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I thought we could spend the evening together… PT23
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I thought we could spend the evening together PT23
Previously
“T, baby” she placed her shell into her pocket and took Tinas hands from her knees into her own, cradling them close to her chest, “I know I have no right to ask you this, but would you be willing to accept a very, very big apology from a very, very selfish, ignorant asshole, who loves you very, very much and has so much explaining and groveling to do that its going to take many weeks to make this up to you?”
Tina smiled at the words, she looked into the eyes that she often lost herself in, the sorrow and compassion very obvious on the surface and her expression showing how distraught she was at her earlier actions, Bettes fifteen minutes had obviously been very productive if she had come to the realization of all those things in such a short time, “Id be willing to consider it, but I think you may need to rethink the timescale, this is going to take much longer than many weeks to make up for”
Tina looked deeply into Bettes glassy eyes, her heart was pounding with love, it was pounding with anger, it was pounding with frustration, and it was annoyingly pounding because of the way Bette was looking at her, those deep puppy eyes, reflecting her sadness, her regret, her self condemnation, but when in such close proximity all those things could quite simply be turned straight on their head and turned into lust, passion and an intense need for the other, today however, she sought and found all of those things rolled into one, being mirrored back at her.
“There are so many things I want to say and do to you right now Bette.”
“I can imagine, do you want to slap my face now to get it over with?”
“Your not far off the mark there Bette, I could slap you and I could kiss you, but Im not sure which one should come first for a minute.” Tina huffed, her confusing emotions playing with her.
“Well, before you kiss me I need to get rid of this taste in my mouth!”
“What taste?” Tina looked puzzled.
“I uh I was sick.” Bette looked down, she moved to reach for the bag containing their lunch and grabbed the water bottle, she took a mouthful and swirled before continuing to gulp the cold liquid to ease the rawness that had been left as a reminder of her bodys reaction.
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A child’s innocence is so enlightening. Emily is a breath of fresh air…thanks for introducing her, maybe u’ll bring her in periodically. UPDATE SOON!!!
Jo…Once again, well done. Kids can say whatever they want and it’s a good device for getting things said that adults have a difficult time verbalizing.
that was sweet… now i guess thats the best way to describe love to a child… greta chapter… please continue
Love that little girl!
Yeah, this chapter confirms that I’m addicted to this story. More please!
I always wanted to be a lebanon. Kids do say the darnedest things. Try working with them. My new name is Ms. Caboose. I am still trying to figure out that one. I am still loving your story. You have so much insight into these two women. It is what the L word started out with but somehow took the wrong road. Even in season 3 there were still signs of love, lust, and whatever between them. If you get angry at them then there has got to be some love for them or you would not get that angry at them (did I make any sense at all). Even in the FF world, it seems more people are moving away from a happy Bette and Tina. Thanks for keeping them moving forward and trying to make them happy. Still love that gallery scene.
Another great chapter Jo. Children at that age are so open and honest–Emily is a doll. If only more parents would explain love that way to their kids–that was brilliant.
They say kids make tv shows more popular and Emily is a joy to watch in your story. I’m glad she is still around and seems they may all become friends (we like Jill too). Another GREAT chapter!!
I love Emily,such a smart child and so kind. Her Mother has raise her well. So very wise for a 5yr old. Tina owes her a big hug.she made Bette a lot wiser. thanks
just fan-fucking-tastic Jo….so much that i loved about this one. thank J for letting you write this too == find a way to reward her maybe ??
Brilliant as ever….always a pleasure to read more than once…..
Ooooh this child is so sweet, innocent, kind and smart – you gotta love her….just like Tina :o)) Great that you made Emily come back to B&T, maybe they can become frinds with Jill, so Bette can see her pinky friend often, they are good to and for each other. I loved the way you made Bette apologize and grovl to Tina, they are just amazing together and that’s all because of you….you’re so brilliant and I can definitely get used to a post each day, say thank you to your girlfriend from me :o)) Take care mate….
LOL@ Lebanon…maybe now girls can say that they are lebanese partners…so cute that emily met tina…maybe B&T both will think of a baby now
the innocence of a child…lebanon’s
First, thanks for the mouth rinse. Bette really shouldn’t want to kill Alice. On the contrary, she should thank her for giving them a valuable tool to enhance their communication. It’s not Alice’s fault if Bette got hurt using it carelessly, anymore than you should blame someone for cutting your finger on the kitchen knife they gave you.
LEBANONS!!! THAT IS SWEETLY INNOCENT!!! (I DON’T EVEN KNOW IF THAT MAKES SENSE.) BUT OMG!!! THAT WAS SO CUTE. THANX!!! please post soon. PEACE.
Good chapter. The kid is cute and sweet. Ok let Them talk more and work thing out. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Sweet!!! Thank you for Emily!
lmao @ lebanon’s. I’m so taken with your Emily. I hope my daughter ends up being that wise and kind.
great job jo thanks