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Around the corner appeared Candace. Shane muttered under her breath, “What the fuck is she doing here? Did you invite her Bette?”
“No, not that I know of Shane. She is doing the work at the gallery, maybe she just overheard.”
“Man if Tina comes by you are in serious trouble.”
“Excuse me? This is my house. I am not Tina’s partner, remember? She is the one that parks herself in the bed of a man every night. When our daughter is there. So I don’t see how I can be in trouble.”
“Sorry Bette, she just does not like Candace. You know that as well as I do. So why is she here?”
“Hi Candace, how are you?” Bette asked.
“I am sorry to interrupt your evening, but I needed you to look over these plans before next week. I am going out of town. I did not want to wait until next week for you to see them. This way if you want to make changes you can show me.”
“That was very nice, Candace. I am sure they are perfect. You know everyone don’t you?”
“Yes, how are you guys?” Candace asked.
“We are fine. How have you been?” Shane responded.
“Busy. Now this project, I thought I would go out of town before I tackle it. Well I don’t want to interrupt any longer, so I should be going.” The look she gave Bette was one of desperation, as if saying ‘ask me to stay’. This look did not go unnoticed by Shane.
“Why hello. I don’t think I have met you?”
“Thank you
“Oh the infamous carpenter. So what brings you over?”
“I wanted to drop off plans for the gallery for Bette to look at.” Candace said.
“Bette, sweetie, you never told me that you hired a carpenter already. I would have given you the name of my decorator. You loved my bedroom when he was done.”
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I’m with Amanda. Tina wouldn’t show up that early in the morning for casual conversation.
So Tina wants to have her cake and eat it too …so to speak….but Woman…At 7am….im thinking Tina is protesting too much…no excuse for the early mornig intrusion….and none of her busness who Bette spends time with …unless she wants it to be her busness!!!!
What she is saying Tina, is that she wants you and only you. It is obvious that Tina is still in love with Bette or it would not matter who she was sleeping with. Plus she wants to spend the day with Bette and the baby together. Wake up and get back with your woman Tina. Please Post soon and I hope that Tina is a little more inclined towards Bette. Get rid of the dude and his 3rd leg.
Hey, Texas…you’re doing a fine job. Bette just has to put Tina in her place. They both love each other. They are true soulmates…everyone knows that.
I believe that Tina wants Bette back,I wouldn’t not have matter if they were pile up like firewood,Tina would still be unhappy. She can sleep with Henry with the baby in the house,but Bette can’t sleep with anyone with her in the house. Let them work out their problems,I should have said let the writer work out their problem .it her story and I really like it thanks
Either these two women are ignorant or your writing them ignorant. In any case can we stop with the ignorance?
Great so far. Keep it going!
Tina, has no right in questioning Bette. It is Bette’s house bed and couch. Tina needs to realise that she has no claims on Bette’s life as she chose a different path. But as a B&T fan I would love them back together.
If I were Bette, I’d kick Tina out of the house without a single word of explanation. lol
i have a feeling tina wants bette back… why else would she be there on a sunday morning at 7am… everyone is not seeing this through tina right now… if she didn’t want bette back she would be home screwing that dick… all morning and afternoon… well for as long as he can that is… but no she is at bettes at 7 am… so lets let the writer write her story… please continue
I like the way you’ve handled Bette here. She didn’t owe Tina an explanation, but she gave her one and now she’s opening her heart to Tina. Tina is just a hipocrite. She screwed Henry in their bedroom, with Angie in the house while she and Bette were a couple, please and yuck. Tina has no right to barge into Bette’s house or bedroom unannounced. She is a brat.
Great chapter. Tina knows what Bette is saying and why would she show up at 7am if she did not feel the same way. Please let them tell one another how they really feel. Let’s get the show on the road. Thanks for the post.
i like it! have been a long time since your last post and i like it this, i am agree wiht Amanda i think Tina wants Bette back, Tina all the time talk like this: “our bed, our couch” they still thing that this things belongs to her too, i can’t wait for the next and see what happen.
I just start read your story and this is good story and sad at the same time. Damn Candace, Helena and now Tina, they will driving Bette crazy. Ok post soon please, thanks!
Is Tina really that dense?? why does it seem like Bette has to be the one to come running after tina? bette fucks up and she is remorseful…..tina fucks up and she is never confronted about her shit! this is not a slight toward this or any of the fanfic writers. you guys are great. i just wish the shows writers cared as much for these characters as we do! am i asking too much?? AAAARGGGHHH!
sounds like tina is way too jealous, she wants bette i hope…but she has no rights to talk to bette like that, i’m glad bette is keeping it cool
um when tina doesn’t want their child knowing that bette has girlfriends – it’s all gonna get a bit tricky when she has to explain that she has two mothers – i’m not sure about this one… lots of anger.