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    A Night in the D — Chapter 28

    Story written on April 4, 2006 by luvrgirl.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=60318
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    High time.

    (Previously)

     

    She stood and walked to the window, turning her back to Tina, who watched her silently. There was a long pause before Bette finally spoke again. If I were your mother, she said quietly, Id tell you to let this go. Id tell you that youre beautiful and special. That your life circumstances belie that reality but dont disguise it. That you have a spirit and energy that is glaring and unmistakable and truly intoxicating to be around. She paused. Id tell you that you deserve so much more.

     

    Tina sat with the revelation. She took it in. She knew how to protest. I dont need a mother, Bette, she said evenly.

     

    But the voice in front of her, when it came, was far away and directed out the window, overly reconciled already to the wind and snow, the gathering cold. Oh Tina, Bette said, turning towards her like the truth. Yes, you do.

     

     

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    Thats it? Dean asked. Are you kidding me?

     

    I wish. Tina sighed.

     

    She says you need a mother and you left? Just like that?

     

    No, not just like that. Not exactly.

     

    Well exactly how was it? Dean lifted volume one of his ancient set of Encyclopedia Britannica onto his lap and reached for his bag of weed. Wait while I roll one. I cant hear the rest of this unless Im stoned.

     

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    Youre seriously kidding me. Alice froze, joint in mid-air, and exhaled loudly, a plume of smoke settling between her and Bette.

     

    Bette waved one hand in front of her. God, Alice

     

    What? You want a hit?

     

    No. Bette frowned as her eyes began to tear.

     

    You should have some, Alice said. This story might come out easier. She put the joint to her lips and inhaled deeply, closing her eyes as she did.

     

    I doubt it, Bette said, frowning further.

     

    I cant believe you, Bette, I really cant. Alice exhaled..

     

    Bette watched as another long string of smoke descended and hung between her and her friend. What cant you believe exactly?

     

    I cant believe that Ms. Ultra-Confident Super-Self-Protective Alpha Female stopped overnight in Detroit and got it handed to her. Alice laughed disbelievingly. What were you thinking?

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    Comments

    1. I too was wondering what happened to you and your story. I am glad you are back, and look forward to your continuation of this wonderful story. The stories on fan fiction are so much better than the seasons, so thanks for keeping so many of us entertained.

    2. This!! This is not to be parsed, but this is so …. effing fabulous. Thank you for coming back! Season 3 was just horrendous, and I was afraid it had put you off writing. In Season 3, Bette and Tina were Jenny’s thighs, and Ilene turned into a cutter. But that nightmare is over, and you’re back!! Yay. And it’s my birthday — what a lovely present you’ve given all of us. Thank you for This!

    5. This chapter was filled anxiety and i love it. You take us right to the brink and then ..nothing. Great update. Please post again soon. We love this story and have been waiting for more. We still are. Thanks for the post.

    7. well firstly WELCOME BACK…ive really missed this…..and now that you are back….SWEET JESUS WOMAN! you cant just leave us there..lol…though i must admit that was excellent…more soon please…Im glad you didnt abandon this sory…Thanks…

    9. Now that Bette is in LA again,the planes flys both ways Tina can come to LA. They are in love,How strange to meet your soul-mate because of a snow storm. thanks

    10. This Bette and Tina really get to me. Against the backdrop of this rather seedy hotel in the big D, this Bette and Tina ooze remarkable sensitivity, kindness and class in addition to their usual fire power. I almost cried as well…Please post sooner. It’s hard for us when you’re away.

    12. Clapping hands and jumping for joy when I saw that you posted. I love your story, but please don’t make us wait so long for your next chapter. We need all the B&T loving stories after the train reck of season 3. Please post again soon.

    14. I keep wishing for you to come back and finally it happens…YEA!!! I hope you post more because this story is really great and this chapter too short ;)

    20. OMG..How can you just stop there!! You leave us high and dry for like years and then to tease us is just plain cruel..(lol). You must continue! I don’t even compaer this B+T to the ones on T.V!

    24. I was just thinking about this story a day or two ago and was about to PM you and ask where you had been hiding. S3 was killer for B&T fans and I know some authors got fed up and couldn’t find the energy to pour thoughts into a love story. Any chance of sticking around with us for awhile before taking a break? :)

    26. So glad to see you back. Now that season 3 is over, I hope you’ll br inspired to write everyday :). Love you writing, love your story. Thank you.

    28. This storry is one of my favourites and I have been sorely missing your updates! Thanks so much for coming back, I’m so glad you haven’t abandoned this unsentimental and powerful tale. Please don’t make us wait so long again!!! Post soon and bring them together again, and let’s forget our S3-blues…

    30. Yay!! So glad you’re back with your wonderful story. I’ve really missed it. Please post another chapter soon, can’t wait to find out what happens next!

    32. I’m SO happy you’re back. I love this story! This chapter is a change of pace from the rest of the story and yet it works like a charm… almost like I was expecting it – but I wasn’t. I really wasn’t expecting you to bring on the inevitable separation. It was time however. You have some marvelous lines in this chapter – “their joint coping strategy” for one had me almost bowled over in laughter – but I had to stop because I couldn’t wait to read on. Tina’s revelation of “I’m faking it. Just so you know,” was another one. That you had Dean manage to hold his tongue [yes he had to use his hand LOL] but of course wouldn’t allow Alice the same adroitness was well done; a better revelation of Alice’s big mouth characterization than just about anywhere. Thanks so much for coming back.

    33. i have never met anyone who can tease us to the point of desperation(foreplay)…..and then never follows through…your literally killing us!!!!!

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