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Shane Awakes Chapter 5
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Shane and Carmen lay on a blanket in Carmens empty apartment, a half empty wine bottle sat forgotten beside them as they get lost in a deep kiss. Shane smiled to herself, their date had to be one of the longest in history. After they had left the club they had gone for food, and spent hours talking. Shane had never been able to spend this amount of time with anyone without eventually feeling trapped and crowded. She didnt feel that way with Carmen at all.
Carmen deepened the kiss and Shane began to expertly unbutton Carmens blouse, slowly kissing a trail down Carmens neck. Encouraged by a soft moan from Carmen she finished removing the blouse and sat back to look at Carmens golden skin, slowly running a hand across her perfect stomach. Shocked when Carmen halted her hands journey with her own.
Carmen pulled back, trying to catch her breath she summoned all the willpower she had, “Shane, Im sorry, I think we should talk.”
Shane cursed inwardly. The morning-after talk she always took such pains to avoid seemed to be coming the night before, and with it that familiar trapped feeling shed been so happy was absent.
Carmen swallowed, “I just need to know Is this a first date, or an only date?”
Shane ran her fingers through her hair. What the hell was she supposed to say? Shane didnt really know what was happening here, was Carmen asking her for some kind of commitment, already?
Carmen could see the emotions play across Shanes face. Any second now and Shanes walls would be up. Carmen placed her hand on Shanes cheek, “Shane, there really isnt any unspoken second half of that question. I just want to know what youre thinking. If youre open to giving this a chance?”
Shane took a deep breath and forced herself to look in Carmens eyes. Shane didnt see that desperate, clingy look shed seen in so many womens eyes. Carmen just wanted the truth, “Honestly, I dont know what Im doing. I just know that I like you. This is really new to me. I cant stop thinking about you, and I cant seem to get enough of being around you. So, Im open, I mean, Im trying to be.”
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sweet finally shane ina differnt light, i love this fic
Thanks. I love this story.
Hey Teatime, excellent chapter. I was wonder just how long these two would be able to stand keeping their hands off each other. And I’m so happy that they couldn’t wait another minute. I love how Carmen is so upfront with Shane… No playing games with her feelings. She wants to know where she stands with Shane and she’s willing to let her position be known as well. Alice’s midnight call was important to help Shane realise her own feelings for Carmen and the futility of doubting what she’s feeling. I’m enjoying this story… keep it coming.
LOVE this story! It is the main reason I still come to this site! Thanks for keeping your word and not leaving us hanging for too long! Keep it up!
love Love LOVE this story!!
Thanx for the update. They’re so hot together, & Shane is spending the night-YAY!. Great update. Post soon.
great update. post soon. Ü
great update. Carmen is good for Shane, and it’s nice to see Shane opening up. And oh yea.. it was hot lol