right away, she would drop Angelica off at Kits and be right over, I thanked her, and went into the kitchen to make coffee ,and wait for Tina to arrive. Twenty minutes later, Tina walked in the door; she hugged me, and again told me how sorry she was, and how she really grew fond of Marissa herself these past months and she will miss her. I nodded to the bedroom where Bette was. I told her she needs you Tina kissed me on the cheek and went to Marissas bedroom, her heart broke at the sight, Bette was crying so hard, she didnt even hear her come in. Tina went to her and gathered her in her arms, Tina kept whispering, let it out, It will be ok Baby, I am so sorry, After some time, Bette and Tina came out of the bedroom, We sat and discussed the funeral arrangements, after we had them all made, We decided to go to our homes, and get some much needed rest. Bette and Tina hugged me, and asked me if I wanted to go to their house with them. I looked at them and said, No thanks, I need some time alone. We hugged again and left.

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    2. This story is very painful on so many levels, yet it showed how love can conquer so much. Death can bring a family closer or tear them apart. Thank you for bringing this family closer. Now, I hope that you will continue to write stories. Have you considered writing for the show? They seem to need new writers and the ones on this site seem to do a much better job.

    3. Wow….I cannot begin to tell you how much I enjoyed this story. It was so sad, yet so wonderful. Every chapter brought tears to my eyes. I really hated to see it end. Hope you write more and if not, you rocked on this one.

    4. A beautiful closer to a wonderfull storyline. For a firsttime writter, a mayor acomplisment. I am sorry that this story is over, for i loved your writting. The story reminded me of the loss of my best friend some years back. The part where Becky leaves Bette to sit on her mothers side of the bed, after she passed away and called Tina. Someone needed to do that to me too. It was endearing to read, but also kind of hard. Thank you! Write more, please!

    5. Just finished reading all of your chapters and I’m amazed. The story touched me deeply. I looking forward to the beginning of your new epos. Thanks a lot for sharing them with us.

    7. I finally got caught up with your story and loved it. It was so toughtfull and well written. It was good to see that all four women, the sisters and mother found closure. GREAT job.

    9. WOW. I just read your whole story. You are a fantastic writer. I hope you decide to write another one. Love is a blessing to have in your life. The love of a friend, family, and partner can be so magical.

    10. THIS WAS SO BEAUTIFUL AND TOUCHING WITH EVERY WORD WRITTEN..IM SO HAPPY BETTE DIDNT HOLD A GRUDGE AND SAW HER MOTHER BEFORE HER FINAL DAYS..LIFE IS TOO SHORT…DANA’S LETTER WERE THE SADDEST PART AS I COULDNT IMAGINIE WHAT SHE MUST HAVE WENT THROUGH…I LOVE THE GAND THEY ARE THE REASONS THESE STORIES CAN GO ON FOREVER…NICELY WRITTEN

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