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Rules of Engagement Chapter 7
Thursday, 5:20 PM
Carmen was reading through a bridal magazine when she heard the garage door. A minute later, she could hear the door in the kitchen shut.
Sorry, Im late, baby. The last appointment took longer than I thought. Shane gave Carmen a quick kiss before she was off to the bedroom. Im just going to take a quick shower, then we can go. Shane threw over her shoulder
Shane and Carmen were going to the Morales home for dinner. Mercedes had called the day before inviting them over for a family gathering. Carmen had hoped to spend the evening with Shane at home as Shane was leaving in the morning for five days. Although she wanted to spend this last bit of time with Shane, she hadnt seen her mother since her birthday party. Carmen tossed the magazine on the table, and stood. The fabric of her sundress brushed gently against her skin as she walked to the bookshelves that framed the television. Interspersed with the books were pictures of friends and family. Her eyes scanned over the group photo that had been taken after they had moved everything into Shane and Carmens first home together. Moving on to another shelf, was a picture of Carmen, beaming at the camera, at the launch party for Kits album. Next to that picture was Shane at the opening of her salon in LA, glass of champagne in hand and a smirk on her lips. Carmens favorite picture was on the other side of the televsion. It had been taken a five months after Shanes second infidelity at a gathering at
Carmen was so concentrated on the picture, and the amount of love she had seen in Shanes eyes that night, she didnt notice Shane was behind her, until Shane wrapped her arms around her waist. Shane kissed her neck before resting her chin on Carmens shoulder.
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(64 votes, average: 3.36 out of 5)
Incredible chap. Shane definitely has many things going on at once. She & Carmen need to talk about her fears about starting a family. For a minute there, I thought she was cheating, glad she isn’t. Thanx. Post soon.
I was reading again your story in these days and then I wondered if you would continue posting. The story is really great and i would really love to see you update… bye
I really wonder who was it that called Shane…I hope it works out!
wow im loving this story and cant believe you havent continued it yet ! plz plz write more ! x
just come across this story. it is excellent. Are you going to continue it? i hope you do or already have… please say YES!
OMG, WoW, I love this storyy
this is a really good story! I hope you come back with an update.
jus found this…you gotta continue it!!!
This chapter is one of your best! It’s so intense. You really are a gifter writer. I’m left wondering who is caling Shane all the time.. I have to say that I absolutely love how you write Carmen’s point of view. Thanks so much and update soon:)
It’s clear that Shane has matrued significantly, but it seems that she still has some more growing up to do… especially in communicating her feelings with Carmen. Hopefully, their love will give them the confidence to be totally honest with each other. Shane needs to be honest about the phone calls and Carmen needs to express her desire for children. Great update. Looking forward to more Sharmen.
great fiction, it’s my favorite fiction- please do continue.
this story is really amazing. I like it so much. You are a very good writer! You have to post the rest of it soon!!!!!!