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A Night in the D — Chapter 29
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So lets get to the superficial stuff. Deans eyebrows wiggled lasciviously at Tina. How hot is she?
Oh god, she said, laughing, Ridiculously hot. I cant even tell you.
Try.
I cant. Tina sighed. Seriously. Just looking at her makes me wanna lose my mind.
Deans eyes widened. Wow. That is hot.
Right? Tina asked, her eyes widening to match his. No one has ever affected me like that.
Dean looked doubtful. No one? What about that girl Erin you dated for a while? I seem to remember a wanting to rip her clothes off vibe going on back then.
Oh please, Tina said, rolling her eyes. That was during our Ecstasy period, remember? I wanted to rip your clothes off.
Hey! he objected.
Not that youre not sexy, Tina assured. But youre my friend. Wanting to fuck you is not normal for us.
True, Dean said, looking down at his faded cutoff khakis and white t-shirt. I am sexy.
You are. Tina smiled. But Bette redefines sexy, ok? I mean fuckI havent even seen her naked and I cant stop picturing it.
Oh I want to picture it! Dean said, clapping his hands together. You were so wrong not to introduce me.
Tina laughed. I know! We have to get her back here somehow for a visit. Ill get her clothes off this time and then give a full report. She winked at him and he laughed back.
You know, T, planes fly both ways. You and I could go to
Tina looked warily at him. That sounds scary.
What? Seeing her again?
On her turf?
Why not?
I dont know Tina mused over the idea. I definitely want to. I dont know how to make it happen though.
Dean clicked his tongue. Lets see, you buy a plane ticket, drive to the airport
Oh shut up. Im serious.
No, Im serious. Dont make such a big thing out of it. If youre in love with the woman”
Tina spun towards him. Who said I was in love?
Um, I did? Dean frowned.
Dont even go there, dude. I spent 24 hrs with the woman. I dont think its good for my mental health to imagine myself as in love.
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Oh my, my … Oohhh my, myWhere have you been. Haven’t read yet … need to go now! Thx very much.
Come on luvr…post real soon cuz my short term memory is rather…er…short. I’m ready for Tina to be in LA like yesterday.
If Tina knew what Bette’s job was, couldn’t she just look her up? She wouldn’t have to call, but at least she’d know where Bette was. Granted maybe Tina and Dean didn’t think of that since they were stoned, but that’s a pretty lame excuse seeing as they were talking pretty intelligently. Or maybe Bette will come back and say something sweet like, “I left something here…my heart.” Can’t wait for more!
lur: i glad youre back please post soon!its time for tina/dean to visit L.A. lets get this party started with both the drama and the HOT-HOT SEX.
luvr..I am so glad you are posting. Now I’m hoping you post more…very soon. I have missed this one lots
Hmmm… Bette, don’t call, or maybe still struggling on what to say. Let Tina fly to LA. I found Bette is very transparent. I mean, her merits are obvious, her flaws are obvious too. That makes her hot and cute at the same time. While Tina is relatively complicated and not straight-forward. So maybe it’s better if she decides what to do first and makes the move.
backasswords??? you must be from the south???? sounds like somethin i’d say myself……lmao……come on….i want more….
hehehe, you know you drive me crazy, really, crazy…which is exactly where you want me to be…ta da…pls come join me here in frustration land. Love your story, and yes love the pace your setting. As any true storyteller you will go at your own pace..so I will sit and wait for more. thks for this chapter as again I’m on the edge of my seat…permanently…tks
oh please make bette call…i can’t wait…make her call
I think Bette should be the one to push things forward with Tina. Tina has totally put herself out there (a few times already). For Tina to go to L.A. seems a little desperate since Bette just shut her out and flat out rejected her advances. With that said, I love this story and can’t wait for what’s next!!!
Good chapter and please make Bette call her!
Bette will call, she fell in love also. She will remember that she didnt give Tina her number. Maybe she will go back to NY. Post soon thanks
Don’t wait! get the ticket and go find your meat-tag woman! Move your arse now! lol… Love it, please continue.
Most excellent! Can’t wait for Bette’s P.O.V — especially on that final kiss! Thank you!!
Sorry for not commenting before, I seem to have left my brain somewhere else. This is such a great story with so much pain and heartache. Both want each other but Bette for one reason or another is afraid of hurting Tina. Hopefully, Bette calls Tina or Tina figures out how to contact Bette. I like Dean. He seems like a good friend and everyone can use a Dean in their life.
So glad you’re back. Dean’s a really good friend and apparently thinks well while stoned. LOL. I think Bette is going to call…or maybe Alice to surprise Bette. LOL. Please continue.
Your story is one of my favorites and your talent is very clear. Thank you for getting this going again.
i was actually thinking that this tina must be something cool, like an english major, for example. wink. adventureland, anyone?
LG all ihave to say is u dont rite enuff this is a freakin awesome story!!
I know you love teasing us on the way to the happily ever after. I’m enjoying it. Thanks a lot and give us more soon!
eheh tina look under registration.. bette must have left her no. there… duhuh.
Keep on going, you’re doing a great job. Love your story.
Dont`cha just love Dean!!! such a good friend…very cute!! so now all we`re waiting for is Bette to call….and i just know its not going to be straight forward…lol… looking forward to more..Thanks
This is such a cool story. Can’t wait to have ‘A Night in the L” here soon. Thanks!
Thanks for giving us another chapter so soon. I just love your story and can’t wait for another chapter. Please don’t make us wait to long to have Bette and Tina get together again.
DEAN DON’T LET HER WAIT FOR HER TO CALL, GET THE TICKETS AND GO FIND HER NOW…….heck google it (LOL), get the info there, don’t take the romance out of it by asking……..THEN BRING ON THE HOTT HOTT SEX, ATTRACTION, CHEMISTRY ETC!!!!!!!!!!!! DAMN HURRY UP AND POST WILL YA!!!!!!
Oh what an interminable wait this is going to be. Does Tina know her full name? She can always look her up. Thanks for the post.
Love this…more please.
Sigh….2 in one week? Think I died and went to heaven. Delightful as always.
for the love of god make the post longer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!